Text of the petition is perfect. I think there is no need to change it.
This collective appeal wil put more pressure on the CIC than individual ones. They must be aware of the fact that all of us know about their progress through this forum. There is no offence to the privacy policy of immigration even if we share the complete details including e mails, tel numbers, addresses. Most of us not even sharing our names. According to CIC privacy policy only they can voilate the privacy by sharing our details with other individuals.
http://www.cic.gc.ca/english/notices.asp
Language used in the petition is not at all offensive but more effective.
Once again I request the applicants to sign the petition. This is another way to keep pressure on them. If we withdraw thrust they will forget us. People have tried the individual request but all they are trying to pose is that they are too busy in verifying our papers and there is too much volume of work. Depending upon the avaiable resources CHC London can process 200 applications per day easily
asdf111 said:
A well planned and very well drafted letter, addressed to the point and targetted properly. The main point is Pakistanis are facing discrimination. I like the statement that we have given up other options for the sake of Canadian Immigration and we are really tired and frustrated now. This is basically a mercy plea.
Hina Jamal if you are a critic can you propose / draft a better letter. If yes please do so and I and others would appreciate that. We would love to hear your ideas and your way of approaching the Minister. I also agree with last post of pittabread that people are good at criticsm but are not capable of doing the job themselves.
Well done pittabread and keep it up. +1 for you from my side.
You need to improve your english as well madam.
There is a grammar mistake in your writing "I agreed with khalid bhai". It should be "I agree with khalid bhai"