CHC DISGUSTING,,Make decisions on the basis of VO MOOD not qualifications

[hardeep bal]

yup so is MBBS but still you have to go to different schools to learn either of them. Do you have any relevant experience of nursing, if not, then i guess thats the main reason for refusal. get some experience, complete a diploma on nursing and then apply

dear,, why first i go to do diploma in nursing if someone got their visas with similar qualifications,,, and it is too late for study if i gonna collect diplomas and experience ,,,,

 

[hardeep bal]

If you know why you've been rejected, and if it is random and there is nothing you can do about it, why are we on the 7th page of a thread discussing your rejection?

dear,,
we are not only discuss about my refusal,,it s about everyone that discuss the question-
how cic can refuse genuine applications??? ,,this thread all about these factors,,, how they can make decisions on the basis of mood not on qualifications,,,

i just wanna help all of those who face refusal with same condition,,,, it is not only about me ,,,today it happens with me ,,tomorrow it may happen with other student,,,

so its all about that,,,my friend

 

[on-hold]

dear,,
we are not only discuss about my refusal,,it s about everyone that discuss the question-
how cic can refuse genuine applications??? ,,this thread all about these factors,,, how they can make decisions on the basis of mood not on qualifications,,,

i just wanna help all of those who face refusal with same condition,,,, it is not only about me ,,,today it happens with me ,,tomorrow it may happen with other student,,,

so its all about that,,,my friend

You're the only person saying this -- other people are saying that you've applied with low English scores to a program that makes no sense,and that this is why CIC has refused your application. ALL applications are genuine, because no one applies without being admitted to a school -- but not all applicants will get study permits. The ones who do, receive them because of a combination of factors that include finances, trustworthiness, and SOP. The SOP has to make sense. Explain here why your SOP makes sense.

 

[ola1974]

Pls wish hardeep success & let leave him alone. We do need to flog this case too much. He has re-applied, if I am right, so let wish him good luck this time around.

 

[on-hold]

You're the only person saying this -- other people are saying that you've applied with low English scores to a program that makes no sense,and that this is why CIC has refused your application. ALL applications are genuine, because no one applies without being admitted to a school -- but not all applicants will get study permits. The ones who do, receive them because of a combination of factors that include finances, trustworthiness, and SOP. The SOP has to make sense. Explain here why your SOP makes sense.

I'm not criticizing him here, and I do wish him success -- but I'm a former teacher, and if there is one thing I understand, it is that no one can explain anything that they don't understand themselves. For him to communicate to CIC why his proposed course of study makes sense -- i.e. write an SOP -- he needs to understand it himself. I'm not sure that he does, because he strongly resists explaining why; and if he can explain it, that will be a valuable help to him in re-applying.

 

[mead]

dear,,
we are not only discuss about my refusal,,it s about everyone that discuss the question-
how cic can refuse genuine applications??? ,,this thread all about these factors,,, how they can make decisions on the basis of mood not on qualifications,,,

i just wanna help all of those who face refusal with same condition,,,, it is not only about me ,,,today it happens with me ,,tomorrow it may happen with other student,,,

so its all about that,,,my friend

what r your qualifications? 72% in 12th which is mediocre at best...avg people get 80% and above now a days.....u have poor IELTS score..u dont have any work experience. I know u dont want to hear this as ur hurt by the decision but rather than pointing fingers u can get right back up and take ur IELTS again and prepare ur application again. U have been rejected u cant do anything about that now but what u can do now is take IELTS again....if u get a better score its not going to hurt ur case right?

 

[Josh21]

The future job prospects of a Canadian ECE in India is questionable at best.

You might think that changing programs now will make them doubt your sincerity but if you take a year off and apply next year with a different program and a SOP you actually believe in then you might actually get the visa.

Honestly though, your problem is that you cant explain why you want to pursue this course and how it will possibly help you when you come back to India. Literally anything which sounds reasonable would work.

Look at all the people going for 1 year business courses claiming that when they come back to India, they're going to make millions.
Is it going to happen? Probably Not.
Is is reasonable to assume the possibility exists? Yes.

 

[meagan99]

22 lokan ne dheek likhya, jidd na kar 22, immigration wale agent tah os course di salah dinde jinha vicho ohna nu vadd profit milda as comission from uni.

baki tere score average haige aa, tu ece kyon laina ?? ece karke canada vich ki karega ?? paise vi lagan ge teh kamai vi nahi vadd cho?? 22 tu nursing/pharmacist wale pase kyon ni dekhda ?? je tu nursing ja pharmacist banega tah waad cho change note vi kamayenga, par padai man la ke karni pau.

 

[hardeep bal]

Thank you very much for your valuable replies members.......
now i would like to share my statement of purpose which i included in my study permit application......
i think i mentioned all the question related to my course.... now what you say where i was wrong,,,,,,,,,,,,,Comments PLEASE
Respected Visa Officer,,,,

i am hardeep singh born on 14 may 1995. i m resident of punjab india. i belong to nuclear family ................................................all about personal detail.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,, i have done my matriculation from punjab school education board and scored 63% and completed my senior secondarywith 72% marks in medical stream,i have scored overall 6 bands in ielts,,
now i have apploed my application in university of fraser valley in abbotsford ,british columbia.My program is early childhood certificate program.In this s.o.p i would like to explain my interest in global education.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
WHY I CHOOSE THIS COURSE
Children are loveliest creation of god they blessed with are blessed with the innocence.children have the power to change peoplethey bring the new hope and happiness in everyone life.i know you might be wondering being a boy i why i am pursuing my career inthe childhood program,the reason is that now a days families are going to nuclear with both parents they are notable to give proper time to their children due to which they did not get proper love,care,and affection.it is very sad thing that the generation which s goinf to build the future nation is not given the attention,i had very soft side for the children and the thing disturbers me a lot.moreover,i belive that girls and boys are equal if girls can do mechanical engineering why can;t boy i can become early childhood expert i love the freshness,the enthusiam and the curiosity of the children, despite,my interest in the program i choose this course because it is also related to my previous studies as i had done mt 12th in medical stream and i have good communication skills,ECE is specially design for children,i really like children so i declared to graduate as the early childhood specialities.i want to see how they interact with other and the way they learn.they never stop learning and doing at that age,and always bring new challenges.In my point of view it is really wonderful experience to work and share my knowledge with children,this field can a fun wayto earn a living,,,,,,,
Respected Sir,Mam i wanted to inform you that i had scored 5 bands in writing in IELTS exam.sp to improve my writing skills and polish more my english language.i had taken the foundation courrse from the university in which my english lesson are given thus,i will help in omproving my english which they will be very beneficial for me.
WHY UNIVERSITY OF FRASER VALLEY IN CANADA ..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.
COURSE DESCRIPTION-CONTENTS,,,,,,,
SCOPE OF THIS COURSE,,,,,,,
JOB OPPORTUNITIES AFTER DOING THIS COURSE,,
THere are wide range of jobs after completing this course in india, As soon as possible i will comeback to india as i am only son in my family i have responsibiltyto took care my fammily, i am really attached to my mother and fatherso i will come back to india and live with my parent.after gaining international certificatei will start my own clinic childcare centre setup like play way school,day care centre,recreation centre,activity club etc,,,Also i can get job as a assistant teacher in recreation departments,counselor and many other private possibilities,Honestly,there are no such clinics and authorities for treatment of those children who cannot afford education and sufficient health care from their parents due to poverty and less time,i will give attention and share my knowledge with these kinds of children in my clinic,
Thanks And Regards
Hardeep Singh..

 

[hardeep bal]

what r your qualifications? 72% in 12th which is mediocre at best...avg people get 80% and above now a days.....u have poor IELTS score..u dont have any work experience. I know u dont want to hear this as ur hurt by the decision but rather than pointing fingers u can get right back up and take ur IELTS again and prepare ur application again. U have been rejected u cant do anything about that now but what u can do now is take IELTS again....if u get a better score its not going to hurt ur case right?

Thank you dear mead..
i would like to share my univerity requirement link with you,,,
( placement at level 80 of UFV ESL program or completion of:
• ESL WG74 and R70 or articulated equivalent with a minimum GPA 2.33 or higher or TOEFL 550 (213 CBT/79 iBT) or IELTS 6 (see Note) or CanTest 4.5 or CAEL 60 or LPI essay score 25 (level 4) or MELAB 80 or CPT 41.
Note: Placement into the Foundation program based on IELTS includes consideration of band scores.)
Link--http://www.ufv.ca/calendar/winter-summer-2014/ProgramsM-P/OPEN_FOUNDATIONS.htm

Ielts Is not matter... similar ielts score got visas stamped on their PP... From Same CIC

 

[hardeep bal]

22 lokan ne dheek likhya, jidd na kar 22, immigration wale agent tah os course di salah dinde jinha vicho ohna nu vadd profit milda as comission from uni.

baki tere score average haige aa, tu ece kyon laina ?? ece karke canada vich ki karega ?? paise vi lagan ge teh kamai vi nahi vadd cho?? 22 tu nursing/pharmacist wale pase kyon ni dekhda ?? je tu nursing ja pharmacist banega tah waad cho change note vi kamayenga, par padai man la ke karni pau.

thank you megan99

veere ,, yar mera refuse keeta koi chakar naii, me next time try karuluga ,, but question ta ehe aa yar same profile walia nu oh visas dai jande dukh taa es gall daa..
ohna lai qualification,, koi matter nai kardi
visa naa dena jaa dena just ouna de mood te depend karda,, M i right ??

 

[joshua96]

Proof read your SOP, Check for grammatical errors. Make the statement more formal. And don't compare anyone in the SOP like girls studying mechanical. This would turn down the officer. Use a full stop after the sentence and not a comma. All these small details matter. Ask someone to restructure the sop for you.

 

[on-hold]

Yes, it's not a bad SOP -- I didn't realize that your background was only high school. Stop talking about philosophy and modern era girls and boys, and expand the part about how you want to open a day care or kindergarten. Talk about your background being in medical which is working with people, but you find yourself more interested in teaching and running a business like this. The first part is not so good -- you sound like someone explaining why it makes sense that you like ECE, not someone who actually likes ECE. The latter part is OK, though. The VO doesn't want to hear about your love (too much) they want to see that what you are going to study makes sense for a young man who has to plan for a future. Improve your English and find some place where you can get some preliminary experience in this kind of business and your application will be much stronger.

Good for you for putting it up, not everyone can accept criticism on a public forum. Cheers, good luck.

 

[hardeep bal]

Dear Joshua,,, these are common mistakes i just do there,,not in my original s.o.p
my sop prepared by MA English counceler ..so its not matter ,,of structure

 

[hardeep bal]

Yes, it's not a bad SOP -- I didn't realize that your background was only high school. Stop talking about philosophy and modern era girls and boys, and expand the part about how you want to open a day care or kindergarten. Talk about your background being in medical which is working with people, but you find yourself more interested in teaching and running a business like this. The first part is not so good -- you sound like someone explaining why it makes sense that you like ECE, not someone who actually likes ECE. The latter part is OK, though. The VO doesn't want to hear about your love (too much) they want to see that what you are going to study makes sense for a young man who has to plan for a future. Improve your English and find some place where you can get some preliminary experience in this kind of business and your application will be much stronger.

Good for you for putting it up, not everyone can accept criticism on a public forum. Cheers, good luck.

dear on hold,,i am really thankful to you for this,,,

now just tell me what should i do,,
at a present im waiting from my university response,,if they gonna help me regarding my case then i willre-apply if not then i m not,,

what you think ,,should i try for next intake and then in which course and what i need to improve ,,,,
i just got refusal because that one reason ,,so financial and home ties are okey?? Am i right