CHC DISGUSTING,,Make decisions on the basis of VO MOOD not qualifications

[scylla]

Now again i have question in my mind,,
how those people got their visas with similar profiles.... Belive me ,,,same academic background ,same ielts score and same course,,,what's your opinion about it??

One reason could be your SOP. The SOP is your chance to explain issues such as low IELTS scores and prove you are a genuine student with no plans on remaining in Canada long term. Unfortunately your SOP was very poorly written.

 

[nameless]

Decisions are not made according to VO moods. Mood is a very minute factor when refusing or approving your application. Your documents and supporting documents must be in order and must clearly explain all the points listed on CHC check lists specific to your country.

 

[joshua96]

Go on google, search for sample SOP, get an idea and then start writing on your own and then share it on the forum, someone will proof read it for you then you are good to go

Dont use the same sentences as the sample SOP also

Making an SOP will just take 1-2 hours tops. Maybe you can apply again for september intake, if you think IELTS is not the reason

 

[hardeep bal]

Members,, presently,,i am waiting of my university mail,,,response

and lets see,,what will my consultant do about my case,,

 

[sidhu_anwar]

I'll try to point of some of the faults in your SOP; change them and make your SOP more professional with no grammatical mistakes.

1. No need to tell VO importance of children/ gender equality.
2. You brought up that you are a boy and will find employment in India because "many families will be nuclear families" This is not at all a good proof that you'll get employed in India.
3. You said you want / love to see how children interact with each other -> you can see that in a public garden too! Don't put too much of unnecessary information in your SOP.
4. I think you also said children bring new challenges -> I don't know why that line is in your SOP
5. You said you'll find private possibilities -> it should be: you'll find many employment opportunities in private sector.
6. Then at the end you possibly mixed up your plan of starting your own play school with that of running an NGO for poor children.

Good points in your SOP:
1. You're the only son of your parents so there are more chances that you'll come Back to look after them.
2. Plans of setting up your own play school.
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Please don't rely on your teacher to write SOP. He / she isn't you so they can't fully understand your case nor they have any need to understand it. SOP is a chance given to you to tell VO more about the things related to your application. You may include:
a ) Why you couldn't score good in IELTS;
b ) Why you had a year's gap;
c ) sudden change in your choice ( ECE after medical stream ) don't just write how great children are or how you love them. Back up your claim that you like educating children. You may write that you volunteer to teach children on teacher's day etc.
d ) tell your teacher or writer of SOP to not add too much of philosophical insight regarding children in SOP.

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Don't think we're criticizing you or your intentions. Everyone has made mistakes. Let me tell you something, this forum will help you more than the lousy consultants. People here are nice and ready to help for FREE! Write your SOP, post it here or message me. I'll personally guide you if I think it needs to be adjusted.

 

[joshua96]

How many times you wrote IELTS? as only the latest score is valid. The first IELTS score becomes invalid immediately after you write a retest. If you attached the first IELTS report, the report will show invalid to the VO

 

[hardeep bal]

I'll try to point of some of the faults in your SOP; change them and make your SOP more professional with no grammatical mistakes.

1. No need to tell VO importance of children/ gender equality.
2. You brought up that you are a boy and will find employment in India because "many families will be nuclear families" This is not at all a good proof that you'll get employed in India.
3. You said you want / love to see how children interact with each other -> you can see that in a public garden too! Don't put too much of unnecessary information in your SOP.
4. I think you also said children bring new challenges -> I don't know why that line is in your SOP
5. You said you'll find private possibilities -> it should be: you'll find many employment opportunities in private sector.
6. Then at the end you possibly mixed up your plan of starting your own play school with that of running an NGO for poor children.

Good points in your SOP:
1. You're the only son of your parents so there are more chances that you'll come Back to look after them.
2. Plans of setting up your own play school.
---------- xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx-----------

Please don't rely on your teacher to write SOP. He / she isn't you so they can't fully understand your case nor they have any need to understand it. SOP is a chance given to you to tell VO more about the things related to your application. You may include:
a ) Why you couldn't score good in IELTS;
b ) Why you had a year's gap;
c ) sudden change in your choice ( ECE after medical stream ) don't just write how great children are or how you love them. Back up your claim that you like educating children. You may write that you volunteer to teach children on teacher's day etc.
d ) tell your teacher or writer of SOP to not add too much of philosophical insight regarding children in SOP.

xxxxxxxxx-----------------xxxxxxxxxxx

Don't think we're criticizing you or your intentions. Everyone has made mistakes. Let me tell you something, this forum will help you more than the lousy consultants. People here are nice and ready to help for FREE! Write your SOP, post it here or message me. I'll personally guide you if I think it needs to be adjusted.

thank you very much sidhu Anwar, i will include these factors in my next s.o.p .. your replies are really valuable that's why i gonna give you good rating,,,,

 

[hardeep bal]

How many times you wrote IELTS? as only the latest score is valid. The first IELTS score becomes invalid immediately after you write a retest. If you attached the first IELTS report, the report will show invalid to the VO

how ?? Vo know about our ielts weather it is our ist exam or second??
please clarify it..

 

[karan sandhu]

bheek = alms
bentee = beg

Thank for the correction veere...vocabulary problem

 

[joshua96]

VO office check your IELTS registration number with British council or IDP, its a standard procedure. They can check it online itself. Only the latest test is valid, they say that when you apply for the second IELTS itself.

 

[J5M]

Hi,

How many times you wrote IELTS? as only the latest score is valid. The first IELTS score becomes invalid immediately after you write a retest. If you attached the first IELTS report, the report will show invalid to the VO

New score won't make previous one invalid, valid for 2 years. You decide which TRF number you want to submit.

 

[hardeep bal]

Hi,



New score won't make previous one invalid, valid for 2 years. You decide which TRF number you want to submit.

i think you r right,,bro

 

[meagan99]

Thank you very much for your valuable replies members.......
now i would like to share my statement of purpose which i included in my study permit application......
i think i mentioned all the question related to my course.... now what you say where i was wrong,,,,,,,,,,,,,Comments PLEASE
Respected Visa Officer,,,,

i am hardeep singh born on 14 may 1995. i m resident of punjab india. i belong to nuclear family ................................................all about personal detail.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,, i have done my matriculation from punjab school education board and scored 63% and completed my senior secondarywith 72% marks in medical stream,i have scored overall 6 bands in ielts,,
now i have apploed my application in university of fraser valley in abbotsford ,british columbia.My program is early childhood certificate program.In this s.o.p i would like to explain my interest in global education.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
WHY I CHOOSE THIS COURSE
Children are loveliest creation of god they blessed with are blessed with the innocence.children have the power to change peoplethey bring the new hope and happiness in everyone life.i know you might be wondering being a boy i why i am pursuing my career inthe childhood program,the reason is that now a days families are going to nuclear with both parents they are notable to give proper time to their children due to which they did not get proper love,care,and affection.it is very sad thing that the generation which s goinf to build the future nation is not given the attention,i had very soft side for the children and the thing disturbers me a lot.moreover,i belive that girls and boys are equal if girls can do mechanical engineering why can;t boy i can become early childhood expert i love the freshness,the enthusiam and the curiosity of the children, despite,my interest in the program i choose this course because it is also related to my previous studies as i had done mt 12th in medical stream and i have good communication skills,ECE is specially design for children,i really like children so i declared to graduate as the early childhood specialities.i want to see how they interact with other and the way they learn.they never stop learning and doing at that age,and always bring new challenges.In my point of view it is really wonderful experience to work and share my knowledge with children,this field can a fun wayto earn a living,,,,,,,
Respected Sir,Mam i wanted to inform you that i had scored 5 bands in writing in IELTS exam.sp to improve my writing skills and polish more my english language.i had taken the foundation courrse from the university in which my english lesson are given thus,i will help in omproving my english which they will be very beneficial for me.
WHY UNIVERSITY OF FRASER VALLEY IN CANADA ..,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.
COURSE DESCRIPTION-CONTENTS,,,,,,,
SCOPE OF THIS COURSE,,,,,,,
JOB OPPORTUNITIES AFTER DOING THIS COURSE,,
THere are wide range of jobs after completing this course in india, As soon as possible i will comeback to india as i am only son in my family i have responsibiltyto took care my fammily, i am really attached to my mother and fatherso i will come back to india and live with my parent.after gaining international certificatei will start my own clinic childcare centre setup like play way school,day care centre,recreation centre,activity club etc,,,Also i can get job as a assistant teacher in recreation departments,counselor and many other private possibilities,Honestly,there are no such clinics and authorities for treatment of those children who cannot afford education and sufficient health care from their parents due to poverty and less time,i will give attention and share my knowledge with these kinds of children in my clinic,
Thanks And Regards
Hardeep Singh..

22 wali fuddu SOP likhi aa tere agent ne. sale de thapar maarna si SOP padh ke. oh bahut fuddu banda tera agent, yar tu 1 august toh pehla visa apply karla navi SOP naal forum te discuss kar ke, tera vi visa lagg ju.

kayi war consultant nave bande nu application karni de dinde aa, fer rejection tah auni aa. vaise tah SOP vagaira sari aap likhni hundi aa. par je tu punjab board ch padheya ja english ghat aundi aa, tah koi waddi gal nahi, sare goreyan nu punjabi nahi aundi. tu aap SOP bana te forum te and mere mere message te bhej de, tainu vdia cheez bana ke devange par je tu rejection te he royi gaya tan fer kuch nahi ho sakda.

fer ki je dujeya nu visa mil gaya early education wale course naal, ohna di aavdi kismat aa, bura nahi manaida. te naale kade ain ni mehsoos kardida vi bura hoyeya, kade kade apni vi dhill hundi aa.

 

[karan sandhu]

22 wali fuddu SOP likhi aa tere agent ne. sale de thapar maarna si SOP padh ke. oh bahut fuddu banda tera agent, yar tu 1 august toh pehla visa apply karla navi SOP naal forum te discuss kar ke, tera vi visa lagg ju.

kayi war consultant nave bande nu application karni de dinde aa, fer rejection tah auni aa. vaise tah SOP vagaira sari aap likhni hundi aa. par je tu punjab board ch padheya ja english ghat aundi aa, tah koi waddi gal nahi, sare goreyan nu punjabi nahi aundi. tu aap SOP bana te forum te and mere mere message te bhej de, tainu vdia cheez bana ke devange par je tu rejection te he royi gaya tan fer kuch nahi ho sakda.

fer ki je dujeya nu visa mil gaya early education wale course naal, ohna di aavdi kismat aa, bura nahi manaida. te naale kade ain ni mehsoos kardida vi bura hoyeya, kade kade apni vi dhill hundi aa.

Right veere....naale bhavnoor Bedi(eda consultant)hai moneymaker osnu sirf students attract aunda hai....je eh ahi profile college vich apply krda...visa for sure si naale sop vi bilkul 3rd class..

 

[hardeep bal]

dhanwaad megan veere boht......... hun je je course change karu taa meria intentions daa chakkr taani pauga,, i mean to say,,
should i apply again in same course ?
What about Ielts ??