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Enoch singapore

Star Member
Jun 9, 2014
58
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hardeep

kuch v change karan di load nahi jiven hai ohve hi try kar bus sop nu thik kar pta nahi keho je dangar rakhne ne pyramid waaleya ne 4 words english de nahi aunde te jinnu v cal karo uthe saare kehndiyan ki as a manager haan me ure ...jiven mera paala paya c ki c aarti /arpita naal. sire de... chadh ki kha.....

dekh veer vese tan mera visa v reject hoya kyo ki me singapore study te aaya aur ithe hi changi company ch kam karda te achi post te tan una ne ties piche reject kite meri file aur apne jagah sahi v ne oh CIC VALE...BUT UNA NE MERI CAIPS NOTE TE PURA DESCRIBE KITA VA KI APPLICANT NE APNE PREVIOUS REASONS DE EK EK CHIZ DECLARED KITI AE...hun me sure haan iss baar visa auga mera. but chal tab tak tera bhala kariye........
SO meri ek vari rejection to baad me sop letter format ch banai c .so te refrence lai likh reha ure edit kardi meri details apni details naal.

here it is

To

The Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission
Chandigarh

Subject: Explanation for the Visa refusal on File Application No---- &
UCI NO: ----

Respected Sir/Madam

I am providing a brief about me named----- having passport no.----- and I have applied visa application under Study Visa twice before this application but rejection on both the occasion for different reasons. First time I applied from India in August 2013 and next time from Singapore in January 2014 and got the same result but promising thing was that my previous application concerns did not pointed out by the Visa authority as reason for visa rejection?

So looking forward again I am applying under the same program and sites justification of concerns raise by the authority in previous attempt and hope to get Visa this time.

Explanation: For the following concerns arise by the embassy when applied last time.

I applied first time under student partnership program from India in 2013 and got rejected on financial ground. Next time I applied from Singapore under general category and justify the previous concerns of authority and they get convince with my reasons as mentioned in Caips Notes provided by them
(GCMS note attached), but rejected application on following concerns which I am trying to justify with evidences. I hope this time authority will be fully convince and facilitates me to study in their country.


1. Looking for work in India information is lacking: ENU CHANGE KARLI TE MENTION KARDI KI TERE VAPAS AUN TO Baad tenu changi job india ch milni

I am genuine student who is looking forward to build his career in Hospitality and Management. I went to Singapore as I didn’t find any promising institute at my location in Chandigarh (India) but there are very few institutes available very far from my location in India. So I make my mind rather than pursuing course of Hospitality and Management in India, it’s better to have it from abroad, and Singapore comes bit handy in terms of fees, culture and social environment and parents too convinced with this idea. Now to again move in the same direction, looking for higher studies in Hospitality and Management from some better institute which have their recognition over worldwide and Canada stood first among various countries on my listing. (Proof attached – Singapore college letter for genuineness)

It will be a golden opportunity for me to be work at higher position in India with the present company or some other reputed company. Regarding that I requested my company officials to give me post in India as I want to serve my mother land. But for that they need post graduate qualifications degree or diploma in management related to service sector from a well reputated colleges or university. If I manage it from some good college or university from abroad than I will get the chance to work in my own country with the same employer, if I wish to approach them again for work in future they will have me job. Otherwise this will helps me to get good job in MNC and recognized company in India. (Experience letter from company indicates that they will employ me again if I approach them. This letter also depicts that company has their base in India other than Singapore.)


2. Don’t have sufficient ties to India or Singapore for return after studies-

a. Family Member status: I have very strong ties to my country, my whole family including brothers residing in India with good job and perks. My brother working in Chandigarh (India) as a senior lecturer in Government College with descent pay as well as my sister in law also working in central government bank. (Proof attached marriage certificate)

b. Parent Status and background: My father was retired from Indian air force from the post of sergeant and holding a descent permanent pension and other benefits from government of India (proof attached pension order certificate from govt of India with family photo).So we as a family have descent status and good social circle in India which always attracts me to get back to India.

c. Parental Property: My parents have their own property and to look after that I have to get back to India. They are completely independent and my mother is landlord she have good income from tenants (notarized property papers attached and affidavit of rent agreement attached for period of 2014-2015).
d. My own property: Even recently I have bought my own property in Chandigarh (India) with the help of parents. (Notarized property papers attached) to look after that I have to get back to India after getting education from abroad.
e. Parents Health: My Parents are getting older day by day and their health is degrading as they are patient of heart problem and diabetic patient (proof attached doctor letter & parents declaration about their health). So it’s my morale responsibility to be with them in these days but to have descent earning with me to sustain my life and family.

f. Other Assets Own by Me and Parents: To provide life care to me for my future parents have taken few life insurance policies under my name and after maturity its good asset for me to look after that I have to get back to India (Policy papers attached ).

g. Current Employer Provides Job in India: As far as my current employer is concerns they also want me to pursue higher studies as they see great potential in me to excel in my career. They always consider me as an asset for the company and want me to get back at higher profile in the company after having postgraduate diploma in management. (Company experience letter mentioning the assurance from the employer to have me job at the higher profile in the company if I wish them to join again).

h. Strong social circle in India: I personally have very strong ties in India and most of my friends are working in government jobs in India. So after getting better education and some job experience from abroad I would like to settle in India only as that will help me to stand equivalent to them and feel myself comfortable in their circle.

i. My educational background: I am very descent and bright student from pre-nursery to till now. I did all my education from Chandigarh (India) and diploma in hospitality in Singapore. Throughout my career I maintained first division and would like to proceed to upgrade my education and that too from abroad only as my previous diploma is from abroad i.e from Singapore. After the diploma in hospitality management I did job as Market and Research Analyst in service sector and there as well I have maintained my descent performance. (proof attached Complete CV And testimonial from Singapore college),(proof attached character certificate from college and school)

j. Family Educational background: I belong to a family of good Educational background. My Father has bachelors degree from Punjab university and My elder brother is pursuing M.E (CSE) and younger brother is doing BE (Electrical) both from the same university among we 3 brothers. My Sister in Law is also having Masters Degree in IT from reputed university. So to maintain the status of family in education front I need to have good education from abroad on those parameter Canada suits the best. (Proof attached complete family photograph all residing in india with their educational certificates).

k. Genuine Student: My Intention to go to Canada is crystal which is just to study. If I have other intensions then I would not be leaving such a nice and peaceful country Singapore, here I can work as long as I want because company really required me in Singapore or India. Here I am working as a analyst from past 2 years, but till so far i did not get any respective increment, that can be easily visible from my salary still as I am getting just 5k SGD only , where my colleagues because of higher education are earning more than 8k SGD per month. It guilt me as I am capable of working at higher positions but without post graduate qualifications, I am not eligible to apply for any higher post in my company.

Education is a back bone of every successful man. I am a genuine student that can be easily visible from my academics as I have maintained first division in every qualification that I have mentioned here in my application.

Don’t thrash my dreams and help me to achieve my goal which indeed feels my parents proud.
For this I will never forget Canada that stand with my dreams and aim’s and gave me chance to achieve that.

3 Many programs provided by local institution or why preferred canada:

I have completed my basic education and graduation in BSc from India. Then I came here in Singapore to chase my dream to work in hospitality field as Singapore is the best country in the world for hospitality programs.

In India, programs related to hospitality management are definitely available but those programs did not have global exposure.

Even when I wanted to start my career in hospitality prior to choose Singapore as a destination, I had checked few universities and colleges that provide courses in hospitality management in southern and eastern part of India like Mumbai, Hyderabad or Bangalore, but those universities are very far away from my home town in north India. So if I have to stay away from family and home then it would be better to get international education rather than getting education in India. So for my masters I would like to have international education in hospitality management because in India international education from developed countries is highly preferred. So that’s why my educated parents suggest me to go Singapore for hospitality management and that had changed my life completely. So now this time my boss suggests me to go for higher studies either from Canada or Australia to get a job in India. So from their sincere suggestion I conclude to have education from Canada, which is best suited to me from safety as well as quality of education on very nominal price as compared to Australia.
I have been a well behaved and obedient student during my stay as a student in Singapore.(Proof attached from college and present visa )

Intensions : if i am able to secure visa then my intensions is only to get post graduate qualification along with internship from reputed colleges in Canada. During my internship i am very happy to serve Canada with my skills and knowledge and then after getting experience from Canada. I would like to serve my mother land as same i have done in Singapore. Because india is still developed very slowly and education is a base of every developed nation. So at the end i would like to contribute all my skills and knowledge from Singapore and Canada to my country to be a complete developed nation.

4-Why do same the program in Canada at higher cost-

In Singapore I did my education in hospitality field from basics of management. The course I had completed in Singapore from Bradford rex college of hospitality management is a foundation diploma course of one year in which I had studied only six months of basics and did six months on job training.
So the program I have taken for January intake 2015 is completely different from what I did before in Singapore.
I have got admission in University of British columbia of hospitality management for 2015 under post graduate degree in hospitality management, so this program is the higher level in hospitality studies which prepares international graduates for an exciting career in the field of hospitality management. This helps student to develop the specialized skills, industry specific knowledge and customer service-based abilities required to start or further their careers in the food and beverage or accommodations sector of the tourism industry. This course is quite costlier in Singapore and other countries as compared with course in Canadian colleges or universities.

Ede baad apne program bare describe karde pura kiven related hai teri previous studys to...
college di course di heading naal kari





Academic Qualification & Achievements:

1. Diploma Certificate in Food and Beverages-69%(Grade C) from Singapore
2. Bachelor of Science (Panjab University)-60% From India
3. 12th (CBSE)- 62.6% from India
4. 10th (CBSE)- 62.8% from India
5. IELTS- 6.0 (overall)from India




Level of Establishment:
1. Own property. Bare likh de

Educational Opportunities Available in Canada
1. Canadian tuition fees are among the lowest of English-speaking countries.
2. Internationally recognized degrees.
3. Possibility to get worldwide recognised qualification in 2 years in Canada.
4. A safe, stable country.
5. A multicultural country.

This Application is different from the Previous Application

1. Explained about my family
2. More finances are shown (proof attached)
3. Source of Income
4. Explained future plans & the reason of choosing the course




SUBMISSION OF REPORT( ITHE DETAILS BHARDE )

INTRODUCTION NAME
DOB
Passport Number
Address
Telephone
Father Name
Mother Name

INTENDED STUDY College Name
Address
Course
Level of study
Duration

ACADEMIC
QUALIFICATION Level of Study Graduate (BSc.)
Stream General
Board Panjab University
Year of Passing 2010

IELTS PROFICIENCY Test IELTS
Test Date 06-06-2013
Bands 6 BANDS








FINANCIAL SUMMARY (ITHE PESE BHARDE KEDE KEDE BANKS TO TU KI KI FINANCES SHOW KAR REHA

SAVINGS FINANCIAL INSTITUTION ACCOUNT HOLDER A/C NUMBER AMOUNT (CAD)
1CAD = 58.7INR
=1.19 SGD AMOUNT (INR)
DBS, Singapore
State bank of Patiala, Sector-26, Chd.
Union Bank of India, Sector-7, Chd
State Bank of Patiala, sector-26, Chd
State Bank of India, 3brd, Chd
Allahabad Bank, Sector-17, Chd













FAMILY'S SOURCE INCOME REGULAR INCOME 1. NAME Dad name baki details dad di income te related stuff
RELATION TO APPLICANT Father
OCCUPATION
AMOUNT (CAD)
AMOUNT (INR)
2. NAME Mother name and related stuff
RELATION TO APPLICANT Mother
OCCUPATION
AMOUNT (CAD)
AMOUNT (INR)
3. NAME Brother/sister related stuff those who supporting you financially
RELATION TO APPLICANT Brother
OCCUPATION Lecturer (Govt. Job)
AMOUNT (CAD) $ 9114.48 CAD approx.
AMOUNT (INR) Rs. 5,35,020/-


SUMMARY

• enoch has $ 10000.00 CAD (after conversion from SGD to CAD) in DBS bank, Singapore, and this fund will be used while stay in Canada.
• Father ...........is an .......owho earns Rs. 1,35,444/-($ 2307.40 CAD approx)annually and have fixed deposit in various bank worth Rs.8,35,000/- ($ 14224.87 CAD)(proof attached)
• Mother ....is a housewife and has earning Rs. 1,44,000/-($ 2453.15 CAD) from rent(proof attached).
• Brother Mr. Bro/sis annual income of Rs. 5,35,020/-($ 9114.48 CAD) and has fixed deposit in various bank worth Rs.4,54,000($7734.24 CAD)(proof attached).
• Having own home of 2000 sq. ft. at House No: 32, chd, India costing Rs. 43,00,000/- Approx.
• Family ch jina kolo v koi v property hai ure mentioned karde value naal
• Total amount shown through all sources is Rs. 84,29,750/- ($ 143607.32 CAD or 170892.71 SGD ) which exclude the gold assets worth Rs.6,00,000/-($10221.46 CAD or 12163.53 SGD) and the family gross annual income is Rs.8,14,464/-($ 13875.02 CAD or 16511.27 SGD).
• So in conclusion, I have sufficient money to support myself financially during my stay in Canada.
 

hardeep bal

Hero Member
May 5, 2014
815
46
punjab india
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Pre-Assessed..
Yes
File Transfer...
27-10-2016
Med's Request
UpFront
Med's Done....
Yes
Passport Req..
UpFront
VISA ISSUED...
8-11-2016
LANDED..........
soon
Thank youuu very veryyy veryyyy much veeree,,, tuci enni mehnat keeti mennu smjaun laii,,,now ,,,tuhada visa es waari definately laggu its my pray for you,,,
tuci dsso tuci pehlan v apdi file ch s.o.p lagai c??
Hun veere me ehi course wich again apply Kara jaa fer badal dewaa???
ielts score mera 6 bands one module 5 aa eh ok aa jaa fer badal dewaa eh v???
 

Enoch singapore

Star Member
Jun 9, 2014
58
1
hardeep

menu pata hai pra hun mera visa rab lauga jan intake ch kyo ki mere naal da ek munde da visa 3rd attempt ch aya because of caips une saare reasons explain kite c jo caips ch emabssy walo mentioned c.but menu pta ni c ede baare tan karke me 2times bina caips lai c tan karke.

dekh me tan yehi suggest karda tenu ki course na change kar je tere naal deya de visa ae ne same profile as u te tera v auga institute pave change karle ohda koi chakar ni but course same rakhi varnna hun ena ne kehna ki course kyo change kareya . but teri sop ch kafi problem c .so una nu overcome kar te describe kar bhut changi tarah ki kyo tera course tenu related lagda teri field aur future oppurtunity ki tere lai india ch ...

baki rab rakha rab da naam le te laade file ....maadi kismat hamesa nahi hundi
 

sidhu_anwar

Hero Member
Jun 27, 2014
243
6
Category........
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
SOP provided by Enoch Singapore is comparatively better. It still has many mistakes though. I don't know whether the VO takes the correctness of English in SOP into consideration while making the decision regarding visa; but still you can get it proof read by someone you trust and has good English.
I agree with Enoch that you shouldn't change your course now as it'll give the impression that you just want to be in Canada anyhow no matter what.
 

Enoch singapore

Star Member
Jun 9, 2014
58
1
hardeep

me bus first attemp ch sop lai c,ohdo baad me sirf letter laya c hor kuch nahi ..hun is vaari caips note de naal letter launga bus ena hi karna.

ielts da mera sense naal chakar ho sakda kyo ki unki checklist te proper mentioned hai not less than 5.5.

ek varri hor try kar le varna australlia ,newzealand chal g earn tan tu dollar hi karne pave jithe marji kar .....
 

hardeep bal

Hero Member
May 5, 2014
815
46
punjab india
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Pre-Assessed..
Yes
File Transfer...
27-10-2016
Med's Request
UpFront
Med's Done....
Yes
Passport Req..
UpFront
VISA ISSUED...
8-11-2016
LANDED..........
soon
Enoch Singapore,,,veer ji... Me je course change kRlawa..mean eh ik saal da course c ga ..mera iraada Hun degree ch admission le lenne ,,tuanuu Ki lgda??
and veere mere ielts overall 6 aa ,,
L 6.5
R 5.5
W 5.0
S 6.0 eh ielts score ch ik module ch 5 a writing ch,,Hun me again ehi score laadawa veer ?? Tuade hisaab naal
 

hardeep bal

Hero Member
May 5, 2014
815
46
punjab india
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Pre-Assessed..
Yes
File Transfer...
27-10-2016
Med's Request
UpFront
Med's Done....
Yes
Passport Req..
UpFront
VISA ISSUED...
8-11-2016
LANDED..........
soon
Guys,,help regardingGIC
should i withdrawal my 10,000 CAD from scotia bank ,,or not,,
if i will apply for January intake then it is possible with same GIC certificate or not ??
and scotia bank refund policy will having any issue if someone refused twice,
 

Enoch singapore

Star Member
Jun 9, 2014
58
1
hardeep

if you willing to improve your ielts then go ahead with full preparation other wise you can try again with same score but don't try with same sop. try to explain everything in formal way.
there are plenty of sop on internet refer them .

as far AS GIC is concerned, it is an kind of fixed deposit in scotia bank same as we all doing in indian banks but if we focus about rate of interest is nothing .
so you no need to cancel your gic. you can use that amount any time as a fund that lying in canada . But if you do not willing to apply SP further in future then NO USE TO KEEP that FUNDS THEIR.
you can get more interest in Indian banks as compared to canada.
 

hardeep bal

Hero Member
May 5, 2014
815
46
punjab india
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Pre-Assessed..
Yes
File Transfer...
27-10-2016
Med's Request
UpFront
Med's Done....
Yes
Passport Req..
UpFront
VISA ISSUED...
8-11-2016
LANDED..........
soon
Thank you enoch sir,,,, i really thankful to you for this information,,now i gonna refund my GIC and university fee also,,
 

Enoch singapore

Star Member
Jun 9, 2014
58
1
hardeep

for your information only, don't do anymistake while you apply for gic refund.

refer the bank website how to apply for refund and follow the same and remember all forms will be in typed format not handwritten.

menu bada tang karya ena ne refund vele 4 months ch fund wapas kitte jab ki website ch 2 months or 8 weeks likheya c.

sir ni yaara tere varga hi munda haan me
canada di rejection nu le ke aiven tang na ho rab ne tere lai sayad isto vadiya kuch rakheya hona tan hi tera visa ni aya ....
 

hardeep bal

Hero Member
May 5, 2014
815
46
punjab india
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Pre-Assessed..
Yes
File Transfer...
27-10-2016
Med's Request
UpFront
Med's Done....
Yes
Passport Req..
UpFront
VISA ISSUED...
8-11-2016
LANDED..........
soon
Enoch singapore said:
hardeep

for your information only, don't do anymistake while you apply for gic refund.

refer the bank website how to apply for refund and follow the same and remember all forms will be in typed format not handwritten.

menu bada tang karya ena ne refund vele 4 months ch fund wapas kitte jab ki website ch 2 months or 8 weeks likheya c.

sir ni yaara tere varga hi munda haan me
canada di rejection nu le ke aiven tang na ho rab ne tere lai sayad isto vadiya kuch rakheya hona tan hi tera visa ni aya ....
theeka veer jii,,,

tuci pehla case pyramid alia to lawaya c,, and refund enni late kio aya c veer ji
 

scylla

VIP Member
Jun 8, 2010
95,583
21,942
Toronto
Category........
Visa Office......
Buffalo
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
28-05-2010
AOR Received.
19-08-2010
File Transfer...
28-06-2010
Passport Req..
01-10-2010
VISA ISSUED...
05-10-2010
LANDED..........
05-10-2010
Enoch singapore said:
sidhu anwar

can please elaborate to me bit more whre is the mistakes ?
really appreciated for your kind read.
The letter is well organized.

However I agree there are grammatical and stuctural errors in almost every sentence.
 

Enoch singapore

Star Member
Jun 9, 2014
58
1
Nahi bhai me chd da rehn wala ,menu tan mere frend jede hun Canada ne una di koi known c une utho case laya c ohdi rejection ae c pehlan phir pyramid-e-services to laya tan visa aaya c ...
Bus phir una karke me ohna de naal gal kitti koi aarti c ....
Kehndi sab ho ju mere to 10000 rs le le te offer letter jadh aya te kehnde ki baki 15000 balance hor do.
Aur sare pese me Singapore to pae c me una da office v nahi vekha haje tak tan v me 50% payment me karti trust te.
But jab v me apna case discus karda c te saale kuch kardee nahi c,je sirf case launa te rejection khani aa te me un dangara nu pese kyo dava..vo tan me aap karlo bus phir vo mane ni puri payment mang re hai.so me phir kuch ni karana ohna to...
Ohna ne sirf business kholaya va ki saare rejected cases to pese lo ,kyo ki rejected banda da vese hi desperate hona vise kardu payment bus is chiz da faida chukde saale.

Gic ch mere to ek galti ho gi c ki me bank account refund form handwritten karta c ,next day me revised bhejta c phir 2 months later me cal kiti te kehnde sanu koi mail nahi ae tan karke
 

joshua96

Star Member
Mar 20, 2014
57
0
124
Bangalore
Category........
Visa Office......
New Delhi
Job Offer........
Pre-Assessed..
App. Filed.......
11/07/2014
IELTS Request
8.0 (L:9.0, W:7.5, R:7.5, S:7.5)
File Transfer...
14/07/2014
Med's Done....
05/06/2014
Interview........
Waived
VISA ISSUED...
25/07/2014
LANDED..........
21/08/2014
Enoch,
For the first attempt, why were you rejected under SPP, for SPP GIC account is enough for financial proof right? As it asks only for the GIC on the document checklist :eek: