Study Permit Refusal Twice.

[phoenix wings]

My study permit application has been refused twice now, on my first application I thought my refusal was fair and so I corrected my mistakes and reapplied after 7 months, today I received an email from the Embassy with another refusal which I think is unjust as I believe that I have all the requirements that is needed to obtain a study permit. I will write you in details everything you may want to know about me and my case. What I would like to know is what do you think is the solution? Is there anything that I should change in my application? Should I reapply or do I have the right to appeal and should I appeal instead of reapplying?

I am applying to do my private pilot license and commercial pilot license, the duration of my study will be a one year and so I am applying for a one year study permit.


Citizenship: Syria
Country of residence: Turkey
Immigration status at country of residence: Family residence permit for 3 years valid until Sept, 2020.
Relationship status: Married to a Turkish citizen
Study duration in Canada: From March 2019 to March 2020
Cost of my education with living expenses required to prove 46.000 CAD
My 6 months bank statement: 58.500 CAD

First application was made on June 2018

Grounds for refusal;
personal assets and financial status, purpose of visit.

On my first attempt, financially speaking I was sponsored by my parents which I thought was the issue and I thought that was the reason of getting refused on the ground of personal assets and financial status. On the other hand the letter of acceptance was a photocopy because my institute didn't provide me with the original letter of acceptance and so I only photocopied the letter and include it in my application. After my refusal when I wanted to reapply just a couple of weeks ago they informed me that there are currently no places available, and so I contacted another institute and while communicating with them they informed me that most properly the immigration officer didn't accept my letter of acceptance because it wasn't the original document and so he/she refused me on the ground of purpose of visit.


Second application was made on January 15th 2019

Grounds for refusal;
family ties in Canada and in country of residence
immigration status in country of residence
purpose of visit
travel history

Now this was shocking. My answer to everything they stated goes as the following:

Family ties in Canada and in country of residence: I have no family ties in Canada, how could I have any? And how could this be even a reason! However in my country of residence my wife isn't she enough of a Family tie? She holds my surname and is my wife for god sake, I included our “Livret De Famille International”/ An International Family Certificate that is recognized internationally in my application. Also my wife has an asset, she owns an apartment here in Turkey and I have included the deed of ownership.

Immigration status in country of residence: Family residence permit which is valid even after my duration of studies expires in Canada I will still have six months family residence permit in Turkey and after those six months I will be able to get a Turkish citizenship if I want to or I can extend my family residence permit for another 3 years and so on.

Purpose of visit: This time I have included the original copy of the letter of acceptance and honestly I don't know how I can satisfy the visa officer other than an acceptance letter from a Designated learning institution.

Travel history: I couldn't find in the Section A11(1) of the Immigration and Refugee Protection Act (IRPA) that my travel history could be a reason for refusing my application for a study permit, although my passport is new and I haven't been anywhere since I got my passport but I can prove that for the past 19 years of my life I have never lived in Syria my country of origin in fact since I was 8 years old we moved from Syria with my family and my family has been overseas for the past 19 years in the middle east , I was also there until 2010 then I moved to another country for educational purpose and then I moved to Turkey for Educational purpose and then I stayed in Turkey because I was in a relationship with my girlfriend at the time then we got married and I got a family residence and settled here since then. In between I didn't travel a lot but I have always been out of my country so I find it ridiculous that this is not enough of a travel history where I spent the most part of my life overseas!!

What should I do? I would like to know if I apply online dose my application go to the Embassy in Ankara or dose it go directly to the Immigration, Refugees and Citizenship ministry in Canada? Because I believe the Embassy here didn't even look at my file otherwise they wouldn't have stated such reason when obviously I have provided enough evidence! Thank you for your time and effort really appreciated in this time in my life!

 

[selvakk]

My study permit application has been refused twice now, on my first application I thought my refusal was fair and so I corrected my mistakes and reapplied after 7 months, today I received an email from the Embassy with another refusal which I think is unjust as I believe that I have all the requirements that is needed to obtain a study permit. I will write you in details everything you may want to know about me and my case. What I would like to know is what do you think is the solution? Is there anything that I should change in my application? Should I reapply or do I have the right to appeal and should I appeal instead of reapplying?

I am applying to do my private pilot license and commercial pilot license, the duration of my study will be a one year and so I am applying for a one year study permit.


Citizenship: Syria
Country of residence: Turkey
Immigration status at country of residence: Family residence permit for 3 years valid until Sept, 2020.
Relationship status: Married to a Turkish citizen
Study duration in Canada: From March 2019 to March 2020
Cost of my education with living expenses required to prove 46.000 CAD
My 6 months bank statement: 58.500 CAD

First application was made on June 2018

Grounds for refusal;
personal assets and financial status, purpose of visit.

On my first attempt, financially speaking I was sponsored by my parents which I thought was the issue and I thought that was the reason of getting refused on the ground of personal assets and financial status. On the other hand the letter of acceptance was a photocopy because my institute didn't provide me with the original letter of acceptance and so I only photocopied the letter and include it in my application. After my refusal when I wanted to reapply just a couple of weeks ago they informed me that there are currently no places available, and so I contacted another institute and while communicating with them they informed me that most properly the immigration officer didn't accept my letter of acceptance because it wasn't the original document and so he/she refused me on the ground of purpose of visit.


Second application was made on January 15th 2019

Grounds for refusal;
family ties in Canada and in country of residence
immigration status in country of residence
purpose of visit
travel history

Now this was shocking. My answer to everything they stated goes as the following:

Family ties in Canada and in country of residence: I have no family ties in Canada, how could I have any? And how could this be even a reason! However in my country of residence my wife isn't she enough of a Family tie? She holds my surname and is my wife for god sake, I included our “Livret De Famille International”/ An International Family Certificate that is recognized internationally in my application. Also my wife has an asset, she owns an apartment here in Turkey and I have included the deed of ownership.

Immigration status in country of residence: Family residence permit which is valid even after my duration of studies expires in Canada I will still have six months family residence permit in Turkey and after those six months I will be able to get a Turkish citizenship if I want to or I can extend my family residence permit for another 3 years and so on.

Purpose of visit: This time I have included the original copy of the letter of acceptance and honestly I don't know how I can satisfy the visa officer other than an acceptance letter from a Designated learning institution.

Travel history: I couldn't find in the Section A11(1) of the Immigration and Refugee Protection Act (IRPA) that my travel history could be a reason for refusing my application for a study permit, although my passport is new and I haven't been anywhere since I got my passport but I can prove that for the past 19 years of my life I have never lived in Syria my country of origin in fact since I was 8 years old we moved from Syria with my family and my family has been overseas for the past 19 years in the middle east , I was also there until 2010 then I moved to another country for educational purpose and then I moved to Turkey for Educational purpose and then I stayed in Turkey because I was in a relationship with my girlfriend at the time then we got married and I got a family residence and settled here since then. In between I didn't travel a lot but I have always been out of my country so I find it ridiculous that this is not enough of a travel history where I spent the most part of my life overseas!!

What should I do? I would like to know if I apply online dose my application go to the Embassy in Ankara or dose it go directly to the Immigration, Refugees and Citizenship ministry in Canada? Because I believe the Embassy here didn't even look at my file otherwise they wouldn't have stated such reason when obviously I have provided enough evidence! Thank you for your time and effort really appreciated in this time in my life!

The first rejection seems reasonable to me. The second one is a bit concerning.

Family ties in Canada and in the country of residence

I am assuming this is the default reason selected if you have not been able to prove either one. However, I cannot confirm this with any other source.

Immigration status in the country of residence: The simple fact is that you are not a citizen of the country that you are in and add to that fact that you are a Syrian National ( I hope I'm not being rude). Your visa in Turkey is of a temporary nature and you are certainly not going to go back to Syria ( again not berating your country of origin).

Now the first thing you have to do is to get what is called a CAIPS note, there are many websites that offer this service. This will take 30 days but it will tell you the exact reasons why you were rejected. The reasons you are given are generic headers but the CAIPS note will be specific. With the CAIPS note, we can see if it was family ties in Canada ( which you claim not to have ) or the fact that your residence status in turkey concerns you.

With regards to travel history do you have the visa, entry or exit stamps of the countries that you visited? That will be taken as proof of travel history. Many people get this rejection and it's not that if you don't have travel history you won't get a visa.

Automatically with all these reasons they will suspect that your reason of visit is not genuine. Honestly speaking if getting Turkish citizenship is an option and you are willing/able to wait for some more time I would highly suggest that since it will make this matter of you having temporary residence status.

Normally being a temporary resident is not a problem but since Syria is currently a war zone and your status in Turkey is temporary. I am also assuming that your family is in a third middle east country which further erodes ties to Turkey for you. Your wife's apartment is technically not your asset and it would be easy for visa officers to think that you would overstay and claim refugee status and then your wife could come over later once you have residence. Also regarding the Livret De Famille International”/ An International Family Certificate, I was not able to find any information that about this that was in English and I don't know if people know what that is.

The main issue is that your country of citizenship is not a country that you have ties to or any reasonable person would consider returning to. You have a few options. Regardless of what you go with get the CAIPS notes first.

1) Include travel history and all the proofs of your wife's assets and write a statement of purpose ( SOP) letting the visa officer know about your exact situation and why you want to go to Canada. I am assuming that you have a background in aviation and/or want to pursue such a course. Why you don't want to do the same course in Turkey. Essentially this statement of purpose is what convinces the visa officer that you are a genuine student and not looking to do anything else. If possible try to extend your Turkish family visa.

2) Get Turkish citizenship, now as a Turkish citizen you have permanent residence and there is no reason for you to leave turkey. Write the same SOP with regards to why you want to do said course etc. Include your travel history as well if you have it as well as your wife's assets.

Ultimately this is just my assessment based on my logic and having seen a couple of posters from Syria and Yemen having similar issues from Saudi, UAE etc. hopefully this is helpful to your case.

 

[phoenix wings]

The first rejection seems reasonable to me. The second one is a bit concerning.

Family ties in Canada and in the country of residence

I am assuming this is the default reason selected if you have not been able to prove either one. However, I cannot confirm this with any other source.

Immigration status in the country of residence: The simple fact is that you are not a citizen of the country that you are in and add to that fact that you are a Syrian National ( I hope I'm not being rude). Your visa in Turkey is of a temporary nature and you are certainly not going to go back to Syria ( again not berating your country of origin).

Now the first thing you have to do is to get what is called a CAIPS note, there are many websites that offer this service. This will take 30 days but it will tell you the exact reasons why you were rejected. The reasons you are given are generic headers but the CAIPS note will be specific. With the CAIPS note, we can see if it was family ties in Canada ( which you claim not to have ) or the fact that your residence status in turkey concerns you.

With regards to travel history do you have the visa, entry or exit stamps of the countries that you visited? That will be taken as proof of travel history. Many people get this rejection and it's not that if you don't have travel history you won't get a visa.

Automatically with all these reasons they will suspect that your reason of visit is not genuine. Honestly speaking if getting Turkish citizenship is an option and you are willing/able to wait for some more time I would highly suggest that since it will make this matter of you having temporary residence status.

Normally being a temporary resident is not a problem but since Syria is currently a war zone and your status in Turkey is temporary. I am also assuming that your family is in a third middle east country which further erodes ties to Turkey for you. Your wife's apartment is technically not your asset and it would be easy for visa officers to think that you would overstay and claim refugee status and then your wife could come over later once you have residence. Also regarding the Livret De Famille International”/ An International Family Certificate, I was not able to find any information that about this that was in English and I don't know if people know what that is.

The main issue is that your country of citizenship is not a country that you have ties to or any reasonable person would consider returning to. You have a few options. Regardless of what you go with get the CAIPS notes first.

1) Include travel history and all the proofs of your wife's assets and write a statement of purpose ( SOP) letting the visa officer know about your exact situation and why you want to go to Canada. I am assuming that you have a background in aviation and/or want to pursue such a course. Why you don't want to do the same course in Turkey. Essentially this statement of purpose is what convinces the visa officer that you are a genuine student and not looking to do anything else. If possible try to extend your Turkish family visa.

2) Get Turkish citizenship, now as a Turkish citizen you have permanent residence and there is no reason for you to leave turkey. Write the same SOP with regards to why you want to do said course etc. Include your travel history as well if you have it as well as your wife's assets.

Ultimately this is just my assessment based on my logic and having seen a couple of posters from Syria and Yemen having similar issues from Saudi, UAE etc. hopefully this is helpful to your case.

Hello there and thank you for your quick response,

(CAIPS) I will get them. (SOP) I have written one of course, I had been enrolled previously in a Bachelor degree in aviation here in Turkey but since my instructors forgot to speak English most of the time and my Turkish is not good enough to learn Aerodynamics in Turkish I quit as it was a waste of a lot of money and that's the reason I am applying to go to Canada as my English (North American) is my strongest language, stronger than Arabic actually. I have attached my IELTS as a proof and I've attached a document proving that I was a student at that university studying aviation earlier in Turkey.

Livret De Famille International is simply a Marriage certificate. A proof of my Marriage and that this marriage must be recognized internationally not just Turkey, according to an International Act.

Family ties in Canada and in the country of residence: in my country of residence as I have mentioned in my post that my wife is Turkish and isn't she a family tie to me? Her asset was meant to state that this is another tie we have in Turkey.

Immigration Status: My family permit allows me to exit and enter Turkey as I wish without needing a visa the reason it's only valid till 2020 because by 2020 I would have completed my 3rd year in a marriage with Turkish citizen then I am allowed to become a Turkish national myself and that's why they only provide a 3 years family resident permit. However I will try to extend my current permit and apply for another 3 years so it would be valid to 2022. Honestly I am personally not interested in becoming a Turkish Citizen (no offense intended to anyone) "I have my personal reasons" but in the case that it would be impossible to pursue my dreams otherwise then I shall wait it out. However as you have mentioned normally being a temporary resident is not a problem especially when such temporary residence is a family residency with a family ties (my wife). Although I hail from Syria but as I mentioned I haven't lived there for the past (19) years. Meaning my family moved to the middle east (Gulf region) and has been actively legally been there for the past 19 years, so it's not like I am running from the war in Syria but the fact that I haven't ever lived there since 19 years and that's almost 2/3 of my lifetime.

Travel History I wasn't asked to provide any information where I have visited but they asked if during the past five years I have lived in any country for more than six months other than country of citizenship or country of current residence, and I have included the country where I had a valid one year visa in the middle east, however my passport is empty as I have had it recently last year and since then never left Turkey. I can apply for a Schengen Visa and should be able to get it and let's say go to Greece for the weekend or something alike if it's that important to them to believe that I am genuine not seeking refugee anywhere in the world, never had and never will!!

Purpose of visit is what drives me NUTS I mean what do they want? How can I prove it? EDUCATIONAL. Letter of Acceptance that I have! Is there anything else that I can submit to prove my purpose of visit other than a Letter of Acceptance from a DLI?

I believe this has to do with the visa officer himself but I shall be certain having the (CAIPS) however till then if I applied online dose my application goes to the Embassy in Ankara or to Canada? Also I am going to the middle east to visit my family can I apply from their with a family visit, I'd prefer a new visa officer in a more relaxed country shall I say, I mean they don't have the same amount applicants there as far as I know so I am thinking it might have a positive effect on me.

Your time is appreciated. Thank you for your response, good day to you!

 

[phoenix wings]

it would be easy for visa officers to think that you would overstay and claim refugee status and then your wife could come over later once you have residence

I read what you wrote again, however I couldn't agree with you on this, (please don't get me wrong) however how can I claim refugee when I have a family residence permit in another country and can easily be deported back to Turkey.

Not to mention how stupid of me it's to apply for a "refugee" where I can simply go back to Turkey and work as pilot and earn an amazing salary here in Turkey or even better what I plan to do actually is move back to the middle east and work for Major airlines as they offer the best salaries and I have the connections to land a job there as I have mentioned earlier that my whole family have settled there and have been there for 19 years now, oh and by the way I included this informations to the visa officer in my letter and I clearly stated my career plans for the future

Thanks again!

 

[selvakk]

I read what you wrote again, however I couldn't agree with you on this, (please don't get me wrong) however how can I claim refugee when I have a family residence permit in another country and can easily be deported back to Turkey.

Not to mention how stupid of me it's to apply for a "refugee" where I can simply go back to Turkey and work as pilot and earn an amazing salary here in Turkey or even better what I plan to do actually is move back to the middle east and work for Major airlines as they offer the best salaries and I have the connections to land a job there as I have mentioned earlier that my whole family have settled there and have been there for 19 years now, oh and by the way I included this informations to the visa officer in my letter and I clearly stated my career plans for the future

Thanks again!

Ah, sorry if I cause offense to you. When they ask for family they want your parents and siblings if any. If any of your parents and siblings are in a different country than you then that reduces ties to your country of residence.

I only mentioned citizenship since people with country of residence being different from country of citizenship have harder time getting approval for visa.

Regarding your turkish visa, it would be better to extend it since it would give you bigger gap and show that you intend to return. Any visa with an expiry date will be seen as a temporary visa.

Regarding deportations, normally deportations will happen only to country of citizenship. So you would most likely be deported back to Syria.

Yes, purpose of visit rejection is a very vague term, you will only know the real reason with CAIPS notes.

If you have the old passport with you then you can get scanned copies. It's the only way to prove travel history. I would not advise travelling somewhere merely for this reason alone.

With regards to where your visa is processed. If you do it online it is processed in Canada. If you do it offline through VFS or embassy then it is processed locally.

I can understand why you would not want to change your citizenship. I was born in a foreign country and lived there for 15 years and still had a connection there. Of course In my case I could not obtain citizenship in the place of my birth but I can understand why you would not want to change citizenship.

Hope this helped you in some way.

 

[selvakk]

I also forgot to mention that if your SOP is too long them they may not even read it. Get the CAIPS and tailor your SOP to match the reasons given.

 

[phoenix wings]

Ah, sorry if I cause offense to you.

None taken

When they ask for family they want your parents and siblings if any. If any of your parents and siblings are in a different country than you then that reduces ties to your country of residence.

That's interesting in my culture my wife is my family as close as it could get sometimes considered closer than siblings but I get it.

Regarding your turkish visa, it would be better to extend it since it would give you bigger gap and show that you intend to return. Any visa with an expiry date will be seen as a temporary visa.

I will contact the immigration department first thing on Monday.

With regards to where your visa is processed. If you do it online it is processed in Canada. If you do it offline through VFS or embassy then it is processed locally.

I will do it online then, if you are certain about this it's such a relief.

I can understand why you would not want to change your citizenship. I was born in a foreign country and lived there for 15 years and still had a connection there. Of course In my case I could not obtain citizenship in the place of my birth but I can understand why you would not want to change citizenship.

Our life is a bit similar as we both have lived most of the time as foreigners and sometimes being a foreigner for the most part of your life is a tiring thing, sometimes it's our destiny. However if I would obtain a citizenship of another nation and I don't feel like I belong or share the same values and way of life then I believe I'll be lying to myself. I think you can relate.

 

[phoenix wings]

I also forgot to mention that if your SOP is too long them they may not even read it. Get the CAIPS and tailor your SOP to match the reasons given.

On my first application my letter was 2 pages. On my second application it was one page, is one page fine? or should it be like half a page?
Also what's the difference between SOP and LoE?

I am trying to order my CAIPS from https://www.caipsgcms.com/ However there are many choices like CAIPS BASIC, CAIPS BASIC PLUS, CAIPS CASE FILE PLUS and CAIPS STUDENT SPECIAL. Which should I order and do you know how are they different?

Thank you again you've helped me a lot.

 

[selvakk]

On my first application my letter was 2 pages. On my second application it was one page, is one page fine? or should it be like half a page?
Also what's the difference between SOP and LoE?

I am trying to order my CAIPS from https://www.caipsgcms.com/ However there are many choices like CAIPS BASIC, CAIPS BASIC PLUS, CAIPS CASE FILE PLUS and CAIPS STUDENT SPECIAL. Which should I order and do you know how are they different?

Thank you again you've helped me a lot.

2 pages I think is fine. Some people send 3-4 which becomes lengthy for visa officer to read.

SOP and LOE are the same thing. Regarding CAIPS GCMS I would recommend the Basic plus since they will give a brief explanation for 5 dollars more.

If you want them to analyse your SOP and help you out with that and also get your CAIPS notes the you should go for the student special.

 

[ARVINDATWAL]

Hi seniors,
Need help regarding my study visa. I had applied for study visa from India this month and after 13 days I got refusal with below-stating reasons:
Please advice



Grounds for refusal:

· I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.


· Your proposed studies are not reasonable in light of one or more of: your qualifications, previous studies, missing mark sheets, academic record, level of establishment, language abilities, or your future prospects and plans.

 

[selvakk]

Hi seniors,
Need help regarding my study visa. I had applied for study visa from India this month and after 13 days I got refusal with below-stating reasons:
Please advice



Grounds for refusal:

· I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.


· Your proposed studies are not reasonable in light of one or more of: your qualifications, previous studies, missing mark sheets, academic record, level of establishment, language abilities, or your future prospects and plans.

What is your education qualifications, and what program are you going to do in Canada

 

[ARVINDATWAL]

What is your education qualifications, and what program are you going to do in Canada

I did Mechanical Engg from india and applied for post-graduation in process quality engineering program.

 

[selvakk]

I did Mechanical Engg from india and applied for post-graduation in process quality engineering program.

It seems to be a related program. As you have not mentioned your grades or profile I really can't help you.

If you want to know the exact reason you can apply for CAIPS notes. They are relatively affordable , and while it takes 30 days to obtain. You will know the exact reason your application was rejected.

 

[ARVINDATWAL]

It seems to be a related program. As you have not mentioned your grades or profile I really can't help you.

If you want to know the exact reason you can apply for CAIPS notes. They are relatively affordable , and while it takes 30 days to obtain. You will know the exact reason your application was rejected.

Thanks for the reply guys...
But I think there is somewhere problem with my SOP that my consultant used for the application. and Now when I looked into, from the starting Title it seems wrong. Can u please take a look and suggest.

Visa Application

To gain knowledge and techniques in order to improve the delivery and quality of products and services, I am looking forward to pursuing the Process Quality Engineering program available at Conestoga College. For this, I am trying to obtain a student visa to Canada.

As per my educational details, I have been a sincere student. I have completed my matriculation and my senior secondary education in 2010 and 2012. Following this, I chose to pursue a Bachelor of Technology in Mechanical Engineering from Baddi University of Emerging Sciences & Technology, Himachal Pradesh. During my bachelors, I learned about subjects related to mechanical as well as Quality related field (for example Total Quality Management & Personality Development program). These subjects not only helped me to build a strong foundation of quality fundamentals but also made me conceptually sound in the vast field of both process quality and part quality. I have also worked with Jai Industries as an Engineer in the Production Department. I have experience of 23 months, which helped me to learn a lot and gain actual field experience in the automotive manufacturing sector.

Although I have acquired technical skills, I want to pursue my career in process quality field within my industry. Since I want to possess a position in the quality control department within the Mechanical/Automobile sector, I started looking for further academic options in India. Considering the international qualification, exposure, and industry experience, I started looking for the availability of courses abroad, and hence, I came across the Process Quality Engineering program available at Conestoga College. To secure admission in the chosen program, I appeared for IELTS and scored overall of 6.5 bands.

The selected program will allow me to fulfill my career goals by gaining the in-depth knowledge, competencies, skills, tools required to apply the proper techniques and procedures to solve problems and enhance the quality of goods and services, to eliminate waste and to reduce the incidence of defects. Under the selected program, I will attain theoretical and practical knowledge and skills to manage various statistical tools such as measurement system analysis, process capability and design of experiments to baseline performance and effect process improvement. This practical, interdisciplinary, career-oriented diploma program will prepare me for a variety of Quality Assurance positions.

I have selected Conestoga College as it has a high reputation and offers an education that is of the highest quality. Studying at this prestigious college will make me a great professional. I will get the guidance of extremely qualified and learned professors who will impart to me the invaluable skills and knowledge of my field. I am sure that studying in this college will be a life-changing experience for me.

Furthermore, Canada is one of the safest countries in the world where international students are given a warm welcome for pursuing their studies. Most study programs delivered by Canadian institutions focus a lot on research and students get to engage in intriguing experiments and projects, meant to provide them a complete study experience, based on innovation and forward thinking.

After the successful completion of the chosen course, I will return to India. Upon my return, I will be well equipped with the expertise to deliver better results, with better budget management and goal fulfillment. Under the prevailing scenario job market is quite ripe for well qualified and trained Quality Analyst, Process Quality Engineer, and Process Analyst with leading automotive companies like Hyundai, Toyota Motors, TATA Motors, and Maruti Suzuki to name a few.

In the end, I would like to request the Visa Officer to kindly consider my application for approval.

Thank you,

 

[selvakk]

Thanks for the reply guys...
But I think there is somewhere problem with my SOP that my consultant used for the application. and Now when I looked into, from the starting Title it seems wrong. Can u please take a look and suggest.

Visa Application

To gain knowledge and techniques in order to improve the delivery and quality of products and services, I am looking forward to pursuing the Process Quality Engineering program available at Conestoga College. For this, I am trying to obtain a student visa to Canada.

As per my educational details, I have been a sincere student. I have completed my matriculation and my senior secondary education in 2010 and 2012. Following this, I chose to pursue a Bachelor of Technology in Mechanical Engineering from Baddi University of Emerging Sciences & Technology, Himachal Pradesh. During my bachelors, I learned about subjects related to mechanical as well as Quality related field (for example Total Quality Management & Personality Development program). These subjects not only helped me to build a strong foundation of quality fundamentals but also made me conceptually sound in the vast field of both process quality and part quality. I have also worked with Jai Industries as an Engineer in the Production Department. I have experience of 23 months, which helped me to learn a lot and gain actual field experience in the automotive manufacturing sector.

Although I have acquired technical skills, I want to pursue my career in process quality field within my industry. Since I want to possess a position in the quality control department within the Mechanical/Automobile sector, I started looking for further academic options in India. Considering the international qualification, exposure, and industry experience, I started looking for the availability of courses abroad, and hence, I came across the Process Quality Engineering program available at Conestoga College. To secure admission in the chosen program, I appeared for IELTS and scored overall of 6.5 bands.

The selected program will allow me to fulfill my career goals by gaining the in-depth knowledge, competencies, skills, tools required to apply the proper techniques and procedures to solve problems and enhance the quality of goods and services, to eliminate waste and to reduce the incidence of defects. Under the selected program, I will attain theoretical and practical knowledge and skills to manage various statistical tools such as measurement system analysis, process capability and design of experiments to baseline performance and effect process improvement. This practical, interdisciplinary, career-oriented diploma program will prepare me for a variety of Quality Assurance positions.

I have selected Conestoga College as it has a high reputation and offers an education that is of the highest quality. Studying at this prestigious college will make me a great professional. I will get the guidance of extremely qualified and learned professors who will impart to me the invaluable skills and knowledge of my field. I am sure that studying in this college will be a life-changing experience for me.

Furthermore, Canada is one of the safest countries in the world where international students are given a warm welcome for pursuing their studies. Most study programs delivered by Canadian institutions focus a lot on research and students get to engage in intriguing experiments and projects, meant to provide them a complete study experience, based on innovation and forward thinking.

After the successful completion of the chosen course, I will return to India. Upon my return, I will be well equipped with the expertise to deliver better results, with better budget management and goal fulfillment. Under the prevailing scenario job market is quite ripe for well qualified and trained Quality Analyst, Process Quality Engineer, and Process Analyst with leading automotive companies like Hyundai, Toyota Motors, TATA Motors, and Maruti Suzuki to name a few.

In the end, I would like to request the Visa Officer to kindly consider my application for approval.

Thank you,

There is nothing that stands out but if your consultant prepared this, and if he used a similar template for his other clients, then it could be easily found out that this is a copy paste job, and you're SOP will not be taken seriously. What do you feel is wrong ?