There is nothing that stands out but if your consultant prepared this, and if he used a similar template for his other clients, then it could be easily found out that this is a copy paste job, and you're SOP will not be taken seriously. What do you feel is wrong ?
Hi, I recently faced the same issue and got my student permit application refused due to purpose of visit, financial status and family ties in Canada and in country of residence . My blood relation relative includes my aunt, who is my custodian and is a canadian citizen( I filled in the custodian declaration form). I'm applying for undergraduate studies in Canada, what would you think the reason is behind my refusal? I mentioned my my aunt being a canadian citizen in the SOP/LOE. Additional factors for which I was refused for was based on financial status, this may have been because my bank statements were not of the past 4 months and were in a different currency to CAD. I was also refused for purpose of my visit. Kindly assist me.