IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.

[cansha]

Experts can you please assess my writing tasks

WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.

Write a letter to the airline. In your letter

* explain what has happened

* describe the bag and its contents

* say what you would like them to do about it

You should write at least 150 words.

You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir,

______________________________________________________________________

Please do not send two tasks in one post. It becomes difficult to review.

Dear Sir,

Good Morning,

I am a regular flyer with your airlines, my name is Raja, Resident of Manchester, United Kingdom. Why so many commas? Do you think you can write it in a much simpler way? It looks clumsy in its current form.

Last Night why is N capital here?
I flew from Manchester to Mumbai in in or on?
flight no it reads no right now. Where is the dot? E307I, departure time at 12:30AM from Terminal 2. Unfortunately , I realised my missing laptop bag when I arrived at my hotel, which I had kept under my front seat (6E). seat in front of me It happened due to long flight with restlessness as a family with infant were boarded next to me and the baby was crying throughout the journey Not sure this is needed but okay
and I apologies apologize? for my negligence.

Its a black American tourister back pack with a tag label of my name and contact details. Its Do you know the difference between its and it's valuable for me because it contains my work laptop, all project related data and few important documents related to my employer. And also my work access cards and house keys are in that bag.Even if you don't write this line you would be okay.

It would be a pleasure if you can arrange to deliver it to my hotel address which is room no 345, The park hotel, beach road, Mumbai Should P, H and B be capital in the address?. If its Again what is the diff between its and it's not possible please ring me on 999xxxx99 so I will pick from the airport itself.

Hoping for a positive feedback and Waiting Why is W capital? for your reply.

Thank you,

Yours Sincerely,

Raja.
Contents are okay but there are too many avoidable errors. Such errors can cost dearly on exam day. You need to be more careful and avoid these mistakes. All the best.
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WRITING TASK 2

Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

_________________________________________________________________________



Technology lead present generation children are so inclined towards digital entertainment instead of participating in outdoor physical sports or recreation which indeed is an undeniable fact. I strongly agree with the given statement and my views are well explained in the following paragraph.
Not a good introduction. You need to read more on how to write an introduction passage for IELTS. Some pointers are here in this post https://www.canadavisa.com/canada-immigration-discussion-board/threads/ielts-writing-for-band-7-or-above.540392/page-90#post-7568485 and also refer to Liz's videos online.

Most of the young brains nowadays, are so addicted to video games and watching cartoon on televisions. They are so reluctant to leave their room or house while involved with these activity. Even they refuses to have their meal, and some children are so adamant that they will not have their meals unless they are entertained with a mobile to see video rhymes. For instance, my friends child who is 5 years old now will only consume his food by watching youtube in the mobile. We cannot feed him a single spoon unless until rhymes are on in the mobile. In addition to this he is not interested to play outside which led to obesity due to lack of physical exercise. He became so nuclear that, he cannot mingle with any kids.Yes you need to write examples in essay BUT this is too much. 3 lines??? seems like an essay on your friend's kid.


Moreover, staying indoor will develop nuclear mentality to children and once they are grown-ups its difficult for them to be a good team member at work place. As well as, their will be a lot of health related issues due to less intake of fresh air like asthma, respiratory diseases and lung related problem.
Why does this passage so small on length compared to previous one? Try to write a balanced one.

To sum-up, parents should enforce their children to take part in outdoor sports or events either at school or at their homes. Which will keep the growing bones stronger and enough exercise to keep them in radiant health.

Okay I will be honest. You really need to spend a lot of time reading what is required in an IELTS essay. There is not much to review here. We can correct a few mistakes and give pointers to make essay a little better. But, I think you are in a very nascent stage of writing. You just need to spend time to research a little bit more and learn what is expected in IELTS essay. It is not very difficult and you should be able to do that in a week. All the best!

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Thank you in advance.

 

[zinnysho]

@cansha can you look into my essays ??


QUOTE="zinnysho, post: 8038848, member: 892744"]To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel.
What is your opinion on the above assumption?

You should write at least 250words.


There is a belief that the best way to solve the worrying growth in worldwide environmental hazards is to increase the price of fuel. I fully agree with this statement as high cost fuel can encourage the use of cleaner alternative methods of energy.


Raising fuel prices can influence consumers to opt for fuel that is less damaging to the environment. Cleaner methods of fuel such as electricity generated by wind turbines, can dramatically improve the carbon footprint of the average home, due to the fact that there are less emissions being pumped into the atmosphere. This type of energy alternative is slightly cheaper than the oil extracted from fossil fuels and a much suitable energy source for the environment. There have also been some research studies, for example, which illustrate that houses that use wind turbine energy contribute 20% less damage to the environment than their traditional oil-powered counterparts.



Another point to consider is that by raising fuel costs, many car owners may switch to the more economical and environmentally safe electric vehicles. For instance, electric cars generally exhibit little to no waste as they are not powered by petrol, instead, they are plugged into cheaper power outlets and charged with electricity. As a result, these cars not only prove to be more beneficial for the environment, they also save the consumer hundreds of euro per annum on fuel costs. If fuel prices are increased, this figure would be exponentially higher, and thus, car owners will be more inclined to make a switch to electric cars.



In conclusion, higher fuel costs can provide a great solution to the issue of environmental hazards. This is because I believe that it would encourage home-owners to opt for environmentally friendly fuel sources, and also give car owners the impetus to switch to electric cars.[/QUOTE]

 

[zinnysho]

@cansha I would also like to know how I can stick to task response a bit more? with my exam looming closer I believe that, that may be the only thing hindering me from obtaining the .5, my task ones have also been quite good although i need to summarise more. Since this is my 6th attempt I'm really hoping that I can ensure a good outcome !

 

[cansha]

@cansha I would also like to know how I can stick to task response a bit more? with my exam looming closer I believe that, that may be the only thing hindering me from obtaining the .5, my task ones have also been quite good although i need to summarise more. Since this is my 6th attempt I'm really hoping that I can ensure a good outcome !

Unfortunately, there is no quick fix for that. It takes practice and trying to generate more ideas. And then trying to stick to those ideas. How much time do you have before your test. You need atleast 3 weeks to work on this. If you have less than 3 weeks its difficult to work on it.

 

[cansha]

@cansha can you look into my essays ??


QUOTE="zinnysho, post: 8038848, member: 892744"]To solve the ever-increasing environmental hazards throughout the world, the best way is to increase the price of fuel.
What is your opinion on the above assumption?

You should write at least 250words.

I will try to give some pointers around task response on this one. Let's focus on task response only.

There is a belief that the best way to solve the worrying growth in worldwide environmental hazards is to increase the price of fuel. I fully agree with this statement as high cost fuel can encourage the use of cleaner alternative methods of energy. Introduction is fine. I would give a little bit more color to your opinion in the introduction itself which gives reader a glimpse of what is coming in the essay.


Raising fuel prices can influence consumers to opt for fuel that is less damaging to the environment. How is this statement different from the second line in the introduction paragraph? You are saying the same thing and giving absolute no reason for that behaviour. Question still remains WHY you think that will happen. You are assuming it is obvious. It is not. So, answer for yourself what stops people from using cleaner options today? Does that hindrance disappear if you make traditional options expensive? Don't think in terms of essay just think if you can write 2-3 bullet points to explain it.
Cleaner methods of fuel such as electricity generated by wind turbines, can dramatically improve the carbon footprint of the average home, due to the fact that there are less emissions being pumped into the atmosphere. See this statement is supposed to "Support" the main argument. Your main argument is more cost of traditional fuel means people will use alternate fuel more. BUT what is this statement supporting? This statement is just giving us information that cleaner fuel has less harmful emissions. You see the issue here?
This type of energy alternative is slightly cheaper than the oil extracted from fossil fuels and a much suitable energy source for the environment.
Same thing. Remember essay topic is not why alternate sources of energy are better? The question is entirely different and you are not addressing it.
There have also been some research studies, for example, which illustrate that houses that use wind turbine energy contribute 20% less damage to the environment than their traditional oil-powered counterparts. You have still not answered the question. Hence, task response till now is sadly ZERO.

Another point to consider is that by raising fuel costs, many car owners may switch to the more economical and environmentally safe electric vehicles. Again there is an assumption in the statement but no explanation as to why? Also, I have issue with the word economical here. This means electric vehicles are already economical and people are using more expensive vehicles when cheaper options are already available. That doesn't makes sense.

For instance, electric cars generally exhibit little to no waste as they are not powered by petrol, instead, they are plugged into cheaper power outlets and charged with electricity. See again you are explaining benefits of electric cars. Does that answer the question being asked? Yes it touches on the topic but doesn't really address the topic.
As a result, these cars not only prove to be more beneficial for the environment, they also save the consumer hundreds of euro per annum on fuel costs. If fuel prices are increased, this figure would be exponentially higher, and thus, car owners will be more inclined to make a switch to electric cars.



In conclusion, higher fuel costs can provide a great solution to the issue of environmental hazards. This is because I believe that it would encourage home-owners to opt for environmentally friendly fuel sources, and also give car owners the impetus to switch to electric cars.[/QUOTE]

 

[Annie_95]

Hi!
Could you please assess my essay? I would really appreciate this.

Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rater than at secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Traditionally, children have started learning a foreign language at secondary school. However, some educational institutions include foreign language lessons in a curriculum for primary school pupils. This development has already shown its benefits and shortcomings.

To begin with, children at an early age are capable to pick up different languages easier and faster than in their teenage period. This is because children's mother tongue has not settled down and is still being developed. Therefore, it is a perfect time to include a foreign language in an educational process. The flexibility of the primary school curriculum there is advantageous. Educators can include a few short sessions of different languages in a game form. This approach allows pupils to enjoy the learning process and stay focused, enthusiastic and motivated all day long. Besides, it is undoubted that being bilingual as a child enhances the ability to learn other languages as an adult. Indeed, studying languages at primary school also improves children's understanding of other cultures and their desire to obtain knowledge.

Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages as well. First of all, subjects at primary school usually are held by one teacher for a group. Unfortunately, most teachers have limited skills and knowledge of foreign languages. Therefore, schools have to hire additional educators for language lessons. This can affect a school's budget and the flexibility of the curriculum. Another noticeable drawback there is the diversity of languages and their different levels which children bring to secondary school. Pupils have difficulties continuing studying language after primary school and, as a result, they can lose interest in it. In fact, the possibility to lose schedule flexibility and children's motivation to study languages should be taken into account in this case.

In conclusion, foreign language lessons at primary school have numerous advantages and a few serious drawbacks. Undoubtedly, studying languages at an early age is more beneficial rather than disadvantageous. In my opinion, the shortcomings can be worked out to allow children to become more successful adults.

 

[RJB]

Please do not send two tasks in one post. It becomes difficult to review.

Dear Sir,

Good Morning,

I am a regular flyer with your airlines, my name is Raja, Resident of Manchester, United Kingdom. Why so many commas? Do you think you can write it in a much simpler way? It looks clumsy in its current form.

Last Night why is N capital here?
I flew from Manchester to Mumbai in in or on?
flight no it reads no right now. Where is the dot? E307I, departure time at 12:30AM from Terminal 2. Unfortunately , I realised my missing laptop bag when I arrived at my hotel, which I had kept under my front seat (6E). seat in front of me It happened due to long flight with restlessness as a family with infant were boarded next to me and the baby was crying throughout the journey Not sure this is needed but okay
and I apologies apologize? for my negligence.

Its a black American tourister back pack with a tag label of my name and contact details. Its Do you know the difference between its and it's valuable for me because it contains my work laptop, all project related data and few important documents related to my employer. And also my work access cards and house keys are in that bag.Even if you don't write this line you would be okay.

It would be a pleasure if you can arrange to deliver it to my hotel address which is room no 345, The park hotel, beach road, Mumbai Should P, H and B be capital in the address?. If its Again what is the diff between its and it's not possible please ring me on 999xxxx99 so I will pick from the airport itself.

Hoping for a positive feedback and Waiting Why is W capital? for your reply.

Thank you,

Yours Sincerely,

Raja.
Contents are okay but there are too many avoidable errors. Such errors can cost dearly on exam day. You need to be more careful and avoid these mistakes. All the best.
_________________________________________________________________________

WRITING TASK 2

Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors. Do you agree or disagree with this statement

_________________________________________________________________________



Technology lead present generation children are so inclined towards digital entertainment instead of participating in outdoor physical sports or recreation which indeed is an undeniable fact. I strongly agree with the given statement and my views are well explained in the following paragraph.
Not a good introduction. You need to read more on how to write an introduction passage for IELTS. Some pointers are here in this post https://www.canadavisa.com/canada-immigration-discussion-board/threads/ielts-writing-for-band-7-or-above.540392/page-90#post-7568485 and also refer to Liz's videos online.

Most of the young brains nowadays, are so addicted to video games and watching cartoon on televisions. They are so reluctant to leave their room or house while involved with these activity. Even they refuses to have their meal, and some children are so adamant that they will not have their meals unless they are entertained with a mobile to see video rhymes. For instance, my friends child who is 5 years old now will only consume his food by watching youtube in the mobile. We cannot feed him a single spoon unless until rhymes are on in the mobile. In addition to this he is not interested to play outside which led to obesity due to lack of physical exercise. He became so nuclear that, he cannot mingle with any kids.Yes you need to write examples in essay BUT this is too much. 3 lines??? seems like an essay on your friend's kid.


Moreover, staying indoor will develop nuclear mentality to children and once they are grown-ups its difficult for them to be a good team member at work place. As well as, their will be a lot of health related issues due to less intake of fresh air like asthma, respiratory diseases and lung related problem.
Why does this passage so small on length compared to previous one? Try to write a balanced one.

To sum-up, parents should enforce their children to take part in outdoor sports or events either at school or at their homes. Which will keep the growing bones stronger and enough exercise to keep them in radiant health.

Okay I will be honest. You really need to spend a lot of time reading what is required in an IELTS essay. There is not much to review here. We can correct a few mistakes and give pointers to make essay a little better. But, I think you are in a very nascent stage of writing. You just need to spend time to research a little bit more and learn what is expected in IELTS essay. It is not very difficult and you should be able to do that in a week. All the best!

_________________________________________________________________________



Thank you in advance.

Thank you @cansha

 

[akh136]

congrats man!!

Thanks buddy

 

[ammad88]

Hi!
Could you please assess my essay? I would really appreciate this.

Some experts believe that is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than at secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Traditionally (it means since a long time), children have started (grammar - You are talking about the past) learning a foreign language at secondary school. However, some educational institutions include foreign language lessons in a curriculum for primary school pupils. This development has already shown its benefits and shortcomings. (The question is whether advantages of learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school outweigh the disadvantages.) So we need to mention the advantages of learning a foreign language at primary school rather than a secondary one, then mention some possible disadvantage of the same and then inform whether the pros outweigh the drawbacks or not.

To begin with, children at an early age are capable to pick up different languages easier and faster than in their teenage period. This is because children's mother tongue has not settled down and is still being developed. Therefore, it is a perfect time to include a foreign language in an educational process. The flexibility of the primary school curriculum there is advantageous. Educators can include a few short sessions of different languages in a game form. This approach allows pupils to enjoy the learning process and stay focused, enthusiastic and motivated all day long. Besides, it is undoubted that being bilingual as a child enhances the ability to learn other languages as an adult. Indeed, studying languages at primary school also improves children's understanding of other cultures and their desire to obtain knowledge. (This is a good paragraph - relevant to the topic)

Nevertheless, there are some disadvantages as well. First of all, subjects at primary school usually are held by one teacher for a group. Unfortunately, most teachers have limited skills and knowledge of foreign languages. Therefore, schools have to hire additional educators for language lessons. This can affect a school's budget and the flexibility of the curriculum.(This talks about lack of appropriate staff and financial constraints on an institute and not about how it is disadvantageous for children to learn a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school) Another noticeable drawback there is the diversity of languages and their different levels which children bring to secondary school. (Again, how is this statement a disadv. for pupils at primary school to learn a foreign language) Pupils have difficulties continuing studying language after primary school and, as a result, they can lose interest in it. In fact, the possibility to lose schedule flexibility and children's motivation to study languages should be taken into account in this case. (This is somewhat a better disadvantage that students cannot learn a foreign language at primary level) As you see, it is easy to lose track while writing, and this is where we lose marks.

In conclusion, foreign language lessons at primary school have numerous advantages and a few serious drawbacks. Undoubtedly, studying languages at an early age is more beneficial rather than disadvantageous. In my opinion, the shortcomings can be worked out to allow children to become more successful adults. {A conclusion should be a summary of your main ideas (you mentioned about the advantages but nothing specific about the drawback) + a suggestion, if possible - you gave a good suggestion}

Hello Annie, I am not an expert in IELTS writing but I have been working on it for some time now. I have made some comments but you are more than welcome to disagree.

 

[Annie_95]

Hello Annie, I am not an expert in IELTS writing but I have been working on it for some time now. I have made some comments but you are more than welcome to disagree.

Thank you so much. I will take into account your comments

 

[ammad88]

Hello @cansha @H0peAndFa1th and other experts,
Can you please evaluate my essay and let me know of any mistakes that I may have done while writing the essay. Thank you very much.

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.

Do you agree or disagree?

TV, one of the great inventions of mankind seems to consume most of their free time today. I agree, some of its undeniable effects may include laziness among humans and, distraction which leads to reduced human to human interaction.



Television is indeed one of the main sources of entertainment in the world today. People tend to watch television in their free time to enjoy their favorite tv shows or watch their favorite movies, which gives them a sense of relaxation and pleasure. They also utilize the TV set to watch the latest news in order to be informed about what's going around the world. Some people may simply find watching TV as a means to relax because they do not have the energy or the motivation to plan for something extra-ordinary on how to utilize their free time. Thus, television dependency tends to make people lazy.


Furthermore, dependency and attachment to televisions have had repercussions on the society as a whole. While humans spend most of their free time watching their favorite programs, movies or sports, they spend minimal time interacting with eachother. This means, family bonds become weak as children cannot communicate enough with their parents and vice versa. Additionally, community parks which were once filled with children and families, are now haunted places, as many families prefer staying indoors and watching TV.


In conclusion, I affirm that people have indeed resorted to easier methods of spending their free time by depending on Television. This has led to some serious consequences on human social behavior. People should be willing to balance their free time by not only watching TV but spending some time interacting with their own kind.

 

[Rahul03]

Hi!
Could you please assess my essay? I would really appreciate this.

Topic :
Both the rich and poor find the accessibility into the university difficult.Do you agree or disagree?


Education is an essential element in career growth and for bridging the gap between rich and poor class of the society. However, both the underprivileged and the wealthy people find it difficult to get admission in the graduation courses. I totally agree that access to the university education is not a cakewalk. This essay will discuss the reasons for such difficulties for obtaining enrollment in graduation studies.

A successful society needs pool of talented workforce which can be fulfilled through thorough study in graduation programs offered by universities. In order to fulfill these demands of qualified workforce, universities play a very important role by placing a screening criterion in the admission process which is generally in the form of entrance exams. The screening exams are always independent of wealth of students, however totally based on Intellectual Quotient of the students. To give a clear example, almost 1 million people participate in All India Medical Exam which is mandatory to be cleared to secure seat in Bachelor of Medicine and Bachelor of Surgery graduation program, however the entrance exam conducted by education body is so stringent that only 10,000 people clears the exam and get enrolled for the university education.

Another reason for such difficulties is due to lack of infrastructure. The gap between the number of aspirants applying for the graduation course and availability of the number of seats is very wide. For instance, there are only nine Indian Institutes of Technology colleges in India which can accommodated maximum 1000 Students as against 150000 students who apply for the course. The admission to such renowned institutes is purely based on bare minimum requirements such as marks/grades scored in higher education regardless of their position in the society.

In conclusion, all members of society must go through the challenging screening methods implemented by educational institute to get enrolled for graduation studies. Moreover, lack of facilities such as limited institutes for graduation also contributes in difficulties for aspirants which are totally regardless of their background.

 

[deeshu]

Hi everyone,
I am planning to take ielts soon. Please kindly evaluate my writing and give me a band. Even though I know it's not up to the mark but its always good to get feedback from others and some suggestions as well.

Thanks

It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives.

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.

Media has influenced our lives in such a way that it has become extremely difficult to escape it. This essay will discuss the positives and negatives of living in a society which is filled with the presence of media.

On the one hand, there are several benefits of living in a media prevalent society. First, opportunities seem to have increased over past years. There are numerous reality shows on television to showcase one’s talent such as America got talent, Indian Idol etc. Secondly, communication field provides a medium to earn passive income. People are generating revenue from their homes by just posting several videos online. For instance, one can start their own coaching business by posting tutorials on websites such as Udemy. Thus, a platform to show one’s skills and a way of generating money online are the two benefits that can be earned while living in a media rich society.

On the other hand, there are many drawbacks of living in a media omnipresent society. The misuse of media can have detrimental effects such as people often lose their lives while making a video which can make them famous. Take the example of Kiki challenge where one or two guys lost their lives because they were making a video while driving which resulted in an accident. Crimes seem to have increased due to popularity of media as well. Many people use the media as a weapon to take revenge. The cybercrime authorities recently published a report showing that the number of online bullying crimes has increased to 10% as compared to last year. Therefore, a risk to lose one’s life and rising online crimes are two major disadvantages resulted from living in a society rich of media.

In conclusion, existing in a society full of media has its pros such as a chance to show one’s talent and a way to generate revenue. Despite that, there are some cons of living in such a society as well such as accidents leading to loss of one’s life and increasing cybercrimes.

 

[cansha]

Hello @cansha @H0peAndFa1th and other experts,
Can you please evaluate my essay and let me know of any mistakes that I may have done while writing the essay. Thank you very much.

Television dominates the free-time of too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others.

Do you agree or disagree?
.

TV, one of the great inventions of mankind seems to consume most of their free time today. I agree, some of its undeniable effects may include laziness among humans and, distraction which leads to reduced human to human interaction.
This sentence is really written in a very convoluted way and is difficult to read and see your point of view. You could have written this better.


Television is indeed one of the main sources of entertainment in the world today. Avoid writing a generic line at the beginning of a BP. Write your opinion / argument and begin it strong.
People tend to watch television in their free time to enjoy their favorite tv shows or watch their favorite movies, which gives them a sense of relaxation and pleasure. They also utilize the TV set to watch the latest news in order to be informed about what's going around the world. Some people may simply find watching TV as a means to relax because they do not have the energy or the motivation to plan for something extra-ordinary on how to utilize their free time. Thus, television dependency tends to make people lazy. See you took just a long time to hit your point. Just follow the structure that has been discussed numerous times Main argument -> Support statement / argument -> supporting evidence and / or example.

Now if we think about that structure. Is your main argument that TV provides entertainment? If that what the essay wants to discuss? Instead if you just flipped your last line and brought it to the beginning of BP it would help you to follow the structure. So introduce the idea that people are laze because of TV because they spend more time watching TV in free time rather than doing outdoor activities. Then rest of your stuff flows nicely.

Furthermore, dependency and attachment to televisions have had repercussions on the society as a whole. While humans spend most of their free time watching their favorite programs, movies or sports, they spend minimal time interacting with eachother. This means, family bonds become weak as children cannot communicate enough with their parents and vice versa. Additionally, community parks which were once filled with children and families, are now haunted places, as many families prefer staying indoors and watching TV.
Same thing here. The first line is very generic just make your argument.

In conclusion, I affirm that people have indeed resorted to easier methods of spending their free time by depending on Television. This has led to some serious consequences on human social behavior. People should be willing to balance their free time by not only watching TV but spending some time interacting with their own kind

Improve the structure within BP and let's review one more essay to nail down other aspects. One thing at a time helps to build progress. All the best!

 

[simran0]

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