Hi Guys raising CSE at warsaw VO since my file has been transferred from NDVO to WVO. I have drafted a letter, need to know if it sounds right and if there are any changes that i should make or even word it better. Do let me know....Seniors please help. Please note i m sending the exp letter dated september....i know its kinda late....but before they ask me...updataing them....will attach my notorized exp letter and pssport scans front and rear.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I wish to communicate two updates – Experience Letter and Address Pin Code Error
I wish to bring to your attention that I have quite my job at ABC which is stated as current job in the application. While filing the application I was on leave but did not resume service for personal reasons, hence my last date of service was taken into account. Attached is my experience letter for your reference. I am currently evaluating three job offers.
Address Pin Code Error
This is to bring to your attention that the area pincode 4*****4 is stated incorrectly in the PER , AOR mail and ECAS system, the correct are pincode is 4****1. The same is reflected in my application and the passport (attached to the mail).
Thanks for taking out the time to read this mail.
Yours Thankfully
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Dear Sir/ Madam,
I wish to communicate two updates – Experience Letter and Address Pin Code Error
I wish to bring to your attention that I have quite my job at ABC which is stated as current job in the application. While filing the application I was on leave but did not resume service for personal reasons, hence my last date of service was taken into account. Attached is my experience letter for your reference. I am currently evaluating three job offers.
Address Pin Code Error
This is to bring to your attention that the area pincode 4*****4 is stated incorrectly in the PER , AOR mail and ECAS system, the correct are pincode is 4****1. The same is reflected in my application and the passport (attached to the mail).
Thanks for taking out the time to read this mail.
Yours Thankfully
****