N_O said:
Great, thanks!
Btw, could you please share the old one also?
Here is my letter that was not accepted by SL.....
TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN
This is to inform you that Mr.XXXXXX is currently a PhD student with the Department of Chemical Engineering and Applied Chemistry, xxxxxx. Details on his academic history and work experience with the department are as follows:
1. XXXXX joined his Master of Applied Science (M.A.Sc) program in Chemical Engineering and Applied Chemistry at XXXXX, in September 2007. He worked under my supervision in the area ofXXXXXX. He successfully completed his M.A.Sc in September 2009.
2. XXXX joined the Doctor of Philosophy Program in May 2010 . His research focuses on the biologically mediated recovery of valuable base metals from low grade ore's and tailings.
3. In the first year of his study, XXXX was supported by the XXXXX fellowship of $30,000. From his second year onwards, he is supported by an xxxxgrant which pays him $21,600 annually.
4. Starting September 1st 2008 till current date, xxxxx has also been working as a Graduate Research Assistant (NOC Code: 4012) in the department of Chemical Engineering and Applied Chemistry. In the first year, 50% of his time was spent in the course work, and rest, 20 hours/week, towards the research assistantship. Since May 2008, he has been working as a fulltime research assistant contributing 40 hours/week. As a research assistant, his duties include conducting literature reviews, conducting laboratory and computational experiments, and analyzing research results for publication in scholarly articles. The details on the work hours and the annual salary for XXXXX are provided below.
From To Term Hours Salary (Annual)
Sep 2007 Dec 2007 Fall 2007 20 / week $20,400
Jan 2008 Apr 2008 Spring 2008 20 / week $20,400
May 2008 Aug 2008 Summer 2008 40 / week $20,400
Sep 2008 Dec 2008 Fall 2008 40 / week $20,400
Jan 2009 Apr 2009 Spring 2009 40 /week $21,600
May 2009 Aug 2009 Summer 2009 40 /week $21,600
May 2010 Dec 2010 Fall 2010 40 /week $30,000
Jan 2011 Apr 2011 Spring 2011 40 /week $30,000
May 2011 Aug 2011 Summer 2011 40 /week $21,600
Sept 2011 Dec 2011 Fall 2011 40 /week $21,600
Jan 2012 Apr 2012 Spring 2012 40/week $21,600
5. Since 1st January 2008, XXXXX has undertaken several teaching assistantship positions (NOC Code: 4122). As a teaching assistant, his duties included conducting tutorials and quizzes; supervising laboratory sessions; assisting in the preparation and administration of exams; and in grading exams, term papers and laboratory reports. The details on the work hours and the salary from the teaching assistantship positions are provided in the following table.
From To Term Total hours Salary
Jan 2008 Apr 2008 Spring 2009 40 $1511.2
Jan 2008 Apr 2008 Spring 2009 30 $1133.4
Jan 2009 Apr 2009 Spring 2009 40 $1511.2
Jan 2009 Apr 2009 Spring 2009 30 $1133.4
Sept 2011 Dec 2011 Fall 2011 90 $3710.7
6. XXXXX has excellent communication skills in English and has a definite talent for research, which is being realized in valuable data and interpretations. His written work is both clear and concise.
I believe that xxxxx is a valuable member of Canadian society, and I support his application for Permanent Resident status in Canada. If you need any additional information, I would be glad to answer your questions.