1st Refusal on 15 April

[virajpatel022]

I have applied in GIS program sept 2019, and got accepted, got 6 all 6 each bands , paid gic and full 1 year study fees, msc in environmental science 2018( no any backlogs) , but got rejection by following reasons :
Grounds for refusal:

· I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.

· Your proposed studies are not reasonable in light of: your qualifications, previous studies, missing mark sheets, academic record, level of establishment, language abilities, financial ability, and/or your future prospects and plans.

Help me to justify this objection

 

[Arsh_1234]

what was your SOP?

 

[virajpatel022]

what was your SOP?

I am Viraj Hetalkumar Patel from Jesarva, Petlad, Dist. Anand, Gujarat, India. I completed Masters of Science in Environmental Science & Technology by securing 6.64 CGPA in April 2018 from Institute of Science & Technology for Advanced Studies and Research affiliated to Sardar Patel University. Though, I have learnt solid background in Geology, Environmental Biology and Restoration ecology, Environmental management, Environmental Impact Assessment, Air pollution and climate change, Hygiene, safety and mitigations to protect the environment and also basics about Remote sensing and Geographic Information System (RS & GIS) as a core subject. I found that the Geographic Information System (GIS) has important uses in environmental field. I feel that the knowledge of GIS, I possess is limited in the field of environment, where it’s importance belongs to Forestry, Mapping of Soil and Wetlands, Management of Natural Resources and exploration, Determination of land cover and use, Disaster Management. The knowledge of GIS is essential, successful and powerful tool to address environmental issues; therefore to upgrade myself and expand my knowledge at international level I have now decided to pursue, Bachelors of Applied Technology in Geographic Information System with Applied Degree in two years of study offered by Southern Alberta Institute of Technology (SAIT), Canada.

The Southern Alberta Institute of Technology also provides a perfect storm for adoption of an integrated approach – Environmental science with Geographic Information System that cover a broad range of research areas and issues including water resources, climate change, urban planning, environmental justice, vulnerability studies. This Geographic Information System Program allows me to go through an understanding of GIS, including GIS data capture, GIS data modeling, GIS manipulation, GIS Programming, Cartography and Geovisualization. Geographic Information System (GIS) combines the power of relational database management systems with the flexibility of cartographic display technology and is used for problem-solving and decision making.

After completing this course, I will get the skills and experience the techniques that can be used for Energy, Mining, Agriculture, Water Resources, Forestry and Natural Resources Exploration. The Southern Alberta Institute of Technology provides a learning experience that is supported by faculty from a wide range of disciplines and industries. A degree in Geographic information System can open many career paths for me as a GIS Technologist as they are demanded globally as well as in ISRO-India which assures me that I will find ample number of worldwide career opportunities in a variety of positions such as a Natural Resources Explorer, Hydrologist, Project Manager, GIS Analyst, GIS Programmer.

 

[Arsh_1234]

there is no clear view about ur studies.. mns about ur higher secondary education.. even you have not mentioned ur ielts score which is really important

 

[Arsh_1234]

sop is an integral part to get visa... uh have not mentioned your education and your marks properly

 

[virajpatel022]

there is no clear view about ur studies.. mns about ur higher secondary education.. even you have not mentioned ur ielts score which is really important

Yea ,but I have applied through verry good consultant in our area and they have now decided to justify that by lawyer's latter. Can you tell me how much possibly by justify our main aim of study by lawyer?

 

[virajpatel022]

sop is an integral part to get visa... uh have not mentioned your education and your marks properly

But I have attached that documents in application.. should I have to mention it on sop also?

 

[Arsh_1234]

you can get refusal from any good agent.. however i can see that your sop was not enought good to satisfy visa officer.. it is incomplete

 

[Arsh_1234]

yes you have to mention in your sop too... i mentioned too and got the visa in 7 days only

 

[virajpatel022]

yes you have to mention in your sop too... i mentioned too and got the visa in 7 days only[/QUOTE
Well ,good to hear that you got it on 7 days. Did you get any Refusal? How much time you've been in Canada? I will show you justified latter when it will be completed by my consultant. Pls let me know if you know anything about lawyer's role to perform this and also possibilities after proper justification.

 

[virajpatel022]

yes you have to mention in your sop too... i mentioned too and got the visa in 7 days only

Well ,good to hear that you got it on 7 days. Did you get any Refusal? How much time you've been in Canada? I will show you justified latter when it will be completed by my consultant. Pls let me know if you know anything about lawyer's role to perform this and also possibilities after proper justification.

 

[Arsh_1234]

no.. i didnt got any refusal. i am flying on 1 august,.. nd i dont know anything related to lawyers

 

[virajpatel022]

no.. i didnt got any refusal. i am flying on 1 august,.. nd i dont know anything related to lawyers

Thank you for reply .. good luck happy journey

 

[Helican]

Yea ,but I have applied through verry good consultant in our area and they have now decided to justify that by lawyer's latter. Can you tell me how much possibly by justify our main aim of study by lawyer?

Canadian Lawyers are too expensive and their fees range from $2400 to $4000. You cannot just hire Indian lawyers as they wont be authorized. Also agents need to be licensed through IRCC. check if they have the license first.

 

[virajpatel022]

no.. i didnt got any refusal. i am flying on 1 august,.. nd i dont know anything related to lawyers

Example of justification latter



Sub: A kind request to RECONSIDER Study Visa Permit of Canada
Application No: ****
UCI No: ****

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Viraj ********* I am writing this letter as a reply to your office letter dated **** regarding the refusal of my Canada Study Visa Permit. The reason mentioned for my refusal is:

Ground for refusal:
I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the Purpose of visit
Your proposed studies are not reasonable in light of one or more of your qualifications, previous studies, missing mark sheets, academic record, level of establishment, language abilities, or your future prospects and plans.

Purpose of visit:
The purpose of my visit to Canada is crystal clear. I wish to visit Canada only to pursue my further studies in an applied degree Program of Bachelors of Applied Technology in Geographic Information System Program with advance standing in two years of study at Southern Alberta Institute of Technology, Canada. I do not intend to overstay in Canada. I assure you to return to my home country once my proposed study program is completed.

My qualifications, previous studies & academic record:
I completed Masters of Science in Environmental Science & Technology by securing 6.64 CGPA in 2018 from Institute of Science & Tech..........etc

Missing mark sheets:
I have submitted all my academic credentials to VFS. I am again sending all my educational documents for your further consideration


Level of establishment:
. My mother Mrs........ is a ########### and earns Rs. **** annually from both her jobs. My sister Miss..... is pursuing .........Thus, I can say that, I am financially and socially well established.

Further, in order to prove my genuine intention of studying in Canada, I have paid my college fees amounting *****CAD and purchased GIC worth *****CAD. I have an extra fund of INR **** to support my study and stay while in Canada.

Language abilities:
I have appeared for an English Proficiency Test i.e. IELTS and secured L: 6.0, R: 6.0, W:6.0, S:6.0 and overall 6.0 bands which fulfills the admission and college requirement and I have unconditional offer letter issued by the college.

Future prospects and plans:
The Southern Alberta Institute of Technology also provides a perfect storm fo.......etc

After completing this course, I will get the skills and experience the tec......