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Covering Letter
First of all I would like give some slight detail of my higher education. I did my master in Education from Fatima Jinnah Women University Rawalpindi, Pakistan to be found on the following website http://www.fjwu.edu.pk/ in March 2002 while I did my master in political science as a private candidate during my job period to be found on http://www.upesh.edu.pk/ in 2005 from Peshawar University.
I now would like to present a brief account of my professional career till date to the Canadian immigration authorities. I started my professional career in an organization named “National Commission for Human Development” to be found on http://www.nchd.org.pk/ws/. The organization had the some core objectives to improve the Millennium Development Goals through community participation and capacity building of the officials of governmental departments in the field of education, health volunteerism and literacy
I started my career as Social worker in September 2003 in the same organization/ commission and served on the same position up to March 2005. The main job description of mine along with other workers holding this position was to sensitize, mobilize and ultimately facilitate the assigned communities (children, families) about their local educational and health needs/problems.
Moreover, I got promotion in a competition held for the position of Assistant District Program Manager in April 2005. The main responsibilities of the position were to train the social workers about the program objectives and as well as to monitor and facilitate their work. In July 2006, there had been some organization restructuring, in account of which I got promotion to a position of District Coordinator Primary Education. Although the job description of the position was the same as the previous but it carried a little more responsibilities especially in term of field staff (increased). I continued to work on that position up to February 2008.
In Feb 2008, I remained on leaves for three months as being abroad (Sweden) with my husband for his studies. In May 2008 I had to resign as I could not be able to come again to take over my position.
I would also like to share about my superiors/colleagues during my job period. There had a lot of changes in the supervision of my work due to frequent organizational changes. However, Muhammad Ilyas Khattak had been my supervisor/ co facilitator in last two years of my job. He is still working as a District Program Manager in the very same organization. He can be contacted as a reference on his email ilyas.nchd@gmail.com or ilyas.khattak@yahoo.com.
Hence, this is a short summary of my professional career. I remained in Sweden upto November 2009. In this duration I learnt Swedish language and as well as did an English language course.
After my husband pursued his master degree in computer science, we moved to Denmark in June 2010 and remained there up to Nov of the same year, but I had come back to Pakistan due to some emergency in my relatives.
I have also inform the migration authorities that I had once also applied for Canada immigration from Sweden in 2009 but since I didn’t fill the application properly so my file got sent back to me, that is why that letter is also being attached with my application.