i applied for ufv intake 2020 jan .computer info systems 4 yr degree
ietls 7.0 overall band list 7 reading 7 speaking 7 writng 6
10 th 7.8 cgpa and 12 th 80%,CBSE non medical student
and rejected twice. after my first refusal my agent told me to apply again immediately i got rejected twice without knowing my mistake.
ror-i m not satisfied u will leave canada at the end of study your application is refused under subsection 216(1) -purpose of visit
i completed 12th in 2018 and after that done it couples of computer certificates.
i got gcm notes visa officer told
my purposed study is not consistent and logical path.how current or previous employment align with purposed study.doesnt show enough socio-economic ties.study plan was considered but applicant failed to provide explaination why he want to undergo this program why not home country.visa officer not satisfied that high cost of international studying would outset improve career prospect in my home country.
i clearly understand why visa officer told me theses reasons .
the main problem was in my sop.which was very poor lack explanation and failed to respond to these concern.
i was naive my agent didn't mentioned certificates in student permit quetionnaire first mistake i analysed.
i have mentioned in sop but he didn't in SPQ.i was not aware nor my consultant guided me how to write effective sop explaining why i want to undergo explanation of gap year perfectly.
in my sop i wrote i done this this certificate after 12 and now im looking for bachelors in computer the end
missing gap explanation ,why did thoses certificates,why i want to pursue that course.future propect and plan part was copy and paste.it was serious mistake i made bad impression i looked another unserious student who dont what he want to pursue and despite i had good marks still my i failed to explain better explaination.
after my refusal i searched youtubr and net to know how to write effective sop .more i became awared how to write good and winning sop that justify every aspect of your strong and weak points.
i myself realised i failed to write good sop i was not awared my agent took charge wrote most of sop on behalf of me wrote very poor sop.
now i have changed my agent i m going to apply third time.i have significant to detail to explain everything that visa officer have doubt.
the detail that will explain my original story why i took gap and connect my previous experience that lead me to earn degree in computer from . telling why of everything visa officer have doubt.i prepared my sop .
wrote solid plans and prospect in home country not copy paste most sop i seen have ,i have reserched now
hence i have significant detail to add in sop.explained very strong reason and incentive to come back to my home country professional wise.
my concern is that as im going to apply third -and i have significant details now what if visa officer question doubt why didnt me mentioned in his previous sop.
to answer this concern i have real genuine explaination
can i tell visa officer in my sop this time that
my previous consultant was inattentive and didnt guided me in writing effective sop nor he filled my spq carefully missed my certificates to mention
this time i am much more aware which sop wins and rejected
i was such naive and my agent didnt cared about case he thought i will get visa i got good marks and ielts score decent university.
can i tell visa officer my previous agent made made mistake in spq and didnt guided me properly how write my proper feeling in sop and throughout process he was partially involved ?
wrote very short sop second time also he send same sop
now i have took real charge became aware how to make visa application succesfull
ietls 7.0 overall band list 7 reading 7 speaking 7 writng 6
10 th 7.8 cgpa and 12 th 80%,CBSE non medical student
and rejected twice. after my first refusal my agent told me to apply again immediately i got rejected twice without knowing my mistake.
ror-i m not satisfied u will leave canada at the end of study your application is refused under subsection 216(1) -purpose of visit
i completed 12th in 2018 and after that done it couples of computer certificates.
i got gcm notes visa officer told
my purposed study is not consistent and logical path.how current or previous employment align with purposed study.doesnt show enough socio-economic ties.study plan was considered but applicant failed to provide explaination why he want to undergo this program why not home country.visa officer not satisfied that high cost of international studying would outset improve career prospect in my home country.
i clearly understand why visa officer told me theses reasons .
the main problem was in my sop.which was very poor lack explanation and failed to respond to these concern.
i was naive my agent didn't mentioned certificates in student permit quetionnaire first mistake i analysed.
i have mentioned in sop but he didn't in SPQ.i was not aware nor my consultant guided me how to write effective sop explaining why i want to undergo explanation of gap year perfectly.
in my sop i wrote i done this this certificate after 12 and now im looking for bachelors in computer the end
missing gap explanation ,why did thoses certificates,why i want to pursue that course.future propect and plan part was copy and paste.it was serious mistake i made bad impression i looked another unserious student who dont what he want to pursue and despite i had good marks still my i failed to explain better explaination.
after my refusal i searched youtubr and net to know how to write effective sop .more i became awared how to write good and winning sop that justify every aspect of your strong and weak points.
i myself realised i failed to write good sop i was not awared my agent took charge wrote most of sop on behalf of me wrote very poor sop.
now i have changed my agent i m going to apply third time.i have significant to detail to explain everything that visa officer have doubt.
the detail that will explain my original story why i took gap and connect my previous experience that lead me to earn degree in computer from . telling why of everything visa officer have doubt.i prepared my sop .
wrote solid plans and prospect in home country not copy paste most sop i seen have ,i have reserched now
hence i have significant detail to add in sop.explained very strong reason and incentive to come back to my home country professional wise.
my concern is that as im going to apply third -and i have significant details now what if visa officer question doubt why didnt me mentioned in his previous sop.
to answer this concern i have real genuine explaination
can i tell visa officer in my sop this time that
my previous consultant was inattentive and didnt guided me in writing effective sop nor he filled my spq carefully missed my certificates to mention
this time i am much more aware which sop wins and rejected
i was such naive and my agent didnt cared about case he thought i will get visa i got good marks and ielts score decent university.
can i tell visa officer my previous agent made made mistake in spq and didnt guided me properly how write my proper feeling in sop and throughout process he was partially involved ?
wrote very short sop second time also he send same sop
now i have took real charge became aware how to make visa application succesfull
