Refused case

[PP62]

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What shuld i add on then that would make my sop strong

I read this post because I am also preparing SOP for my brother as he wants to come in the Canada for Jan 2023 intake. I haven’t drafted one yet. I am just collecting all information.
I suggest you that whatever information/fact mention in the SOP should be precise and concise rather you compare to other countries. I also agree with some feedback given by our expert that your background, current work experience are not in sync with your future program.

 

[nanika]

What

What shuld i add on then that would make my sop strong

It seems like you are very confused, why not seek help from a professional travel consultant who is expert in Canada visas in your country? ofcorse you have to pay them for their service but they can guide you step by step, from what course and school you should take. apply to universities that will match your experience and education.. they will even help you out writing your SOP, just like what my agents did for me and my spouse.