Would you share a sample essay you did recently? Much like you, I have given the exam so many times with different tactics. I changed from BC to IDP, flew to a small city thinking I could score higher here, flew to a different country, but I kept scoring 6.5 in writing. Finally, I admitted the problem is me and need to focus improving from 6.5 to 7. I registered with Chris (IELTS Advantage) as I mentioned in this thread before and I submitted the first essay draft to him. He had given me 6! The positives are: I am following the structure well with good paraphrasing and explaining my ideas well, but the problem is I am making too many language errors. Because of this, I am scoring low in Cohesion and Coherence as well as GRA category.
I feel many of the people who are stuck to 6.5 are making too many grammatical errors, but they cannot see themselves. Rather than repeating the exam over and over again, it would be better to get a tutor who can see your mistakes and advise you.
In the first three exams, I scored 6 in writing but later I figured out the mistake I was making: I was putting too many ideas in each paragraph. There's a very clear structure to be followed:
Like I said, I follow Chris and this is what I gathered from his website so far:
Opinion Type Essay Structure (You can check his Free 5 Days Challenge. CLICK HERE)
Introduction (Expected Words: Around 50) (Note: The word count is from me, not from Chris. I analyzed the length of his each paragraph)
i.
Paraphrase the question
ii. Thesis statement
iii. Outline statement
Supporting Paragraph One (Expected Words: Around 90)
i.
Topic sentence (state your main point)
ii.
Explanation (
What does your main point mean?
Why have you included it?
How does it answer the question?)
iii.
Example (A specific example that illustrates your main point)
Supporting Paragraph Two (Expected Words: Around 90)
i.
Topic sentence (state your main point)
ii.
Explanation (
What does your main point mean?
Why have you included it?
How does it answer the question?)
iii.
Example (A specific example that illustrates your main point)
Conclusion (Expected Words: Around 35)
i. Restating your opinion and summarizing the main points of your essay (Varying your vocabulary by paraphrasing)
Total Expected Word Count: Around 265
Discussion Type Essay Structure
Introduction (Expected Words: Around 50)
Sentence 1- Paraphrase Question and/or state both viewpoints.
Sentence 2- Thesis Statement
Sentence 3- Outline Sentence
Main Body Paragraph 1 (Expected Words: Around 90)
Sentence 1- State first viewpoint
Sentence 2- Discuss first viewpoint
Sentence 3- Reason why you agree or disagree with viewpoint
Sentence 4- Example to support your view
Main Body Paragraph 2 (Expected Words: Around 90)
Sentence 1- State second viewpoint
Sentence 2- Discuss second viewpoint
Sentence 3- Reason why you agree or disagree with viewpoint
Sentence 4- Example to support your view
Conclusion (Expected Words: Around 35)
Sentence 1- Summary
Sentence 2- State which one is better or more important