I appeared for IELTS 6 times and scored 7 twice in writing. I can tell you from my experience that the best approach is to not force irrelevant ideas or words. Stop using sentences that may sound unnatural, try to keep it simple and only use high vocabulary words where you are certain.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing you to inform about the lost baggage yesterday. I am travelling from New York to Maryland in a train where I put my suitcase on the baggage stand. In that, baggage I have 2 novel, 3 pair of clothes and 1 pair of shoes.
During my journey the baggage was kept on the baggage stand and as I reached my destination station, was rush to catch bus for my university class. In the meanwhile, I forget to pick my baggage from the train.
I need you to kindly find my baggage I have my favorite clothes and shoes my annual dinner to be held on Tuesday, 02 2019. In case you would not find my baggage along with my belonging. I would like to claim for the lost items during my journey from New York to Maryland.
Yours faithfully,
MJM
It's my first even letter for ILETS can you evaluate & mark with band