cheeta37
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- May 11, 2009
- 15
- Category........
- Visa Office......
- CHC ISLAMABAD → CHC LONDON
- NOC Code......
- 0111
- Job Offer........
- Pre-Assessed..
- App. Filed.......
- 04-06-2009
- Doc's Request.
- 05-08-2009
- AOR Received.
- 05-08-2009
- File Transfer...
- Islamabad 05-08-2009 → London 30-06-2010 → Rejected 01-06-2012
Not agreed
- i never observe any rejection due to grammatical mistakes.
- This letter is drafted by his employer not by himself as per legal point so its not his mistake.
NS said:n
See you claim to be an English teacher/lecturer and your experience letter contains numerous errors. Here they are
1. No 'the' before 'college students' (though this may not be serious).
2. You say 'Prepares, administers and Grade tests and record the results' whereas it should be grades (not Grade) and records (not record), a serious error not expected from an English teacher! Moreover using 'and' twice does not sound good.
3 Again unnecessary use of 'the' before students.
4. Unnecessary, rather wrong, use of 'the' between 'as' and 'college'. Interestingly, you did not use the article 'a' before 'tutor incharge' where it was needed. Again the definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'different'.
5. By the way I came across this proverb 'native level' for the first time. Also it is probably proof reader and not proofreader.
Some of your 'sentences' end with full stop while others don't!
Above this all, you claim to be a proof reader who checks all the college's correspondence for spelling mistakes etc.
I am sorry if this hurts you but this is what I felt.