That’s the issue with me too- cant stake listening and reading just to save writing as it is slightly easy on CBT because we spend good amount of time on computer nowadays .
IELTS - Writing - For Band 7 or Above.
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It is must. Trying is not not an option. You must give good grammar to the examiner.
Yes- I have just come out of speaking - which well fabulous - expecting 7.5-8.
That is great bro...rock the show.
Part 1?
Part 2? What was the cue card?
Part 3? Followup Ques?
Hi @H0peAndFa1th @cansha please evaluate this essay, this one I am posting after a long gap.
More than one degree is required to get ahead in many professions today. In the future, it is likely that people will attain a number of degrees before starting work. Respond to this argument.
Nowadays, professional jobs demand for highly educated workers. This, in turn, pushing the individuals to add several degrees to their portfolio. I agree that in the future people will tend to attain a few degrees before starting their professional career. Analyzing, how this helps them outstrip peer competition, and how lesser educational qualification proves to bee a blockroad for career enhancement will prove this thesis.
Firstly, the individual holding higher level degrees stands out from the pool of the candidates due to the fact that more time is spent in learning the facts and concepts, required for successful completion of job. This not only helps the individual to secure a job while standing competent to other candidates but also ease the employer’s work to select the right talent. For example, candidate with a Doctorate in the Data-science will be given preference over the Diploma holder, since the knowledge acquired to earn a Doctorate is superior to that gained in securing a Diploma. This proves that more the college degrees acquired before entering the workforce higher is the competency of the candidate to other counterparts.
Secondly, lack of educational credentials may prove to be a blockroad for the employee having gained a decent years of experience and are expecting promotion to a senior role. This is because, when one grows professionally and attains senior level positions the responsibility and accountability increases, in this case organization may refrain from handing over the position of such a higher accountability to the one with lesser educational qualification. For example, PepsiCo went on to hire their new Voice President externally rather than promoting the CEO who Is taking care of the operations since last two decades, because the newly hired VP holds more educational credentials required for the role. This shows that those in quest of attaining a senior level position early in the career must hold a few additional university degrees.
To conclude, in standing out from the crowd in the age of fierce competition and achieving higher position at workplace, added educational qualifications play a vital role. Thus it is clear that in coming time people will attain a few university degrees before entering the corporate life.
More than one degree is required to get ahead in many professions today. In the future, it is likely that people will attain a number of degrees before starting work. Respond to this argument.
Nowadays, professional jobs demand for highly educated workers. This, in turn, pushing the individuals to add several degrees to their portfolio. I agree that in the future people will tend to attain a few degrees before starting their professional career. Analyzing, how this helps them outstrip peer competition, and how lesser educational qualification proves to bee a blockroad for career enhancement will prove this thesis.
Firstly, the individual holding higher level degrees stands out from the pool of the candidates due to the fact that more time is spent in learning the facts and concepts, required for successful completion of job. This not only helps the individual to secure a job while standing competent to other candidates but also ease the employer’s work to select the right talent. For example, candidate with a Doctorate in the Data-science will be given preference over the Diploma holder, since the knowledge acquired to earn a Doctorate is superior to that gained in securing a Diploma. This proves that more the college degrees acquired before entering the workforce higher is the competency of the candidate to other counterparts.
Secondly, lack of educational credentials may prove to be a blockroad for the employee having gained a decent years of experience and are expecting promotion to a senior role. This is because, when one grows professionally and attains senior level positions the responsibility and accountability increases, in this case organization may refrain from handing over the position of such a higher accountability to the one with lesser educational qualification. For example, PepsiCo went on to hire their new Voice President externally rather than promoting the CEO who Is taking care of the operations since last two decades, because the newly hired VP holds more educational credentials required for the role. This shows that those in quest of attaining a senior level position early in the career must hold a few additional university degrees.
To conclude, in standing out from the crowd in the age of fierce competition and achieving higher position at workplace, added educational qualifications play a vital role. Thus it is clear that in coming time people will attain a few university degrees before entering the corporate life.
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1.do u work of study ?and then general question
2. Music band or sing u listen too
3 . Subsequent questions on how music is important and how it is connected to culture and all .
Cannot not remember exact question - but examiner seems interesting in my ideas and made me feel that I am doing good - hoping that reflect in the exam-
LRW-
Have just finished one set -
L - 37
R- 36
Writing -
T1 - was without an issue in 15 min with checking.
T2- TA was better, just fixing my punctuation issues and subject verb problem.
I am sure - I will be able to deal with it .
Thanks
All great here - but if you re read your BP 1 it seems like you pushing it to higher and lower credential arguement - whereas , it is an arguement between one degree vs several degree- or is it looking like that to me only . Please see
All the best
@mani1985 @pranav_singla055
Please review my essay.
Essay- Some people believe that a vertical city in which people work and live in tall building is a good idea.Others say that horizontal living is better.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays due to space crunch and proliferation in the population, people prefer to live in tall buildings.Earlier people used to stay in buildings in horizontal arrangements.Both arguments has its own beans an boons.
First of all lets try to understand merits of the horizontal living.In this kind of arrangement , generally single floor or double floor buildings are made which are often isolated from each other.This give people independence and private space.Secondly small buildings are well lit and very well ventilated.They give open felling and peaceful environment.
On the other hand, we have sky scrapper buildings. These high rise building offer several benefits such as budgeted accommodation , common places like clubs, swimming pool for socialising.In addition to this people enjoy multilevel security at affordable cost.Moreover the sky touching buildings gives experience of living close to the sky with cleaner air than on the lower floors.
We have noticed the merits of both the arrangements , in my opinion there are certain demerits of both as well.Horizontal arrangements require more space and hence is more expensive.Also under utilisation of the space cause housing problem.Furthermore the maintenance cost of individual house or villa is also expensive.Not only this even tall buildings have some drawbacks , firstly there is always a threat of life in sky scrapper buildings due to natural calamities like earthquakes and secondly they impart concrete jungle type felling,people at time feel claustrophobic.
In conclusion , I believe that both the ideas are good.It is more of personal preference where few people prefer to live in separate houses whereas other like to live in high rise buildings.Thus a mixture of both arrangements would give us good and balanced outlook.
Thanks in advance......................
Please review my essay.
Essay- Some people believe that a vertical city in which people work and live in tall building is a good idea.Others say that horizontal living is better.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays due to space crunch and proliferation in the population, people prefer to live in tall buildings.Earlier people used to stay in buildings in horizontal arrangements.Both arguments has its own beans an boons.
First of all lets try to understand merits of the horizontal living.In this kind of arrangement , generally single floor or double floor buildings are made which are often isolated from each other.This give people independence and private space.Secondly small buildings are well lit and very well ventilated.They give open felling and peaceful environment.
On the other hand, we have sky scrapper buildings. These high rise building offer several benefits such as budgeted accommodation , common places like clubs, swimming pool for socialising.In addition to this people enjoy multilevel security at affordable cost.Moreover the sky touching buildings gives experience of living close to the sky with cleaner air than on the lower floors.
We have noticed the merits of both the arrangements , in my opinion there are certain demerits of both as well.Horizontal arrangements require more space and hence is more expensive.Also under utilisation of the space cause housing problem.Furthermore the maintenance cost of individual house or villa is also expensive.Not only this even tall buildings have some drawbacks , firstly there is always a threat of life in sky scrapper buildings due to natural calamities like earthquakes and secondly they impart concrete jungle type felling,people at time feel claustrophobic.
In conclusion , I believe that both the ideas are good.It is more of personal preference where few people prefer to live in separate houses whereas other like to live in high rise buildings.Thus a mixture of both arrangements would give us good and balanced outlook.
Thanks in advance......................
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Hi guys, finished LRW today.
How much is the penalty if you miss 250 word count by 1 or 2 words ?
How much is the penalty if you miss 250 word count by 1 or 2 words ?
I have managed to write well in - R. Thanks for all help and will see what will be the score
L- pretty tough this time as multiple choice question was tricky.
Reading- first 3 para was easy but last one was pretty confusing - though- I have done my part - let’s see the result now-
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