Have a look at my sop

[Abbasrock9908]

you cannot write an SOP like

it has no beginning or purpose or end you are basically answering the rejection reasons in an informal manner don't do that

attach what you have a as separate file but reduce it down a bit, make it brief and say explanation regarding the previous refusal

Abbas.7mohammad@gmail.com thats my email sir

but this is not an SOP, it has to be precise , specifically about you, don't write general things like scotia bank did not allow you transfer funds from your father's account you actually think the VO is stupid or something? is it impossible to get a bank account in Pakistan?

send me your email i can send you a good reference email but that is just it a reference you cannot copy paste just look at the format if you wish

 

[Abbasrock9908]

Abbas.7mohammad@gmail.com
Thats my email sir

 

[Abbasrock9908]

you cannot write an SOP like

it has no beginning or purpose or end you are basically answering the rejection reasons in an informal manner don't do that

attach what you have a as separate file but reduce it down a bit, make it brief and s

you cannot write an SOP like

it has no beginning or purpose or end you are basically answering the rejection reasons in an informal manner don't do that

attach what you have a as separate file but reduce it down a bit, make it brief and say explanation regarding the previous refusal

but this is not an SOP, it has to be precise , specifically about you, don't write general things like scotia bank did not allow you transfer funds from your father's account you actually think the VO is stupid or something? is it impossible to get a bank account in Pakistan?

send me your email i can send you a good reference email but that is just it a reference you cannot copy paste just look at the format if you wish

ay explanation regarding the previous refusal


but this is not an SOP, it has to be precise , specifically about you, don't write general things like scotia bank did not allow you transfer funds from your father's account you actually think the VO is stupid or something? is it impossible to get a bank account in Pakistan?

send me your email i can send you a good reference email but that is just it a reference you cannot copy paste just look at the format if you wish

abbas.7mohammad@gmail.com that’s my email

 

[Tresh]

Did a scan on your SOP. It showed me 8 grammatical errors, 3 wrong spelling, 12 punctuation errors, 4 conciseness errors, readability ticked good( meaning it can easily be read), 4-word choice errors, 6 additional writing issues, and SIGNIFICANT PLAGIARISM FOUND.

So, please is not that they are trying to downplay your SOP but is to help you as PLAGIARISM is a NO-NO. So please make it your own words, poured out from your heart. If you do it that way, you will surely get it.

All the best.

 

[Vst24]

Can civil engineer take process quality engineering?
Is this program relevant to civil engineer?

 

[Naturgrl]

Can civil engineer take process quality engineering?
Is this program relevant to civil engineer?

If it advances your career and builds on your education, yes.

 

[Vst24]

There is a quality Engineer in our field but I donot know whether my visa will get reject or approve

 

[Vst24]

What should I do than according to you guys than
Rewrite and edit the complete the complete document?

I am a civil engineer , is process quality engineering is relevant for applying visa??