GCMS notes help please

[forever12008]

Hi, I got rejected twice and now I have my GCMS notes, can anyone help me with the notes. I want to make a third one or an appeal but not sure yet.
So please if anyone could help understanding the notes and helping in some advices, I am really in need for this. Thank you very much.

 

[Daksh0512]

Mail them to me sharmadaksh0512@gmail.com

 

[forever12008]

Mail them to me sharmadaksh0512@gmail.com

How much does it cost ?

 

[primaprime]

Post them here.

 

[forever12008]

Post them here.

it is like 42 pages, where should I start

 

[primaprime]

Scroll to the bottom and find where the VO wrote a few sentences about your application. Try searching (Ctrl+F) "refused."

 

[forever12008]

Scroll to the bottom and find where the VO wrote a few sentences about your application. Try searching (Ctrl+F) "refused."

Those are the notes at the bottom of the document, I got rejected before, those are the GCMS for the 2nd application.
NOTES: 1
Created Date: 2020/09/06 05:06:10
Created By: EH03163
Updated Date: 2020/09/06 05:09:20
Updated By: EH03163
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: Ankara
Text:
I note previous refusal. No issue with funds. Large family n Jordan, no issue with ties. Study plan is unclear and vague. PA already holds a BA in civil engineering and has been working in the field for 2 years. Unclear why PA needs/would benefit for a 7 month academic course in construction. On balance, refused.
NOTES: 2
Created Date: 2020/07/22 10:46:25
Created By: RS03260
Updated Date: 2020/07/22 10:46:25
Updated By: RS03260
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: OSC - Operations Support Centre
Text: Name on Application changed: Old Value(s): Name, Name Name Name, 1993/10/24, Male,, Jordan, New Value(s): Name, Name Name Name, 1993/10/24, Male, Amman, Jordan,
NOTES: 3
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:05:15
Created By: WPMAUTOSEARCH
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:05:15
Updated By: WPMAUTOSEARCH
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: GCMS-System
Text: Name on Application changed: Old Value(s): Name, Name, 1993/10/24, Male, Amman, Jordan, New Value (s): Name, Name Name Name, 1993/10/24, Male,, Jordan,
NOTES: 4
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:05:13
Created By: RC-6103
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:05:13
Updated By: WPMAUTOSEARCH
Restricted: No
Label: Adm/Biometric
Office: Amman VFS VAC
Text: 03/01/2020 03:19:08 00105520200301101550 - Client Data: appliant is palestinain but citizenship mentioned on BIL as jordan

NOTES: 5
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Created By: EAIMEL
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Updated By: EAIEAPP
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: GCMS-System
Text: School in Canada I Norn de l'ecole au Canada: Fanshawe College Address of School/ Adresse de l'ecole: 1001 Fanshawe College Boulevard, London/ London, ON/ ON
NOTES: 6
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Created By: EAIMEL
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Updated By: EAIEAPP
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: GCMS-System
Text: Designated Learning Institution/ Etablissement d'enseignement designe: 019361039982
NOTES: 7
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Created By: EAIMEL
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Updated By: EAIEAPP
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: GCMS-System
Text: Student ID/ Numero d'identification de l'etudiant: 1004618
NOTES: 8
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Created By: EAIEAPP
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Updated By: EAIEAPP
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: GCMS-System
Text: Signed By/ Signe Par: Abbas, Suwan (6/10/2020)
NOTES: 9
Created Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Created By: EAIMEL
Updated Date: 2020/06/10 02:04:24
Updated By: EAIEAPP
Restricted: No
Label: General
Office: GCMS-System
Text: Principal Applicant UCI / IUC du repondant: 1116023721

 

[primaprime]

I note previous refusal. No issue with funds. Large family n Jordan, no issue with ties. Study plan is unclear and vague. PA already holds a BA in civil engineering and has been working in the field for 2 years. Unclear why PA needs/would benefit for a 7 month academic course in construction. On balance, refused.

So there's the important part. You need to explain why studying construction in Canada will improve your job prospects in Jordan since you already seem qualified with your engineering degree. Why can't you study in Jordan? I suggest going for a master's in civil engineering. See my guide to study permit refusals (link in signature) for some additional advice.

 

[4vian]

Hi, I got rejected twice and now I have my GCMS notes, can anyone help me with the notes. I want to make a third one or an appeal but not sure yet.
So please if anyone could help understanding the notes and helping in some advices, I am really in need for this. Thank you very much.

when did you applied for gcms and in how many days did you get it?

 

[forever12008]

when did you applied for gcms and in how many days did you get it?

32 days ago by applygcms.com, got them today

 

[forever12008]

So there's the important part. You need to explain why studying construction in Canada will improve your job prospects in Jordan since you already seem qualified with your engineering degree. Why can't you study in Jordan? I suggest going for a master's in civil engineering. See my guide to study permit refusals (link in signature) for some additional advice.

Actually I can explain why, cause I am in need to this program. I think it is not logical to change my course after applying twice for the same program. So do you think an appeal will do or I am supposed to make a new application ? any suggestions

 

[primaprime]

You can appeal a refusal with a lawyer but it would be easier to re-apply with a different course. It's perfectly logical to change it in order to address your refusal reasons. You can say so in your new SOP.

 

[jweekend]

Actually I can explain why, cause I am in need to this program. I think it is not logical to change my course after applying twice for the same program. So do you think an appeal will do or I am supposed to make a new application ? any suggestions

No. The visa officer is wondering why you need to spend thousands of dollars to travel halfway around the world to canada just to do a 7 month course. Then travel all the way back home, and what benefits will it give you? Will your pay raise be even enough to justify spending that much money travelling and living in Canada?

The course/college is not well known, not even good, heck it's not even sub-par. You can literally get the same course any where in the world, in your home country, or somewhere cheaper or closer to your home country.

It is clear and obvious that you're not going there for the purpose of study.