It is OK to me. Around 70% covered.
BTW, you have provided responsibilities of Head Nurse and not necessarily, it means you have performed those
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I would suggest write something like "Mr Bosschipps as Head Nurse, performed the following duties and responsibilities"
Some of the comments that I can give:
Adhere to the hospital's policies and procedures including the vision mission of the institution:
Adherence to those is the duty of all. Better write Ensure adherence to ....
Adhere to hospital's nursing service division policies and procedures:
Adherence to those is the duty of all. Better write Ensure adherence to ....
Communicate information effectively both verbally and in writing :
what do you communicate and why? Elaborate those
Attend regular trainings offered by accredited professional nursing organizations :
You are actually complying and may not be a role and responsibility.
Willingly be rotated in any nursing units and during night shifts as the need arises :
It is desired quality and not roles.
Must be compassionate and have a lot of patience in rendering care and can tolerate high work related stresses which able to adapt changes willingly:
It is desired quality and not roles.