Canadian Study Permit Rejected, need help please

[jaffery1990]

Hello members,
today I have collected my passport from visa application center Karachi , Pakistan, my application was refused on following ground

:

A-You have not satisfied me that you would leave Canada at the end of your stay, In reaching this decision, I considered several factors, including:
-Purpose of visit.

B-Other Reason:
-Upon complete review of the application and the reasonableness of undertaking the proposed studies in Canada, I am not satisfied you will actively pursue the proposed program of study under R220. 1; Not satisfied that your primary purpose is to study.


Now I have following questions:
1- Do I need to submit all documents again or answer those area on which VO is not satisfied?

2- Should I apply online or again go for paper based submission?


Please note that my course start is in the first week of Sep-17


Please help me out, what should I do? and how should I satisfy visa officer against the raised points?

 

[scylla]

You'll need to write out the reasons why you were refused. We can't see the image.

You'll also need to provide your full profile (past education and grades, any past work experience, what you planned to study in Canada, what proof of funds you demonstrated and how much, what proof of ties to your home country you showed, IELTS scores, etc.)

 

[jaffery1990]

I have added the point on which application for visa was rejected.

 

[scylla]

Again, we can't help you until you provide your full profile.

 

[jaffery1990]

My profile in detail:

1-IELTS:
2016 Academic Module Test
British Council of Pakistan
6.5 overall Band score (Listening 7.0, Reading 6.0, Writing 6.0 and speaking 6.5)

2(a)-Professional Education:
2017 SAP User End Training Course by EXD and ACCA
Scored 79 marks out 100 marks.

2014-2016 Advance Diploma in Accounting & Business (ACCA UK)
ACCA Part Qualified Accountant. (Studied from UK)

2(b)-Professional Courses:
2015 -Online Course “Innovation: The Key to Business Success” by University of Leeds.

2015 -Online Course “Exploring English: Language and Culture” by British Council UK.

2013 -1 Month Course “Advance Microsoft Excel” from APTECH Karachi.

2012 -1 Month Course “Microsoft Office 2007” from APTECH Karachi.

2(c)-Academic Education:

2013-2016 Bachelors of Commerce (B.COM)
University of Karachi (Passed)
2nd Division

2008-2010 Higher Secondary Certificate (HSC)
Board of Intermediate Education Karachi,
Result: 60.27% Marks obtained: 663 out of 1100

2005-2007 Secondary School Certificates (SSC)
Board of Secondary Education Karachi,
Result: Grade A Marks obtained: 666 out of 850

3-Working Experience:

A- Designation: Business Coordinator; Organization: FS Service Pvt Ltd . K-Electric IBC Bin Qasim Karachi. Time Period: 11th April-16 to Feb-17

B- Designation:Project Manager; Organization: FS Service Pvt Ltd Deputed at: FS Pvt Ltd Head Office Karachi. Time Period: May-17 to Present Day
Job Role:
 My job is to coordinate with K electric management, report them on weekly basis.
 Communication with FS Services Pvt Ltd on field officers is part of my job.
 Calculation Rebate amount and offering it to K electric default consumers.
 Preparing FS invoices and FS Monthly audit reports is also part of my job.

4-Course selected for studying in Canada: Bachelors of Business Administration (4 yrs program) (University of Regina September intake).

5- Financial Fund Showed:
Please note that my father was the primary sponsor whilst I will study in Canada, to prove it I showed them following documents:
a- My father employment letter with Annual salary of £60,000 ($ 98,306 cad).
b-Salary slips of my father for the last six month.
c-Original Barclay Bank statements last 9 months.
d-Investment certificate of Pakistani rupees 2.4 million ($28,571 cad).
e- Property on my mother name which have a market value of 17 million Pakistani rupees ( $201,876 cad).
f-Letter on my father's company letter head that he will sponsor me and I depended on him.

I have also submitted my own bank statement of last six months with closing balance of 2.1 Million Pakistani rupees ($24,937 cad).

6-Ties with countries:

a- Strong financial support in home country.
b-I am married, my wife is here in Karachi, Pakistan.
c-I have a 4 month old baby living in karachi.
d- I never overstated in any part of world.
e-Went to UK and came back on time without overstating with 98% attendance in my college classes and good academic
reference from college.
f-Went to USA but never over stayed.

The thing is that I never overstayed in part of world, followed each and every rule of the country, took course for which I went and never involved in any fraudulent activities.

I hope this will be enough, if still you need more information let me know.
Thank you.

 

[canuck78]

You have already completed a BCom. you would therefore not gain anything academically from attending U of Regina.

 

[jaffery1990]

You have already completed a BCom. you would therefore not gain anything academically from attending U of Regina.

I know I have done 2 years Bachelors, but now I have going for 4 years Bachelors. May be I will take 1 or 2 year exemption on the basis of B.COM
My question is that how I satisfy VO, there are only two points to answer.
I have invested 6 month in this process, its not abt money, its abt the time I have invested.

I will be grateful to you, if you can answer me adequately.
Thank you

 

[canuck78]

I don't think it is likely that you will ever get approved for such a similar degree. You need to show that you are coming to Canada to advance your knowledge base which will allow you to pursue more opportunities.

 

[Mandi14]

Hi All,

I am 37 year old women with two kids, co-founder of a start-up from last two years in India with study gap of 13 years. I have sound financial and travel history (Including long term visa and visits to US and Canada). Applied for Canadian study permit from the USA during my visit last month but got refusal letter stating "purpose of visit" and "current employment situation" as the reason for refusal.

I have applied for the second time from India and provided documentation regarding my ownership details of the
company etc... and provided explanation that why i will come back to India as my husband is really well settled professionally in India.

I am keeping my fingers crossed for the outcome... what's your take on my profile and chances to get approval this time.

 

[canuck78]

What is your educational background? What are you hoping to study?

 

[Mandi14]

What is your educational background? What are you hoping to study?

PGDCA 51%
MA 46%
ILETS 5.5

Want to upgrade my studies to better support my business..

 

[canuck78]

Unfortunately your marks and your IELTS score are very low. I don't think it is likely you will get a student visa but you have already applied so I guess you will see soon enough. Best of luck.

 

[Regina]

Unfortunately your marks and your IELTS score are very low

Agree. Also kind of program are you applied in Canada? Did you get a conditional acceptance at the university?