I copied my ref letter from a friend of mine who got accepted about a year ago! They are almost the same!
Do you guys think if it is a good idea to send CIC an email mentioning that why my firend with the same letter has been approved but not mine?
Thanks a lot,
My letter:
This letter is to confirm that Mr. XXX is a full-time graduate student enrolled in Ph.D. program in the Department of XXX at the University of XXX. He has started his program winter 2011 under my supervision and has been employed as a research assistant and as a teaching assistant during semesters.
Mr. XXX commenced his employment with The University of XXX as a graduate research and teaching assistant on January 10, 2011. Since then, his total working hours and annual incomes are as follows.
From January 2011 to January 2013, his total working hours was 40 hours per week and his total annual earning was $XXX per year.
From January 2013 to March 2014, his total working hours has been 20 hours per week and his total annual earning is $XXX per year.
In addition, He received XXX graduate Fellowship in 2012 with the value of $XXX due to his outstanding academic record.
As a Teaching Assistant, Mr. XXX organizes the materials as required by university professors for laboratory sessions. He also conducts laboratory sessions to supplement lectures. In addition, he answers student's questions about the materials of the course during office hours. Assistance in the preparation and administration of examinations, grading quizzes and laboratory reports, and record keeping are also part of his duties.
As a research assistant, Mr. XXX conducts literature reviews, surveys, computer simulations and analytical analysis. In addition, he compiles research results and assists in the preparations of journal articles as well as conference papers.
Please do not hesitate to contact me for further information,
Sincerely,
My Friend's letter: (He put salary and hours in another letter from payroll service)
This letter is to confirm that Mr. XXX is a full-time graduate student enrolled in PhD program in the Department of XXX at the University of XXX. He has started his program Fall 2009 under my supervision and has been continuously employed as a Research Assistant and as a Teaching Assistant during semesters.
As a Teaching Assistant, Mr. XXX organizes reference materials, visual aids and other materials as required by university professors for lectures. He also conduct seminars, discussion groups and laboratory sessions to supplement lectures. Assistance in the preparation and administration of examinations, grading term papers and laboratory reports, and record keeping are also part of his duties.
As a Research Assistant, Mr. XXX conducts literature reviews, surveys and laboratory experiments. In addition, he designs new experimental equipment and carries out experiments, and analyzes the results. Finally, Mr. XXX assists in the preparation of progress reports, journal articles or papers as well as conference and sponsor presentations.
Please do not hesitate to contact me for further information,
Sincerely,