In the exam, I wrote something like the letter below. What do you think guys? Is it likely to get 7
Dear Mr. Smith
I am writing to thank you for finding and sending my driving license that I have lost.
Please let me begin by expressing my most heartfelt appreciation for your kind help. I am a school bus driver for a local public school, and as you may guess, I couldn’t have been allowed to do my job without having my driving license. Therefore, there is no word to express how grateful I am for your help.
Could you please give me more information for the whereabout of the driving license when you found it? The reason for my inquiry is that I have lost my health card, which I must have fallen it out of my coat pocket along with my driving license.
I was hoping to arrange to meet you in order to talk about these details. By way of the meeting, I would like to give you a gift for your time and effort in finding and sending my document back to me.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,