English mistakes

[Hana Diabas]

Hello everyone

a friend wrote this support letter for our application
our first language is not English

is there any mistakes in it ?

April 2, 2018



To Whom it May Concern:


My name is X, Canadian citizen. I am first cousin of XX , a current resident of United Arab Emirates(UAE). While I have known X since birth; X was introduced to me via X in 2014. I am writing this letter to attest that , hereinafter referred to as “the couple”, have been married since December 2016. I have attended X bridal shower, which took place at her family home in Brampton in September 2016. Soon after, X left Canada to Palestine where she married X in a small ceremony. Upon her return to Canada in January 2017, I visited X with my husband and four children. In December 2017, X and her family went back to Palestine so that she can reunite with her husband, J Both families of the couple arranged for another big wedding on December 16th, 2017. The couple then left to the UAE and stayed together until March 25th. X had to come back to Canada in order to catch up with her school and job, and also to work on X s sponsorship application, so that they can finally unite. I visited X on March 30th, 2018.

To my knowledge, the couple has known each other and has been in love since 2008, when they both lived in Palestine. I am also aware that the couple got officially engaged in 2014; I have been a witness to their relationship and devoted love since then. They are truly in love and have no deviant reasons for their marriage other than them wanting to establish a family and spend their lives together.

I have visited X’s with my family four times since 2016, and have been friends on Facebook since 2014. Photos of me and my kids with X at her bridal shower and during other visits are available upon request

X is a respectful hard working young man working in the IT sector, and I’m so pleased to learn that he is being sponsored to Canada. I am positive he will be a great asset to the Canadian community and work sector. I would be happy to see him and X living a stable life together and building their career and family.

Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Kind Regards,

 

[faithey]

I think it's an excellent letter with a lot of detail. I dont think it matters if there are mistakes, as long as it is easy to understand. The immigration officers know they are dealing with people whose first language is often not english.

 

[Alurra71]

Very well written and quite understandable. I would however go ahead and alter the letter here on the forums to exclude the couples names.

 

[faithey]

Very well written and quite understandable. I would however go ahead and alter the letter here on the forums to exclude the couples names.

Oh Yes, that's true!!

 

[canuck_in_uk]

Hello everyone

a friend wrote this support letter for our application
our first language is not English

is there any mistakes in it ?

The letter is fine. However, as said above, you should remove the personal info.

 

[canuck_in_uk]

Oh Yes, that's true!!

You will need to alter your original response as well, as you have quoted the OP's entire post.

 

[Hana Diabas]

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I think it's an excellent letter with a lot of detail. I dont think it matters if there are mistakes, as long as it is easy to understand. The immigration officers know they are dealing with people whose first language is often not english.

Oh , thank u for your response !
i'm very nervous about everything , its not easy dealing with the government u know !
but ur reply has assured me

 

[canuck_in_uk]

Oh Yes, that's true!!

Again, you need to go alter your post to remove OP's personal info.

 

[icelandicpie]

Hello everyone

a friend wrote this support letter for our application
our first language is not English

is there any mistakes in it ?

April 2, 2018



To Whom It May Concern:


My name is X and I am a Canadian citizen. I am XX's first cousin and a current resident of the United Arab Emirates (UAE). While I have known X since birth, X was introduced to me via X in 2014. I am writing this letter to attest that, hereinafter referred to as “the couple”, have been married since December 2016. I have attended X's bridal shower, which took place at her family home in Brampton in September 2016. Soon after, X left Canada to Palestine where she married X in a small ceremony. Upon her return to Canada in January 2017, I visited X with my husband and four children. In December 2017, X and her family went back to Palestine so that she could reunite with her husband, J. Both families of the couple arranged for another big wedding on December 16th, 2017. The couple then left to the UAE and stayed together until March 25th, 2018. X had to come back to Canada in order to catch up with her school and job, and also to work on X s sponsorship application, so that they can finally unite. I visited X on March 30th, 2018.

To my knowledge, the couple has known each other and has been in love since 2008, when they both lived in Palestine. I am also aware that the couple got officially engaged in 2014; I have been a witness to their relationship and devoted love since then. They are truly in love and have no deviant reasons for their marriage other than them wanting to establish a family and spend their lives together.

I have visited X’s with my family four times since 2016, and have been friends on Facebook since 2014. Photos of me and my kids with X at her bridal shower and during other visits are available upon request

X is a respectful hard working young man working in the IT sector, and I’m so pleased to learn that he is being sponsored to Canada. I am positive he will be a great asset to the Canadian community and work sector. I would be happy to see him and X living a stable life together and building their career and family.

Should you require any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me.

Kind Regards,

I fixed a couple minor things, but overall it's a great letter
In the last paragraph I'm not sure if you meant "respected" (as in, people respect him because he's hard working etc) instead of respectful (polite) but both are correct