sir i hve attached the SOP which i am using for applying again.
please see hows it and do the editing
To,
The Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission
Canada
Sub: Study Permit Application
PERSONAL INFORMATION
My name is Dr Himanshu.Since the completion of my education in dentistry,I open my own dental office and started managing it and practising in it.My younger brother is in school. I am in a family of four people. My father MrKrishan Kumar Sharma worked in Indian Army for 23 years and presently working in an NGO and involved in doing social work and Organising health care camps. My mother is a housewife starving to help Our family in work related to home and work as a support system for my father in their social activities.
WORK Experience
-After the completion of my Bachelors in dental surgery,Iopen my own dental clinic and started Managing and Practising in it since 2017 October till date
Why northern lights college and how this course will help me in my in future
1. The college is in peace area,which will provide me with good environment to study
2. It provides world class education. It also fostersinteractive and developmental experiences inleadership and social responsibility.
3. It has good ratings for teaching quality .Small classroom size enhance the interaction betweenstudents and teachers, which eventually leads tobetter understanding of the course.
4. It offers number of scholarships for the international students, which are often merit based.
5. It is the globally recognized college thatprovides number of career opportunities ,thusimproving students employability throughinternship and work experience program.
6. It provides students academic and co-curricularactivities with an emphasis on global connection.
7. In addition to excellent student service facilities ,it also enhance the overall development of thestudent.
WHY I CHOOSE CANADA?
I choose Canada for my higher studies because itprovides wonderful opportunities and experiences aswell as world class education. There are globallyrecognized courses and institutions that providesflexible courses which are equipped with globalperspective. Also, I want exposure at the internationallevel. Apart from this
Career Prospects
The objective of this program is to enhance the employability of internationally educated nurses as they transition into health related administrative assistant careers in Canada. Students may assisted in moving into entry-level management positions in the health sector.
conclusion
This program brings together participants from all over the world, so I would be in contact with diverse cultures and I would also develop an International network. It would be very rewarding to share and exchange thoughts and ideas with a group of people who are from different nationalities, cultural orientation and schools of thought on one platform. Studying in Northern Lights college, British Columbia will make this experience more delightful as the city of Dawson Creek is in peace asrea which makes it very pleasant and peaceful place to learn and grow.
I am confident that the program Post Degree Diploma business management in healthcare administration specialization would significantly impact my professional life and would fully equip me with comprehensive, specialized and rigorous professional training in all aspects of Business and Management in providing healthcare. I had applied for a study permit but unfortunately the visa got refused. Study permit Application Number was S302994608.I was being denied a visa with the following reason:
I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
So taking in consideration of the refusal of my application,
1) I have a flourishing dental office in india,named as “KRISHNA DENTAL CLINIC’,whichcannot be run for big time in my physical absence.
2) I am the elder mot son in the family,eventuallyI have big responsibility to take care of my parents,as they will get old in coming few years.
3) My friend Dr Vikrant did the same course from Australia and now he is at HEALTH ADMINSTERATOR post at “GangaRamHospital”,which indeed a big position earning a very good amount.
4) Like my friend this program will also make me stand in highly competitive crowd in india,which will lead to better employment status after the completion of course.
5) We (family) is planning to build a hospital on our land,which is currenty not used,this will be whole and sole my responsibility to take care for the same.
6) I have my parental assets in india,likeresidential flats,one shp and agricultural land,whom I had to take care
I would like to state that i am being inspired from my father atitude towards my nation,so,I would also like to provide common mass with healthcare as good as possible. I believe that the knowledge I have gained is little and there is much more to learn. I feel that I am not equipped with the Business and adminsterative tools that are fundamental to evolve in this competitive world.Iam sure that this study will definitely widen the horizons of my knowledge and help me attain a milestone in my career and would ensure better employment opportunities and a successful career back at home country. I have an IELTS score of 7overall with no band less than 6.0 which meets the requirement of the college and also I have completed my overall education in English medium. I had attached along with my visa application, the proofs showing financial stability including the General Investment Certificate form Scotia bank of worth $10000. I had also made the payment of 1st year tuition fee.
I would like to bring to your notice that my parents are funding for my education and I will not get another chance to pursue a program in Canada again. So I humbly request you to kindly reconsider my file and hope I will be granted a study permit approval soon.
I assure you that if I am given a chance to study in Canada I will be completing my studies with flying colors and will make my country and my family proud by establishing a successful Business in India.
