• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
This is what I wrote in my SOP
About the course
I have been accepted into Bachelor of Sciences program at Memorial University, NL,
Canada. It is a four years degree course and has wide range of major and minor subjects
to choose and pursue according to one’s interest. The B.Sc program also gives me an
option to take Computer Science as a major that has always fascinated me. If I talk
about world of computers and its applications, it has taken our world by storm.
Specially, in a growing economy like India, it is playing a pivotal role in providing
innovative and efficient solutions to our problems. The Computer Science major has a
great deal of scope in India. There are wide range of software and applications that are
there in the market and have made our life much easier. I can give an example of
platforms like Flipkart, Uber, Ola, Amazon, Zomato etc. that has provided jobs to many
while delivering efficient services to consumers. For instance, the food delivery app like
Zomato has given jobs to many people and has given business to many restaurants. It
has put on map those restaurants also that no one till recent times knew about.
Similarly, Uber and Ola has made transportation much easier lessened the requirements
of public transport.
Future plans
Regarding my goals for the future, I plan to take what I learn in Canada and apply it to
the industry in my native country. The industry is rapidly growing and shows great
potential, yet compared to other, more advanced countries it is still in its relative
infancy. By studying and getting a degree in Canada, I expect to have the expertise, the
perspective, and the experience necessary to lead our industry to a new era. I want to
use the knowledge and experience from Canada to get a job in India.
Why Canada is my ultimate destination?
It is a fact that Canada is an ultimate destination for pursuing studies as it has first rate
education system with high standards. The education provided in Canada is globally
recognized. The education system is based on new ideas, practical knowledge and
career oriented training that is really helpful in getting placed in renowned companies.
Specially, degree from a Canadian University has a great value in India and in Indian
companies. Canada also provides a secure environment for students and welcomes
international students with warm hands.
How do I overcome this rejection?.what did do wrong?.
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
This is what I wrote in my SOP
About the course
I have been accepted into Bachelor of Sciences program at Memorial University, NL,
Canada. It is a four years degree course and has wide range of major and minor subjects
to choose and pursue according to one’s interest. The B.Sc program also gives me an
option to take Computer Science as a major that has always fascinated me. If I talk
about world of computers and its applications, it has taken our world by storm.
Specially, in a growing economy like India, it is playing a pivotal role in providing
innovative and efficient solutions to our problems. The Computer Science major has a
great deal of scope in India. There are wide range of software and applications that are
there in the market and have made our life much easier. I can give an example of
platforms like Flipkart, Uber, Ola, Amazon, Zomato etc. that has provided jobs to many
while delivering efficient services to consumers. For instance, the food delivery app like
Zomato has given jobs to many people and has given business to many restaurants. It
has put on map those restaurants also that no one till recent times knew about.
Similarly, Uber and Ola has made transportation much easier lessened the requirements
of public transport.
Future plans
Regarding my goals for the future, I plan to take what I learn in Canada and apply it to
the industry in my native country. The industry is rapidly growing and shows great
potential, yet compared to other, more advanced countries it is still in its relative
infancy. By studying and getting a degree in Canada, I expect to have the expertise, the
perspective, and the experience necessary to lead our industry to a new era. I want to
use the knowledge and experience from Canada to get a job in India.
Why Canada is my ultimate destination?
It is a fact that Canada is an ultimate destination for pursuing studies as it has first rate
education system with high standards. The education provided in Canada is globally
recognized. The education system is based on new ideas, practical knowledge and
career oriented training that is really helpful in getting placed in renowned companies.
Specially, degree from a Canadian University has a great value in India and in Indian
companies. Canada also provides a secure environment for students and welcomes
international students with warm hands.
How do I overcome this rejection?.what did do wrong?.
