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Bhaktapur

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May 18, 2016
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Dear My friends,
My study permit was rejected by showing others reason. Again I am going to apply in this week. I need your help in explanation letter. Please You are requested to read and amend accordingly.

I would like to express my reasons to study in Canada. I've been accepted to the DVS program in Computer Support at the Lester B. Pearson Vocational College in Montreal from September 2016 to March 2018.

Working as an Office Manager since long time, has let me to realize I would need to improve my computer skills including an overview of computers, their functions and different software or applications pertinent to the job, which helps to make me more competitive in Nepali market. This training in computing support will teach me how to manage and install network resources, optimize computer performance, solve computer troubleshoot,resource sharing set up, and time management, as well as use of software, older and recent operating systems, application software, telecommunications and database.

All of the above will help me reach one of my goals that is to be able to analyze the architecture and operation of computer systems and provide service to clients in the workstations, and also acquire skills for the implementation of essential practices at our offices in Nepal that will modernize our work and solve problems in a better way.

I have been working at the same company since 2008, and they have guaranteed me a job and promotion after the program completion. For that reason, I have made all investment in Nepal to be able to study in Canada, since an international experience will be excellent for my professional life and enrich also my personal goals, and after I can continue working in Nepal.

I would like to study this computing support program because is short and has the content I need for my future plans in the company. After achieving the international level experience will make me perfect in the Engineering consulting firm and help me to get promotion in future. There is a great value of study in Nepali organizations who accomplished from abroad country. I am non technical person and the course is technical which make me more competent in the organization.

That applying for a program in a university will be more expensive and difficult for the admission process and that’s why I have chosen it. My clear intention is to get an International level degree in the short time and need to back my country at the earliest to resume my work in the company.

Moreover, after completing the study I need to return to my country because my wife will be waiting for me in Nepal, and also my family members since all are living in Nepal and I am very close to them.

I thank you in advance for your attention to my application and I appreciate your approval. This project will greatly contribute to my life.

Best regards,
 

Bhaktapur

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May 18, 2016
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Yes. I had also applied for September. when it is rejected again I am applying for same season.
 

MONTY39

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Jul 28, 2016
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Do you have enough time left to apply now? When is your course commencing?
Ensure you apply to the earliest to avoid last moment refusals. Time is critical.
 

under_pressure

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Oct 9, 2015
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My humble notes....:

1.- "....as an Office Manager since long time, has let me to realize I would need to improve my computer skills". I know you are trying to connect your previous job with the future... But in my opinion is not so normal trying to improve your knowledge at office level by learning about telecommunications and databases, I mean this last goes beyond to just "improve knowledge" so it's like just a new career, two different levels. I can't see clearly the connection if you put it in that way.

2.- "...and they have guaranteed me a job and promotion after the program completion". Do you have prove of this? I mean for support this statement, I think this is a strong point if you have how to prove it.

You can say something like: ...I worked several years like Office manager, always related to computational platforms and I always was curious and interested in deeper my knowledge in this field because it has good laboral opportunities in Nepal. Now I have been offered with a job position like IT Support which would improve my future career possibilities in this company, like better salary and challenging wide possibilities in a developing technological field in my country Nepal...

That's just an idea.... ;D

Why do you think they rejected you?? What it said under "others reason"?
 

Bhaktapur

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May 18, 2016
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Thank You very much for your valuable suggestion.