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Study permit approved after 3 refusals

Mangi@321

Full Member
Oct 25, 2019
44
4
Bro can you please help me with SOP ?
I got refusal yesterday. They mentioned that
I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
Please send me your SOP if it's possible
kaushikmangi4@gmail.com
 

Naijaboy

Hero Member
Dec 29, 2019
327
49
Bro can you please help me with SOP ?
I got refusal yesterday. They mentioned that
I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
Please send me your SOP if it's possible
kaushikmangi4@gmail.com
What school and did you pay half of your tuition fees and include an sop
 

JunaidJumani

Member
Jan 3, 2020
18
4
For the first two given reasons, I can help you with my experience. For the last reason (they also gave me that reason in my first SP REFUSAL) , I can't help you until I know about your previous degree and the program you gonna study in Canada, your ielts score and your academic score.
Hi dear, I had applied for study permit, I have been admitted in MBA at UCW vancouver.
My ielts is 6.5 overall.
I just got this corresponding letter stating


• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
• based on your family ties in canada and pakistan
• based on limited employment prospects in your country of residence.
• based on your current employment situation.

COULD YOU PLEASE HELP ME OUT TO ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS IN A PERFECT WAY AND CONVINCE VISA OFFICER IN NEW APPLICATION.
I would be grateful to share my SOP wit
Thank you.
 

Naijaboy

Hero Member
Dec 29, 2019
327
49
I applied for Matrix college ,aslo submitted SOP
Actually, my IELTS score is overall 6.5 not less than 5.5 which meet requirement of college.
Should i improve my IELTS score too ?
Your IELTS is good but you need to make your sop strong like you need to link your proposed program to your country economic situation for example if you are studying computer science you can say that you country is still in it's prime at computer tech at all and you want to be involved in the spark that lits it and you want to revolutionalize computer science in your home country, lastly I'll suggest you create you sop by yourself and make it 5pages or more you need to include every single detail
 

Naijaboy

Hero Member
Dec 29, 2019
327
49
Hi dear, I had applied for study permit, I have been admitted in MBA at UCW vancouver.
My ielts is 6.5 overall.
I just got this corresponding letter stating


• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
• based on your family ties in canada and pakistan
• based on limited employment prospects in your country of residence.
• based on your current employment situation.

COULD YOU PLEASE HELP ME OUT TO ANSWER THESE QUESTIONS IN A PERFECT WAY AND CONVINCE VISA OFFICER IN NEW APPLICATION.
I would be grateful to share my SOP wit
Thank you.
What course
 

pkapoor

Hero Member
Dec 11, 2019
253
19
Bro can you please help me with SOP ?
I got refusal yesterday. They mentioned that
I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in
subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.
Please send me your SOP if it's possible
kaushikmangi4@gmail.com
What was yout time line ? When did u apply ?
 

Mangi@321

Full Member
Oct 25, 2019
44
4
Your IELTS is good but you need to make your sop strong like you need to link your proposed program to your country economic situation for example if you are studying computer science you can say that you country is still in it's prime at computer tech at all and you want to be involved in the spark that lits it and you want to revolutionalize computer science in your home country, lastly I'll suggest you create you sop by yourself and make it 5pages or more you need to include every single detail
My course was global supply chain management.
I've already written a SOP . Could you help me with it. I'll send you my SOP via email.
 

overhaul03

Star Member
Jan 3, 2020
53
24
Hello everyone,
As you can see in the title, I applied total 4 times for Canadian study permit from February 2019 to July 2019. They refused my study permit 3 times. Last 2 were refused with the same reason : purpose of visit.
My profile wasn't so strong. 12th: 46%
Bachelors : 50%
Current topup degree (Final year of another bachelor's degree) 63% (Didn't even receive my degree certificate of second degree when I applied, I received it after visa approval)
Ielts: 7.5 no less than 7
I ordered GCMS NOTES after my first refusal and tried to understand from the reasons given for refusal and tried to write a new statement of Purpose, but even after that, they rejected it twice.
With several rejections and studying my old statement of Purpose, I slowly started understanding what visa officer is actually looking for in your application. I wrote a statement of purpose of 5 pages (it's too much, isn't it) with every detailed information and within 2 weeks, I got visa approval. So I want to tell everyone who is thinking to give up after 1 or 2 rejections even after having a strong case, just don't. Don't give up. If your academic and ielts score are good, have sufficient funds, work on your statement of Purpose. Write what they want to read. Need some help? I will help you without charging anything unlike consultants since I would be more than happy if I can help you achieve your dreams.
bro please share me your final SOP , my reason is i wont return to my country .
Email : ramarjuganguly1989@gmail.com
all the best