Hi,
I got a rejection after my application for January '21 intake and now I want to reapply after I have got GCMS notes.
My profile is as follows:
10/12 score:
60% and 72%,
IELTS Score:
6.5 ( with no band less than 6),
Degree:
Bachelors of Commerce (3 years) completed Degree in June 2016
Backlogs:
None
. Overall Degree score:
48% ,
Employment Status:
Started working in May 2017 still employed.
Canadian College:
Sault College [Received Offer letter in August 2019]
Course:
Ontario College Graduate Certificate (2Years-4Semesters)- Global business management,
Funds:
First year fees + GIC
Application:
June, 2020,
Biometrics:
Cancel because of Covid
Medical:
February, 2020 (Passed),
Decision:
September, 2020 (refused)
I applied for GCMS NOTES and got the reply as follows:
All information before me, including applicants previous employment and educational history has been reviewed. Applicant has B.Comm(2016) and has been employed since 2017, most recently as a sales exec. Applicant wants to attend GLOBAL BUSINESS MANGEMENT COURSE at SAULT COLLEGE. Mark sheets provided indicate poor academic record in some subjects. I am not satisfied that applicant will be able to successfully complete the study program in Canada. The applicant has failed to satisfy me that pursuing the selected program of study is reasonable given the high cost of international study in Canada when weighed against potential career/employment benefits after completion.
Considering previous academic qualification, employment history, relevance of the proposed course of study and factors such as travel history, I am not satisfied that applicant is a bona fide student who would depart Canada at the end of the period authorized for stay. Application refused.
Now I want to reapply makin a strong SOP covering the above points which led to rejection. Do not have much time, need to apply by tuesday 24/11/2020 so that I can get the decision for January '21 intake. Also can some one read by SOP and see where the problem was and how to write the strong SOP?
Thanks,
Ali