Hi,
This is Mohsin,i have been refused for student visa for Canada in December 08 on the following basis:
1. I am not satisfied that you would depart from Canada after completing your proposed studies as you do not have sufficient ties to Pakistan to ensure your return.
2. Considering your employment and academic history and the availability of similar programs of study in pakistan, I am not satisfied that your sole purpose for going to canada is to further your education.
i have emailed my answer to them but they didn´t reply, following is the email i sent them:-
Dear Sir,
This in reference to the letter received regarding refusal to my application for study permit to Canada.
The subsequent objections placed by you in the letter are as follows.
1. I am not satisfied that you would depart from Canada after completing your proposed studies as you do not have sufficient ties to Pakistan to ensure your return.
2. Considering your employment and academic history and the availability of similar programs of study in pakistan, I am not satisfied that your sole purpose for going to canada is to further your education.
In regards to the above objections i would like to put forward the following factual points in my defence.
Your first point regarding not having sufficient ties with Pakistan which would lead me back to my home country sound a bit baseless as my whole family which includes my Father, Mother, 2 Brothers and my Sister, reside in Pakistan. Following this, my father´s business, his property, my brother´s property which i duly mentioned in the financial evaluation i forwarded you is also situated in my home country, then your statement claiming my ties with Pakistan seem to be baseless. Further to this is the undertaking i have submitted, making an oath that i will be returning to my home country after completing my studies from Dalhousie university is proof that i will be returning to Pakistan. Hence your point regarding my insufficient ties with Pakistan, in my point of view is not justifiable evidence that you have put forward in my case.
Now considering the second point put forward by your side. First of all i would like to comment on the educational difference in universities residing in Pakistan and in Canada. There is a dearth in terms of the educational level of both the countries. Pakistan does not have a single university in the top 500 universities in the world, which shows how much it lags in this regard. Secondly there is no comparison of the facullty available in both the countries. The industrial based research and lab fascilities available in Canada is also a factor. Also to bring to your notice is the fact that i have applied for Master of Engineering (MEng) in Dalhousie university, which is a industrial project based study not research based study (MASc), the reason i have choosen this industrial project based study (MEng) because in the current senario my country needs Industrial experts more than research experts who can boost up its economy.Therefore i have not opted for the Research based (MASc) program.
In light of the above points i dont know why my application for study permit has been refused, therefore i would be very greatful if you could provide further clarification of your objections or the basis of these objections, you should have conducted an interview if you had any ambiguities, however i would be very greatful if you would call me for an interview now so that i can clarify my point of view and hopefully persuade you to allow me for study permit in Canada.
Waiting for your response.
Could you plz guide me what should i do now...should i apply again with same university again or .....
Plz do reply me, i would be very thankful to you.
Regards,
Mohsin Raza
This is Mohsin,i have been refused for student visa for Canada in December 08 on the following basis:
1. I am not satisfied that you would depart from Canada after completing your proposed studies as you do not have sufficient ties to Pakistan to ensure your return.
2. Considering your employment and academic history and the availability of similar programs of study in pakistan, I am not satisfied that your sole purpose for going to canada is to further your education.
i have emailed my answer to them but they didn´t reply, following is the email i sent them:-
Dear Sir,
This in reference to the letter received regarding refusal to my application for study permit to Canada.
The subsequent objections placed by you in the letter are as follows.
1. I am not satisfied that you would depart from Canada after completing your proposed studies as you do not have sufficient ties to Pakistan to ensure your return.
2. Considering your employment and academic history and the availability of similar programs of study in pakistan, I am not satisfied that your sole purpose for going to canada is to further your education.
In regards to the above objections i would like to put forward the following factual points in my defence.
Your first point regarding not having sufficient ties with Pakistan which would lead me back to my home country sound a bit baseless as my whole family which includes my Father, Mother, 2 Brothers and my Sister, reside in Pakistan. Following this, my father´s business, his property, my brother´s property which i duly mentioned in the financial evaluation i forwarded you is also situated in my home country, then your statement claiming my ties with Pakistan seem to be baseless. Further to this is the undertaking i have submitted, making an oath that i will be returning to my home country after completing my studies from Dalhousie university is proof that i will be returning to Pakistan. Hence your point regarding my insufficient ties with Pakistan, in my point of view is not justifiable evidence that you have put forward in my case.
Now considering the second point put forward by your side. First of all i would like to comment on the educational difference in universities residing in Pakistan and in Canada. There is a dearth in terms of the educational level of both the countries. Pakistan does not have a single university in the top 500 universities in the world, which shows how much it lags in this regard. Secondly there is no comparison of the facullty available in both the countries. The industrial based research and lab fascilities available in Canada is also a factor. Also to bring to your notice is the fact that i have applied for Master of Engineering (MEng) in Dalhousie university, which is a industrial project based study not research based study (MASc), the reason i have choosen this industrial project based study (MEng) because in the current senario my country needs Industrial experts more than research experts who can boost up its economy.Therefore i have not opted for the Research based (MASc) program.
In light of the above points i dont know why my application for study permit has been refused, therefore i would be very greatful if you could provide further clarification of your objections or the basis of these objections, you should have conducted an interview if you had any ambiguities, however i would be very greatful if you would call me for an interview now so that i can clarify my point of view and hopefully persuade you to allow me for study permit in Canada.
Waiting for your response.
Could you plz guide me what should i do now...should i apply again with same university again or .....
Plz do reply me, i would be very thankful to you.
Regards,
Mohsin Raza
