gcms note Here's the link to view my GCMS note, I am not sure what's 'possible concerns around establishment in home country' meaning?
Also I attached my study plan below, can you please give me any critique? Thanks!
Dear visa officer,
To facilitate the visa application process, here I’d like to elaborate my background, the reason to study Computer Programmer at XXX College in Canada, my overall educational goal, financial support and career objective.
Objective
To pursue a College Diploma in Computer Programmer in Canada.
Background
My name is XXX I was born in XXX, I’ve completed high school education in June 2020 and look forward to post secondary education in computer field.
The reason to study Computer Programmer at XXX College in Canada
It had aroused my great interest in computer when I was a primary school student. I get all the knowledge I'm interested in through computers and Internet, which largely enriched and enhanced my understanding of the world. In addition, I also used my spare time to learn some basic programming, how to set up a website, and etc. The process was fantastic, which made my desire to devote myself into the computer industry become much deeper.
The reason I choose Canada as my study destination largely because of my uncle who was studying computer in Canada many years ago and now a successful owner of a tech company in XXX. From his highly recommendation, I know Canada is able to offer international students the first-class education resources with lower expense and Canada is a peaceful, civilized and safe country. It is a good chance to receive high quality education and experience diverse cultures. Meanwhile learning in a totally new environment to broaden my horizon is very attractive to me, as it will raise new challenges for me to conquer. An job applicant who holds Canadian diploma which is not exam-oriented but quality-oriented is much more competitive in XXX labor market. It was no surprise when I chose Computer Programmer without hesitation as major at XXX College, which is the one of the best college located at XXX.
Overall Educational Goal
I have achieved excellent academic performance in XXX, which makes the basic foundations for my future study in XXX College. Anyway, first step of my plan is to overcome the language barrier and adjust myself into the new environment, including new teaching methods, cultural differences and enhancing mutual understanding between the XXX and other peoples. In addition, the most important thing is to learn the courses of Computer Programmer to improve my academic ability. I hope I can use limited time to acquire more advanced skills, methodologies and the professional knowledge related to my major.
Financial Support
My parents have sufficient funds to support my study in Canada. They are definitely willing and able to afford my education and it will not influence the future life of our family since they both have enough saving, decent jobs and stable incomes. My father is XXX and my mother is XXX with a total annual income of more than CAD 100,000.
Return to XXX and Career Objective
Studying abroad will provide me with opportunities to learn advanced knowledge and a better future. After the completion of my study abroad, I will return to XXX to serve my motherland. With the economic globalization, the computer and internet company of XXX such as XXX plays a more important role in international stage, which leads to a greater demand in XXX labor market on professionals that equipped with the advanced knowledge on computer industry, as well as the excellent communication skills in English. With the unique study experience abroad and great effort, I confidently believe that I will have a successful and productive career in the computer industry in XXX future. My uncle also promised me, once I complete my study, he will offer me a position in his tech company in XXX.
Based on my own experience and strong study motive, please trust me that I have the ability to study in Canada. I really hope that you will approve my application and issue a student visa for me to study in Canada.
Also I attached my study plan below, can you please give me any critique? Thanks!
Dear visa officer,
To facilitate the visa application process, here I’d like to elaborate my background, the reason to study Computer Programmer at XXX College in Canada, my overall educational goal, financial support and career objective.
Objective
To pursue a College Diploma in Computer Programmer in Canada.
Background
My name is XXX I was born in XXX, I’ve completed high school education in June 2020 and look forward to post secondary education in computer field.
The reason to study Computer Programmer at XXX College in Canada
It had aroused my great interest in computer when I was a primary school student. I get all the knowledge I'm interested in through computers and Internet, which largely enriched and enhanced my understanding of the world. In addition, I also used my spare time to learn some basic programming, how to set up a website, and etc. The process was fantastic, which made my desire to devote myself into the computer industry become much deeper.
The reason I choose Canada as my study destination largely because of my uncle who was studying computer in Canada many years ago and now a successful owner of a tech company in XXX. From his highly recommendation, I know Canada is able to offer international students the first-class education resources with lower expense and Canada is a peaceful, civilized and safe country. It is a good chance to receive high quality education and experience diverse cultures. Meanwhile learning in a totally new environment to broaden my horizon is very attractive to me, as it will raise new challenges for me to conquer. An job applicant who holds Canadian diploma which is not exam-oriented but quality-oriented is much more competitive in XXX labor market. It was no surprise when I chose Computer Programmer without hesitation as major at XXX College, which is the one of the best college located at XXX.
Overall Educational Goal
I have achieved excellent academic performance in XXX, which makes the basic foundations for my future study in XXX College. Anyway, first step of my plan is to overcome the language barrier and adjust myself into the new environment, including new teaching methods, cultural differences and enhancing mutual understanding between the XXX and other peoples. In addition, the most important thing is to learn the courses of Computer Programmer to improve my academic ability. I hope I can use limited time to acquire more advanced skills, methodologies and the professional knowledge related to my major.
Financial Support
My parents have sufficient funds to support my study in Canada. They are definitely willing and able to afford my education and it will not influence the future life of our family since they both have enough saving, decent jobs and stable incomes. My father is XXX and my mother is XXX with a total annual income of more than CAD 100,000.
Return to XXX and Career Objective
Studying abroad will provide me with opportunities to learn advanced knowledge and a better future. After the completion of my study abroad, I will return to XXX to serve my motherland. With the economic globalization, the computer and internet company of XXX such as XXX plays a more important role in international stage, which leads to a greater demand in XXX labor market on professionals that equipped with the advanced knowledge on computer industry, as well as the excellent communication skills in English. With the unique study experience abroad and great effort, I confidently believe that I will have a successful and productive career in the computer industry in XXX future. My uncle also promised me, once I complete my study, he will offer me a position in his tech company in XXX.
Based on my own experience and strong study motive, please trust me that I have the ability to study in Canada. I really hope that you will approve my application and issue a student visa for me to study in Canada.
