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Samuel 1012

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Nov 19, 2021
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STATEMENT OF Purpose

Personal and academic background

Permit me to introduce myself. My name is ..., I was born and raised in the city of .., ...state, country, to the family of Mr and Mrs .., on the ...day of December ... I am the fourth and only son in the family of five children.
At the age of four, I was enrolled in ....for my basic education from ... to.... Later on I gained an admission for my post Secondary School Education at ..., from xxx to xxx, where I obtained my xx Certificate. From August xx I became an apprentice in xxx at xxx which lasted till xxx date. In xxx date I was admitted into the xxx university to xxx and graduated in xxx date
On 10th of November, I was employed by xxx company as procurement Officer, the position I hold till date.

Why xxx course
My objective of pursuing this course is because of the vast knowledge and techniques it has to offer in improving the delivery and quality of products and services, which will be beneficial to my place of employment and the society at large. The course also provide job versatility that will help me excel in different sectors.

Why Choosing Conestoga college
Conestoga college is proven to be one of the best colleges in Canada and is well known for its academic excellence. Also from their course outlines I was convinced that Conestoga college has the capacity to train effective process quality engineers both in practical and theoretical aspects.

Why Choosing Canada
Canada has been known as a peaceful nation and has excellent educational system. It has the capacity to train students both theoretically and practically due to its high technological and innovative advancement.
Most Nigerian higher institutions pay less attention on practical aspect of a course, this ultimately limit the knowledge and hands-on experience that would be impacted on its scholars. I found out that there is less or no institution in Nigeria that offers process quality engineering in Post graduate level.
In all, Canada tendency of accommodating people with different cultures, ethnicities, without scores of racial discrimination made me to choose Canada from other countries of the world.

Financial Sponsorship

All the expenses needed for my study in Canada, including traveling, accomodation and my welfare is funded by me. I have paid for my first semester tuition fee. I also disposed couple of my landed properties to augment with funds generated from my salary.

Future Goals

I observed that most companies in Nigeria do not care about the quality of their products, probably because they lack qualified quality control engineers. I am determined to come back to my country to impact the knowledge and skills I acquired, in creating more value to my place of employment, which will be relying heavily on me, by using modern quality techniques, proper methods and procedures to solve problems and enhance the productivity of it's products and services. After completing this course, I will be able to work in so many sectors such as pharmaceutical, automobile, oil and gas, food processing.
It is also my zeal and customary responsibility to take care of my parents and their properties as their first and only son.
Hence, I will put my efforts and full commitment to complete this course.

What can I add or remove from here. I need constructive answers
 
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Simba112

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STATEMENT OF Purpose

Personal and academic background

Permit me to introduce myself. My name iSamuel Iheanyi Iheanyi, I was born and raised in the city of Owerri, Imo state, Nigeria, to the family of Mr and Mrs Solomon Iheanyichukwu Eshilonu, on the 10th day of December 1993. I am the fourth and only son in the family of five children.
At the age of four, I was enrolled in Community Primary School Umuguma for my basic education from 1997 to 2003. Later on I gained an admission for my post Secondary School Education at Trinity High School Ogut, from 2003 to 2009, where I obtained my West African Examination Council Certificate. From August 2009 I became an apprentice in photography at Wilson Photo studio which lasted till December 2010. In 2011 I was admitted into the Federal University of Technology Owerri to study Polymer and Textile Engineering and graduated in 2019
I proceeded for the mandatory National Youth Service Corps in November 2019 which I was posted to Logistics Integrated Services, Aba, Abia State, where I was deployed to the quality control department. My service year ended in October 2020. On 10th of November, I was employed by Vagan Oil and Gas Limited as procurement Officer, the position I hold till date.

Why Process Quality Engineering
My objective of pursuing this course is because of the vast knowledge and techniques it has to offer in improving the delivery and quality of products and services, which will be beneficial to my place of employment and the society at large. The course also provide job versatility that will help me excel in different sectors.

Why Choosing Conestoga college
Conestoga college is proven to be one of the best colleges in Canada and is well known for its academic excellence. Also from their course outlines I was convinced that Conestoga college has the capacity to train effective process quality engineers both in practical and theoretical aspects.

Why Choosing Canada
Canada has been known as a peaceful nation and has excellent educational system. It has the capacity to train students both theoretically and practically due to its high technological and innovative advancement.
Most Nigerian higher institutions pay less attention on practical aspect of a course, this ultimately limit the knowledge and hands-on experience that would be impacted on its scholars. I found out that there is less or no institution in Nigeria that offers process quality engineering in Post graduate level.
In all, Canada tendency of accommodating people with different cultures, ethnicities, without scores of racial discrimination made me to choose Canada from other countries of the world.

Financial Sponsorship

All the expenses needed for my study in Canada, including traveling, accomodation and my welfare is funded by me. I have paid for my first semester tuition fee. I also disposed couple of my landed properties to augment with funds generated from my salary.

Future Goals

I observed that most companies in Nigeria do not care about the quality of their products, probably because they lack qualified quality control engineers. I am determined to come back to my country to impact the knowledge and skills I acquired, in creating more value to my place of employment, which will be relying heavily on me, by using modern quality techniques, proper methods and procedures to solve problems and enhance the productivity of it's products and services. After completing this course, I will be able to work in so many sectors such as pharmaceutical, automobile, oil and gas, food processing.
It is also my zeal and customary responsibility to take care of my parents and their properties as their first and only son.
Hence, I will put my efforts and full commitment to complete this course.

What can I add or remove from here. I need constructive answers
You need to redo it entirely...Be mindful not to make a point by writing negative about your country system of education and employment. Avoid using names and personal details in public forum. You may consider hiring a consultant to help you with your writing. Overtime, anyone can google search and this thread will come up, hope that "anyone" is not Visa Officer processing your application
 

Samuel 1012

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Nov 19, 2021
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You need to redo it entirely...Be mindful not to make a point by writing negative about your country system of education and employment. Avoid using names and personal details in public forum. You may consider hiring a consultant to help you with your writing. Overtime, anyone can google search and this thread will come up, hope that "anyone" is not Visa Officer processing your application
Thanks, so apart from the negative points I made about my country education system and employment, what else can add or remove to fortify this statement