SOP review

[Sarmad.abbasi]

Any one here who can check my SOP?

Can mail him ..

 

[Sarmad.abbasi]

Need an Expert Opinion !

 

[hasnaat]

Recommendations: Assad100101

 

[asad100101]

Im still waiting for your SOP in my email inbox.

I did not receive it previously.

Send it again.

 

[Sarmad.abbasi]

Thanks for replying..

Asad,

Please check it now. I Have emailed it to you.

 

[Sarmad.abbasi]

Thanks Asad.

I believe I should make the CA and ACCA para much more concise.

And did the last para about what benefit the business is going to have made sense to you?