SOP need help for an undergraduate student

[rajeev203]

hi iam rajeev from mumbai
i completed my 12th last year and took admission in centennial college for software technician course for undergraduate diploma (sept 2013 intake)
all my documents including gic college receipt medicals are ready except for the SOP
you see as iam going directly for undergraduate wont the embassy doubt that iam going for a diploma just for the sake of geting and job and pr?
my actual plan is to do diploma and then shift to a university in the 3rd year but wont they doubt why iam not directly going to a university?
and if i say i wish to return to india ater the completion of my diploma they would know iam lying cuz getting a job with a ug diploma is almost implossible here in india .. please help i will be filing for visa in the next couple of days..

 

[rajeev203]

anyone please???

 

[t119]

why aren't you going for a university directly?

 

[rajeev203]

because i cant afford straight 4 years of education in canada so i will do my diploma work for a couple of years and then go to a university and i will be filing in this week so i need some help on how to put this in the sop

 

[t119]

okay. in my opinion write that you cannot afford university education for four years. and prove that why this route would be better than taking a degree from a university in your country of residence. dont just mention about studies. include other factors like cultural learning in a new and more developed place and etc. prove that you are going for education regardless of where you are studying and inshaALLAH you will be fine.