(SOP) Immediate help needed guys regarding- (SOP)

[preet.decent90]

hello evry1 i wnt to know , Is it important to mention in SOP our reasons for previous rejection and how this time we have make amendments to improve our case . and pls pls send me a sample of sop if anyone have, i have chosen Computer Systems Technician - Network Systems Diploma from Mohawk college . pls guys i want some quick replies as i only have 1 day left most probably i m going to apply tommorow.. so pls help regarding SOP and other facts which we have to mention ...thnx in advance....

 

[preet.decent90]

reply kardo yarrr.........

 

[vicky86]

hello evry1 i wnt to know , Is it important to mention in SOP our reasons for previous rejection and how this time we have make amendments to improve our case . and pls pls send me a sample of sop if anyone have, i have chosen Computer Systems Technician - Network Systems Diploma from Mohawk college . pls guys i want some quick replies as i only have 1 day left most probably i m going to apply tommorow.. so pls help regarding SOP and other facts which we have to mention ...thnx in advance....

Hi Preet,
Don’t mention reason for rejection but mention what is improved from last time. Say e.g. if last time the reason is “no string ties with country/family” then wirte about the string ties in SOP, like Parents’’ income, property.
I may be wrong but this is what I seen in one case where the guy was rejected on strong tie basis.
I don’t have sample SOP for rejection case but I do have my SOP.
Hope this helps.

Best of luck for your VISA.

 

[preet.decent90]

Hi Preet,
Don't mention reason for rejection but mention what is improved from last time. Say e.g. if last time the reason is “no string ties with country/family” then wirte about the string ties in SOP, like Parents'' income, property.
I may be wrong but this is what I seen in one case where the guy was rejected on strong tie basis.
I don't have sample SOP for rejection case but I do have my SOP.
Hope this helps.

Best of luck for your VISA.

thnxx vicky for reply can u pls send me the sample of sop which u have .......
nd tell me tht is this is a right time for the candidate who is applying in general cat. bcoz i thnk i m bit late ....

 

[vicky86]

thnxx vicky for reply can u pls send me the sample of sop which u have .......
nd tell me tht is this is a right time for the candidate who is applying in general cat. bcoz i thnk i m bit late ....

Please find below my SOP


Family Background
My father is working as a Sales Representative at TATA BP SOLAR, Aurangabad. My mother is home Maker. My Brother is working as a Senior Engineer at Honeywell INDIA Pune.
Academic and Work Achievement
1) Completed Graduation In Bachelor Of Engineering from Jawaharlal Nehru Engineering College in 2007with 68.93 ( First Class with Distinction)
2) Completed 12th (H.S.C) in 2003 with 79.50% ( First Class with Distinction)
3) Completed 10th (S.S.C) in 2001 with 80.26% First Class with Distinction.
4) Received various recognition time to time during enure in IT industry like ‘PAT ON THE BACK’ , ‘Valuable Team Player’, ’STAR Performer’

Why CANADA:
I had decided on two countries to pursue this course, U.S and Canada, for the standard of education provided. However, I finalized on Canada, for it provides a very safe and affordable learning environment. It encourages unity in diversity, which will broaden my field of experience and global exposure to different perspectives. And most importantly the very same course in United States takes 2 years to complete in contrast to 12 months in Canada. After a significant 4 years in the workforce, I can’t afford to lose touch from it for a long time, which would definitely affect my career in a negative way. My peers and colleagues, too, have unanimously advised that Canada is the best choice for this course.

WHY Centennial:
1. Centennial is one of the most preferred colleges for this stream in Canada. My own reasons are not very different from others to opt for this institution. The program offered here follows the Project Management Body of Knowledge (PMBOK) which mandates courses those are in-line with the current industry standards and requirements.
2. It includes hands-on integration of technology tools and case-studies with a unified focus on organizational leadership. It also focuses on assignments which have been designed for experimental learning opportunity. There is an immense stress on “On-Time” and “Cost-Effective” methodologies. Having worked on real time project deliveries, I know the significance of these methods.
3. Another aspect of this program is the optional Internship or Co-Op that is offered. In Centennial, which represents one of the most diverse student groups in the province, I would get a firsthand experience of interacting with people from different cultures and nationalities. It would be worthwhile to share our ideas and views, which would enhance my outlook on a comprehensive echelon.
4. Additionally this program trains a person for writing the PMP certification as a final step to an ensured and successful career in Management. Post graduation in this stream is the most logical extension of my academic pursuits and a major step towards achieving my objectives


Details about Sponsor
Father: - My father is working as a Sales Representative at TATA BP SOLAR, Aurangabad, he has saved all these years for my Post Graduation in the form of Land which has been sold to raise the Money, which is INR 14,00,000.
MySelf: - During my 4 years tenure I’ve saved a sum of INR 1,39,000 for my expenses during my Post Graduation.
Loan: - State Bank Of INDIA has sanctioned me the loan of INR 7,50,000 for my Post Graduate Studies
Future plan:
In today’s challenging business environment, one has to constantly upgrade his skill and project management provides one with such strategic business techniques. I have solidified my base on the technical front, now a dedicated study of Project Management will ready me for a career on a global level. Management knowledge collective with all the indispensable expertise is imperative to realize my merit as a meticulous professional.

 

[enfield]

hello evry1 i wnt to know , Is it important to mention in SOP our reasons for previous rejection and how this time we have make amendments to improve our case . and pls pls send me a sample of sop if anyone have, i have chosen Computer Systems Technician - Network Systems Diploma from Mohawk college . pls guys i want some quick replies as i only have 1 day left most probably i m going to apply tommorow.. so pls help regarding SOP and other facts which we have to mention ...thnx in advance....

Hi,

Instead of SOP, the concerned visa officer would prefer to refer your previous visa application file number.

 

[vicky86]

thnxx vicky for reply can u pls send me the sample of sop which u have .......
nd tell me tht is this is a right time for the candidate who is applying in general cat. bcoz i thnk i m bit late ....

I guess last date for VISA application for JAn 2012 term is 1st Dec in INDIA but I'd suggest to apply as early as possible.

Best of luck for your VISA.

 

[preet.decent90]

Thnxx enfield for reply nd Vicky 86 I want to know tht how much liquid cash u have shown if u dnt mind . Thnxx

 

[vicky86]

Thnxx enfield for reply nd Vicky 86 I want to know tht how much liquid cash u have shown if u dnt mind . Thnxx

Bro its there in SOP however please find below the details.

Father's saving INR 14,00,000. (property sale, sale deed provided at time of VISA)
SBI student loan of INR 7,50,000 (loan sanction letter provided at time of VISA)
My salary account : INR 1,39,000 (last 3 yrs ITRand Form 16 provided at time of VISA)


Do let me know if you require any other information.

 

[enfield]

Thnxx enfield for reply nd Vicky 86 I want to know tht how much liquid cash u have shown if u dnt mind . Thnxx

Hi,

In my case it was;

1. One saving account (of myself, not of Parents) with Rs. 19,000. In fact I put off NOTHING from my Parent/family side.

2. MBA Entrance Award of CAD 2,500

3. Loan of Rs. 17 lacs (exactly 80 % of my total expenses/fees)

4. No SOP/FORM 16/ITR/Property papers etc.

5. GMAT score copy/ IELTS TRF.

6. Pre Medicals/ No pre payment of fees.

7. One LOA (Conditional) copy.

 

[preet.decent90]

Thnxx vicky86 22 .... Nd enfield 22 Tuhada ki Kehna yar u r brilliant ......