Hi All,
Name: S Ajay Kumar
Exam Date: 01-06-2019
Exam Centre: Kottayam (Kerala), India (BC)
Result date: 14-06-2019
Result : 8L 7R 7.5S 6.5 W
Applied EOR on 27-06-2019
Got confirmation on 02-07-2019
Still waiting.
I have done my writing quite well and I believed that I will hit a 7.5 this time. But not sure why they marked me down and from this thread I see a lot of success stories. So hoping for a 0.5 increase in W
A question:
Task 2 was - In many countries, people have more health problems because they choose to live an unhealthy lifestyle. What do you think are the reasons for this and how can it be solved? Give relevant examples from your experience.
I did the paraphrasing accurately in the expected format (using other relevant words carrying the same meaning and ensured that the grammar is well above good).
In the BP, I said increasing craving to fast food items (despite knowing its harms, people continue consuming it to satisfy taste buds) and extreme laziness (people hiring maids to do the household work and following a sedentary lifestyle and wishing not to come of out their comfort levels) are some of the reasons why people are facing various health issues.
To deal with people consuming junk food items, govt can levy an additional tax on fast food restaurants and people will stop consuming it due to the high cost. To counter the issues with the sedentary lifestyle, govt can create awareness among people about the harms of an inactive lifestyle and encourage ppl to go to gymnasiums.
Wrote relevant and appropriate examples.
So, according to you guys, have I exactly answered to the questions or was there any deviation in the answer.
Pls advice.
Regards
Ajay