Rejection for study permit

[Fouad Ali]

i am from Pakistan and applied for software engineering diploma program at sheriden college, i paid my 1 semester fee and i have a good bank statement as well,although my study fees is financed by father with relevant affidavit. my visa application was rejected due to the below three mentioned reasons;

I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the purpose of your visit.

• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on your current employment situation.

• I am not satisfied that you will leave Canada at the end of your stay, as stipulated in subsection 216(1) of the IRPR, based on the limited employment prospects in your country of residence.

now i am confused what should i do to in order to reapply, i receive my latest LOA from DLI for Jan 2020 intake.

 

[Sirwise]

Critically, when l look at your refusal reasons you still have a better chance of approval. What you need to do is to improve your SOP.
Link the program to the prospects in your home country.
What will make you return to your homeland after the studies? Will the master's program create more employment opportunities in your country? What will make you a unique professional in your field?
Answer questions like the above ones.
Be specific and more concrete about it.
Note: SOP will do the magic
Good luck

 

[canuck78]

Would also order CAIPS to determine exactly why you were refused.

 

[Fouad Ali]

Would also order CAIPS to determine exactly why you were refused.

well this would take at least 5 weeks to process this letter and i am running out of time, but i can tell you that i applied from Tripoli, LIBYA online application.

 

[Fouad Ali]

Critically, when l look at your refusal reasons you still have a better chance of approval. What you need to do is to improve your SOP.
Link the program to the prospects in your home country.
What will make you return to your homeland after the studies? Will the master's program create more employment opportunities in your country? What will make you a unique professional in your field?
Answer questions like the above ones.
Be specific and more concrete about it.
Note: SOP will do the magic
Good luck

thank you for your reply but can you please share me a sample SOP.
Note: i applied from Tripoli Libya online application

 

[canuck78]

One of your issues will be the fact that you live in Libya. Given the instability in the country there will be concerns that you will file for asylum as soon as you arrive. Please post more details of your case if you’d like more help like previous degrees, work history, scores from degrees and IELTS, etc.

 

[Fouad Ali]

One of your issues will be the fact that you live in Libya. Given the instability in the country there will be concerns that you will file for asylum as soon as you arrive. Please post more details of your case if you’d like more help like previous degrees, work history, scores from degrees and IELTS, etc.

well if that's the case how can i satisfy them, as i am not onto seeking asylum and i am a genuine student. in addition, i did my bachelors degree from university based in pakistan and secure 78% furthermore, my degrees are evaluated by WES canada as well, my IELTS band is 6.5 overall, L 6.5, R 7, S 6.5 and W 5.5. regarding work history as i am still a student, doing IT certification which i attached with my application, therefore i didn't show any employment background.

 

[bongoman]

Its always difficult when you are living in another country because they want to see ties to your home country which would be difficult for you to show.

 

[Fouad Ali]

Its always difficult when you are living in another country because they want to see ties to your home country which would be difficult for you to show.

if that's the case what are the possibilities that i will be granted a study permit if i reapply and how can i do that?