Congratulations. Your ITA is enroute. Even Ive had 0.5 drama a couple of times in writing and m sitting again on Aug 19. Couple of things wanted to check:
1. Whether you appeared from BC or IDP?
2. Could you please suggest sites/tips for writing as I am really struggling in that.
Thanks.
I have enrolled it with BC this time as didn't materialise for me under IDP.
This is the structure I loosely followed
***************************************************** Argument essay
Introduction Paragraph
Background
Today,
As is commonly understood
It is common today
Detailed Background
This can be seen...
This has been seen in ...
This is nowhere more evidence than...
Thesis
It is believed..
It is argued..
It will be shown..
Outline
This will be proven by analyzing..1,2
This will be shown by taking into account..1,2
Supporting Paragraph 1
Topic
Firstly, ...
Looking first at..
Example
For example,...
For instance,...
Take ... ,for instance
Discussion
This example clearly shows...
It is obvious when looking at this example that...
This example makes it clear that...
When looking at this example, there is no doubt that...
Conclusion
It is obvious that...
From this, it can be concluded that....
Thus, there is an obvious link between....
Supporting Paragraph 2
Conclusion Pargraph
Summary
After analyzing the areas of 1 and 2
Following the analyzing of...
Restatement of thesis
As has been proven, ...
As has been shown, ....
Prediction/Recommendation
It is expected that, ...
It is predicted that, ...
***************************************************Discussion Essay
Introduction Paragraph
Background
Since the beginning of recorded time
Since the inception of television
Detailed background
This can be seen nowhere clear than
POV
On the one hand, many people believe
On the one hand, it is believed
One the other,...
According to one camp,According to the other
Many argue that... , hovever, this is refulted by others
Outline
These arguments will be analyzed prior to coming to a reasoned conclusion
Both sides will be critiqued before reasoned conclusion in found
All arguments will be weighed prior to reaching an informed conculsion
Supporting paragraph 1
Topic
It is felt by many that
Today, many hold the idea/theory that ***** true
Historically, many people have supported the idea that
Traditionally, groups around the world have ascertained
Example
For example, <<start broader and narrow down>>
For example, many countries, Russia and Ukraine in particular, have cultures deeply rooted in religion
For instance, in Asia, particularly China and Korea, ...
For instance, among animals, ...
As an example
To illustrate
As an illustration
Take, For example,
Discussion
It goes without saying that,
This example shows clearly that,
Conclusion
Thus, the theory of/that... is difficult to debunk(disprove)
It is easy to see why this argument has garnered a lot of support
Supporting paragraph 2
Conculsion paragraph
Summary/Statement of position
After analysing these two points of view, it is believed
After hashing out the pros and cons of these two points of view, it is felt ...
It is hard to see how anyone could feel (support).... followig the analyzing both points of view of the topic <<stronger tone>>
Prediction/ recommendation
Without a doubt, .....
In the years to come,.....
It is felt that,.... would be best to....