you can get your essay checked in :Ey guys. Little help here. I cant pass 6.5 - 7 in writing test. Any advices? I have tried several things but 7 is my max. Need to max my IELTS. Appreciate any past experiences. Thanks.
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they can give you better advice of where you are losing your marks