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Oct 6, 2019
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I ARSHDEEP SINGH THIND, completed My Matriculation with 9.6 CGPA in year 2016 and Senior Secondary in Non - Medical stream in year 2018 with 78% marks. I was previously refused from Canadian embassy for study permit for Winter 2019 session with overall 6 band not less than 5.5 in any module for CDI college Montreal . After that, I re-appeared for IELTS in which I have scored overall 6.5 band, not less than 6.0 band in any module.
PROGRAM I OPTED:
I have received acceptance letter from Grande Prairie Regional College, Alberta in the course Computer Systems Technology.
PROGRAM OVERVIEW:
This program prepares students with the foundational knowledge and core skills required to work in the diverse and challenging field of Technology. The Computing Science programs at GPRC offer students an opportunity to integrate extensive software development skills with hardware skills. Emphasis in various programs include: computer graphics and image processing, digital hardware, data communications and networking. Hardware facilities include dedicated circuit design and robotics lab, data communications, and networking lab, as well as six general access computer labs.
PROGRAM HIGHLIGHTS;
Graduates are prepared for a wide variety of jobs: computer programmer, software designer/developer, mobile app programming, network analyst, webmaster, web designer and systems administrator and also have a broad choice of work environments in the public and private sectors. Graduates could work in the IT department of a large organization or be a one-person IT department for a small business. One could join a company that provides computer sales, installation and support for other businesses. It enables one to set up the own IT business and work directly with clients.
WHY GPRC ALBERTA AND COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNOLOGY?
Grande Prairie Regional College, known as GPRC, is a comprehensive community institution, publicly supported to provide opportunities in post-secondary education in Northwestern Alberta. The College encourages and supports applied research and scholarly activities, and innovation activities that complement and enhance teaching and learning in program areas and in industry sectors where its academic expertise enables such a contribution. Grande Prairie is the ideal destination place for education, as it is located in the lapse of nature (far from the congestion of major cities) . It is always ambitious for me to pursue qualification at such sort of peaceful place.
In the GPRC Alberta; Computer Systems Technology offered by the School of Information and Technology will prepare me to solve computer-related issues for businesses, government agencies, utilities, law enforcement agencies, health services providers, educational institutions and more. It’s a career that demands a unique blend of skills—computer literacy, technical know-how and communications savvy—but also lets me specialize in areas that interest me the most, including programming, software design, mobile application programming, data communications and web design.
PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF STUDY:
Once I complete this school of Computer Systems Technology offering, I would touch great heights in the field of Information Technology like;
● Software Engineer
● Video Game Designer
● Web Developer
● IT Security Specialist
● Technology Manager


FINANCIAL SPONSOR;
My mother who is self-employed supporting me for my education and my stay in Canada . I ,hereby, attaching the affidavit of Financial support ,Income Tax Returns along with Bank Statement of previous 6 months.
MOTIVE TO CHOOSE CANADA AS DESIRED DESTINATION:
• I am going to Canada only for study purposes in order to inculcate knowledge with advanced techniques at International level.
• Canada is one of the leading country introduced well established education infrastructure and its qualification is Globally recognized. Canada is much better than
 

Sunil Vaghani

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Jul 2, 2019
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I ARSHDEEP SINGH THIND, completed My Matriculation with 9.6 CGPA in year 2016 and Senior Secondary in Non - Medical stream in year 2018 with 78% marks. I was previously refused from Canadian embassy for study permit for Winter 2019 session with overall 6 band not less than 5.5 in any module for CDI college Montreal . After that, I re-appeared for IELTS in which I have scored overall 6.5 band, not less than 6.0 band in any module.
PROGRAM I OPTED:
I have received acceptance letter from Grande Prairie Regional College, Alberta in the course Computer Systems Technology.
PROGRAM OVERVIEW:
This program prepares students with the foundational knowledge and core skills required to work in the diverse and challenging field of Technology. The Computing Science programs at GPRC offer students an opportunity to integrate extensive software development skills with hardware skills. Emphasis in various programs include: computer graphics and image processing, digital hardware, data communications and networking. Hardware facilities include dedicated circuit design and robotics lab, data communications, and networking lab, as well as six general access computer labs.
PROGRAM HIGHLIGHTS;
Graduates are prepared for a wide variety of jobs: computer programmer, software designer/developer, mobile app programming, network analyst, webmaster, web designer and systems administrator and also have a broad choice of work environments in the public and private sectors. Graduates could work in the IT department of a large organization or be a one-person IT department for a small business. One could join a company that provides computer sales, installation and support for other businesses. It enables one to set up the own IT business and work directly with clients.
WHY GPRC ALBERTA AND COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNOLOGY?
Grande Prairie Regional College, known as GPRC, is a comprehensive community institution, publicly supported to provide opportunities in post-secondary education in Northwestern Alberta. The College encourages and supports applied research and scholarly activities, and innovation activities that complement and enhance teaching and learning in program areas and in industry sectors where its academic expertise enables such a contribution. Grande Prairie is the ideal destination place for education, as it is located in the lapse of nature (far from the congestion of major cities) . It is always ambitious for me to pursue qualification at such sort of peaceful place.
In the GPRC Alberta; Computer Systems Technology offered by the School of Information and Technology will prepare me to solve computer-related issues for businesses, government agencies, utilities, law enforcement agencies, health services providers, educational institutions and more. It’s a career that demands a unique blend of skills—computer literacy, technical know-how and communications savvy—but also lets me specialize in areas that interest me the most, including programming, software design, mobile application programming, data communications and web design.
PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF STUDY:
Once I complete this school of Computer Systems Technology offering, I would touch great heights in the field of Information Technology like;
● Software Engineer
● Video Game Designer
● Web Developer
● IT Security Specialist
● Technology Manager


FINANCIAL SPONSOR;
My mother who is self-employed supporting me for my education and my stay in Canada . I ,hereby, attaching the affidavit of Financial support ,Income Tax Returns along with Bank Statement of previous 6 months.
MOTIVE TO CHOOSE CANADA AS DESIRED DESTINATION:
• I am going to Canada only for study purposes in order to inculcate knowledge with advanced techniques at International level.
• Canada is one of the leading country introduced well established education infrastructure and its qualification is Globally recognized. Canada is much better than
You miss very important point. You didn't mention that you will leave country after completion of study.
 
Oct 6, 2019
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MOTIVE TO CHOOSE CANADA AS DESIRED DESTINATION:
• I am going to Canada only for study purposes in order to inculcate knowledge with advanced techniques at International level.
• Canada is one of the leading country introduced well established education infrastructure and its qualification is Globally recognized. Canada is much better than any other country on study level and financial level as well.
• After completing my course I would like to make my knowledge work to make a difference in life for the common man in India and generate employment and wealth in society.
• I have always had great interest in the richness of Canadian culture. The traditional aspects of the culture and the historical legacy of this country left a lasting impression on me.
• Additionally, the field of Computer Systems Technology is well-established in the Canada, as a result, it is a suitable setting for advanced training in this field.
• Studying in such an environment will, I believe, put me on the path to success.
• Specifically, joining the prestigious Computer Systems Technology program offered by GPRC Alberta will give me the theoretical training, practical experience, and access to resources that I will need to advance my knowledge.

REQUEST:
It is my dream to acquire recognized qualification from Canada for the better career opportunities. Confidently, I insist that the proposed course will help me to enhance my skills in the field of Technology. After receiving refusal letter from Canadian Embassy, I have tried to satisfy my shortcomings and re-applied for study permit with very positive vibes. I hopefully believe that my Visa officer finds my background and potential satisfying the requirements of Student visa for my desired Academic program Computer systems Technology
 

sanyinmon

Star Member
Oct 30, 2016
70
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I ARSHDEEP SINGH THIND, completed My Matriculation with 9.6 CGPA in year 2016 and Senior Secondary in Non - Medical stream in year 2018 with 78% marks. I was previously refused from Canadian embassy for study permit for Winter 2019 session with overall 6 band not less than 5.5 in any module for CDI college Montreal . After that, I re-appeared for IELTS in which I have scored overall 6.5 band, not less than 6.0 band in any module.
PROGRAM I OPTED:
I have received acceptance letter from Grande Prairie Regional College, Alberta in the course Computer Systems Technology.
PROGRAM OVERVIEW:
This program prepares students with the foundational knowledge and core skills required to work in the diverse and challenging field of Technology. The Computing Science programs at GPRC offer students an opportunity to integrate extensive software development skills with hardware skills. Emphasis in various programs include: computer graphics and image processing, digital hardware, data communications and networking. Hardware facilities include dedicated circuit design and robotics lab, data communications, and networking lab, as well as six general access computer labs.
PROGRAM HIGHLIGHTS;
Graduates are prepared for a wide variety of jobs: computer programmer, software designer/developer, mobile app programming, network analyst, webmaster, web designer and systems administrator and also have a broad choice of work environments in the public and private sectors. Graduates could work in the IT department of a large organization or be a one-person IT department for a small business. One could join a company that provides computer sales, installation and support for other businesses. It enables one to set up the own IT business and work directly with clients.
WHY GPRC ALBERTA AND COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNOLOGY?
Grande Prairie Regional College, known as GPRC, is a comprehensive community institution, publicly supported to provide opportunities in post-secondary education in Northwestern Alberta. The College encourages and supports applied research and scholarly activities, and innovation activities that complement and enhance teaching and learning in program areas and in industry sectors where its academic expertise enables such a contribution. Grande Prairie is the ideal destination place for education, as it is located in the lapse of nature (far from the congestion of major cities) . It is always ambitious for me to pursue qualification at such sort of peaceful place.
In the GPRC Alberta; Computer Systems Technology offered by the School of Information and Technology will prepare me to solve computer-related issues for businesses, government agencies, utilities, law enforcement agencies, health services providers, educational institutions and more. It’s a career that demands a unique blend of skills—computer literacy, technical know-how and communications savvy—but also lets me specialize in areas that interest me the most, including programming, software design, mobile application programming, data communications and web design.
PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF STUDY:
Once I complete this school of Computer Systems Technology offering, I would touch great heights in the field of Information Technology like;
● Software Engineer
● Video Game Designer
● Web Developer
● IT Security Specialist
● Technology Manager


FINANCIAL SPONSOR;
My mother who is self-employed supporting me for my education and my stay in Canada . I ,hereby, attaching the affidavit of Financial support ,Income Tax Returns along with Bank Statement of previous 6 months.
MOTIVE TO CHOOSE CANADA AS DESIRED DESTINATION:
• I am going to Canada only for study purposes in order to inculcate knowledge with advanced techniques at International level.
• Canada is one of the leading country introduced well established education infrastructure and its qualification is Globally recognized. Canada is much better than
Arshdeep; I am going to apply for Educational Assistant program from this college. My IELTS is overall band 6 only one module is 5. Do you think I can get admission with this score? Is there any age limit or do they accept long study gap?
 

Johnsnow 007

Champion Member
Jan 6, 2018
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Nigeria
You shouldn't have shared your SOP publicly. There is high probability that it would be plagiarized by now. If you've not yet applied, it may do you more good to take it down.

All the best
 

Kingaos

Hero Member
Oct 29, 2019
275
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A small piece of advice - in this climate (covid 19) keep sop to one page and state why you want to study and what you will do when you return to your home country.
 

coolcham

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Jun 12, 2019
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I ARSHDEEP SINGH THIND, completed My Matriculation with 9.6 CGPA in year 2016 and Senior Secondary in Non - Medical stream in year 2018 with 78% marks. I was previously refused from Canadian embassy for study permit for Winter 2019 session with overall 6 band not less than 5.5 in any module for CDI college Montreal . After that, I re-appeared for IELTS in which I have scored overall 6.5 band, not less than 6.0 band in any module.
PROGRAM I OPTED:
I have received acceptance letter from Grande Prairie Regional College, Alberta in the course Computer Systems Technology.
PROGRAM OVERVIEW:
This program prepares students with the foundational knowledge and core skills required to work in the diverse and challenging field of Technology. The Computing Science programs at GPRC offer students an opportunity to integrate extensive software development skills with hardware skills. Emphasis in various programs include: computer graphics and image processing, digital hardware, data communications and networking. Hardware facilities include dedicated circuit design and robotics lab, data communications, and networking lab, as well as six general access computer labs.
PROGRAM HIGHLIGHTS;
Graduates are prepared for a wide variety of jobs: computer programmer, software designer/developer, mobile app programming, network analyst, webmaster, web designer and systems administrator and also have a broad choice of work environments in the public and private sectors. Graduates could work in the IT department of a large organization or be a one-person IT department for a small business. One could join a company that provides computer sales, installation and support for other businesses. It enables one to set up the own IT business and work directly with clients.
WHY GPRC ALBERTA AND COMPUTER SYSTEMS TECHNOLOGY?
Grande Prairie Regional College, known as GPRC, is a comprehensive community institution, publicly supported to provide opportunities in post-secondary education in Northwestern Alberta. The College encourages and supports applied research and scholarly activities, and innovation activities that complement and enhance teaching and learning in program areas and in industry sectors where its academic expertise enables such a contribution. Grande Prairie is the ideal destination place for education, as it is located in the lapse of nature (far from the congestion of major cities) . It is always ambitious for me to pursue qualification at such sort of peaceful place.
In the GPRC Alberta; Computer Systems Technology offered by the School of Information and Technology will prepare me to solve computer-related issues for businesses, government agencies, utilities, law enforcement agencies, health services providers, educational institutions and more. It’s a career that demands a unique blend of skills—computer literacy, technical know-how and communications savvy—but also lets me specialize in areas that interest me the most, including programming, software design, mobile application programming, data communications and web design.
PLANS AFTER COMPLETION OF STUDY:
Once I complete this school of Computer Systems Technology offering, I would touch great heights in the field of Information Technology like;
● Software Engineer
● Video Game Designer
● Web Developer
● IT Security Specialist
● Technology Manager


FINANCIAL SPONSOR;
My mother who is self-employed supporting me for my education and my stay in Canada . I ,hereby, attaching the affidavit of Financial support ,Income Tax Returns along with Bank Statement of previous 6 months.
MOTIVE TO CHOOSE CANADA AS DESIRED DESTINATION:
• I am going to Canada only for study purposes in order to inculcate knowledge with advanced techniques at International level.
• Canada is one of the leading country introduced well established education infrastructure and its qualification is Globally recognized. Canada is much better than
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