Hi, I am Farah, from Abu Dhabi, I did MBA in Marketing from Lahore. I applied via consultant in CDI College Toronto for Higher Secondary diploma in HR and I received Rejection from CHC Abu Dhabi stating that;
You have not satisfied me that you would leave Canada at the end of your stay in reaching this decision; I considered several factors, including;
• Your travel history
• Purpose of visit
• You have not provided documents demonstrating the relationship between you and your sponsor.
• Your personal assets and financial status “my paternal uncle is my sponsor he is a goldsmith”
Now I made following changes please guide me is this enough for me or should I change more things.
• Now I am getting admission in PGD – HR in Humber College for September 2012 Session.
• Regarding my Travel history I visited Pakistan twice during my stay in UAE and I will mentioned this on excel sheet [its been 16 months in am in UAE].
• I will rewrite my SOP.
• Regarding Sponsor…. I applied for Bank loan here in UAE and hopefully I will get AED 60,000/- [RS. 1,500,000/-] and I have AED 30,000/- already in my account [Rs. 750,000/-]. Total AED 90,000/- and equivalent to Pakistani Rupees 2,100,000/- is this enough for one year post graduation diploma?
• There is a 10 Marla plot on my name net value Rs. 1,700,000/- attaching this documents as well.
• Does there any need to attached or mentioned uncle Bank statement or other supporting documents
Please friends guide me Allah Pak bless you...
You have not satisfied me that you would leave Canada at the end of your stay in reaching this decision; I considered several factors, including;
• Your travel history
• Purpose of visit
• You have not provided documents demonstrating the relationship between you and your sponsor.
• Your personal assets and financial status “my paternal uncle is my sponsor he is a goldsmith”
Now I made following changes please guide me is this enough for me or should I change more things.
• Now I am getting admission in PGD – HR in Humber College for September 2012 Session.
• Regarding my Travel history I visited Pakistan twice during my stay in UAE and I will mentioned this on excel sheet [its been 16 months in am in UAE].
• I will rewrite my SOP.
• Regarding Sponsor…. I applied for Bank loan here in UAE and hopefully I will get AED 60,000/- [RS. 1,500,000/-] and I have AED 30,000/- already in my account [Rs. 750,000/-]. Total AED 90,000/- and equivalent to Pakistani Rupees 2,100,000/- is this enough for one year post graduation diploma?
• There is a 10 Marla plot on my name net value Rs. 1,700,000/- attaching this documents as well.
• Does there any need to attached or mentioned uncle Bank statement or other supporting documents
Please friends guide me Allah Pak bless you...