1) I was applying marketing management. Graduate certificate. That I what my consultant suggested me.
2) no study gap, I received my degree in 16 and applied in 16
3) no I have never requested gcms notes
4) my younger brother is there. Has was born there in 1995 when my dad went for his theological seminary.
5 ) I have a upper second class honors degree. I didn't personally study at UOL. I studied at an affiliate center. In Pakistan. But the degree is accredited from the UOL with UOL stamps.
1) OK. Listen to consultants, if you wish, but don't depend on them. If you read around this forum you will see that with certificates and diplomas it is difficult to get a study permit. Go for full fledged degrees (MBA, Masters etc.). Colleges, again, lower the probability. Go to proper public universities.
2) OK - but now you have a gap from 16 to 18, you will need to explain that.
3) This is the most important thing you should do before you apply again. Get GCMS notes for both of your applications. The refusal does not have enough information and only these notes can help you fully understand what your application was lacking. Post here once you have your GCMS notes.
4) OK. But your dad is back in Pak?
5) OK.
You need to apply to universities yourself, if you ask me. Ask yourself what you want to study and it should be relevant to your field. For example, Masters in Marketing and you should apply to a university. It is not that college applicants don't get a permit, they do, but it has a lower probability.
Once you have an admissions letter, then you can apply for a study permit. But you need GCMS notes to understand why you were refused. The refusal letter is inadequate. If you wish to use a consultant (nothing wrong with that), you should use them only for
consultation - as another set of eyes but not someone who has the final word. You are in the best position to understand your application and you should put in the time to do so.
I'm just an applicant like you but from what I've learned/read, your application needs to be holistic. Every applicant needs to satisfy 2 major criteria: funds and ties to your country. You satisfy the funds but you also need to justify why getting this degree is important for you. You can do this by explaining how your employ-ability will increase in Pakistan and how it offsets the cost of the education. Visa officers seem to not like certificates/diplomas and if no other option is available to you, you need to justify how getting a certificate will help you - preferably with some sort of evidence. Explaining how a certificate helps your career in Pakistan is demonstrating stronger ties and that you have an incentive to return.