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Writing Task 1:
Question:
You are facing a problem with your neighbour. Explain the problem along with how long you have been facing the problem. Also explain what you should do about it.
Dear Henry,
I am writing this letter to discuss a persisting problem I have been facing owing to your vehicle parking habits.
Yesterday I noticed your SUV parked right in front of my home's main door. I have come to realise that this is not a one-off incident and, in fact, has been the case for a month now. In addition, your car was parked in a way that prevented more than one person from entering at the same time. Not only does this make it difficult for anyone to enter, but also makes exiting the home considerably problematic. The person impacted the most by this persisting problem is my mother who, as you already know, requires an electronic wheelchair for mobility.
While there are several other locations to park your car, I see far greater value in seeking a permanent solution. Therefore, I urge you to build a garage for yourself. Although I believe it’s your responsibility to finance a garage, I will be happy to meet you half-way.
Typically constucting a garage takes close to a week. Nevertheless, I will allow you a month to bring this issue to closure. This is, most definately, in the best of both our interests.
Regards,
Mark