My Covering Letter is Weak or Strong..please Read it and give me your suggestins

[Rabia7557]

November 30, 2012

The Visa Officer
Canadian High Commission
Islamabad
Pakistan


Dear Sir / Madam,

I am pleased to apply for the student visa of Canada and submitting my application for your consideration. Following are my qualifications which make me the deserving candidate for the study permit of Canada

Academic Qualifications
•Offer and Letter of admission from Cambrian College of Applied Arts & Technology.
•IELTS score report containing 5.5 Band.
• Secondary School Certificate.
•Higher Secondary School Certificate.


Financial Qualifications
•My Mother’s statements for the past four months showing stock account with value of $55000.
• My Father statements for the past four months showing stock account with value of $55000.
•Letter from Habib Bank offering two year loan of $60,000 for my education.
• Our property Evaluation showing the amount with value of
• My Father’s salary slips from Qatar (company name) showing the income of ………..per month.

Total Cost of my studies: $23000
(Fist Academic year Paid includes Health Insurance)
Living Cost: $20000 for 2 years
Funds Available: $60000

Other Qualifications
Police Character certificate

Travel Documents
Passport

Please consider my application for the study permit of Canada. I will be very thankful to you for this kind regard.


Sincerely,
(Signature)
Rabia Ali
Cell: +92-3xx-xxxxx

its mine pleasure share with me your thoughts???

 

[Dav1d0]

Hi

you may need to also talk about what you intend to do with your career after your study.

Best wishes

 

[Raj Grewal]

write longer about your course how it will enhance your skills. how these skills are in demand back home. companies in hometown that will hire you. some subjects within which may broaden your knowlwdge. why canada. why this college.

 

[Rabia7557]

write longer about your course how it will enhance your skills. how these skills are in demand back home. companies in hometown that will hire you. some subjects within which may broaden your knowlwdge. why canada. why this college.

Raj i have been mentioned all these things in SOP already... what you suggest should i mention in Covering latter as well???

 

[Raj Grewal]

i gave only a covering letter. consult a reputed agent their

 

[Rabia7557]

i gave only a covering letter. consult a reputed agent their

thanks allot