Is full disclosure good or bad?

[gdp7]

Good days guys! Would including this statement in the cover letter actually help me get approved or not?
“I am aware that career opportunities may present themselves. I also understand that I need to leave your territory before any undertakings of that matter can begin in accordance with your law. However, I am simply not interested in starting from scratch again. Hustling in the Lion City works great for me because of its proximity to my family, friends and financial investments back home.”

 

[scylla]

Good days guys! Would including this statement in the cover letter actually help me get approved or not?
“I am aware that career opportunities may present themselves. I also understand that I need to leave your territory before any undertakings of that matter can begin in accordance with your law. However, I am simply not interested in starting from scratch again. Hustling in the Lion City works great for me because of its proximity to my family, friends and financial investments back home.”

Not help. Makes it sound like you're coming here to find a job.

Jobs don't present themselves to visitors in Canada. It's next to impossible to find a job.

 

[gdp7]

Not help. Makes it sound like you're coming here to find a job.

Jobs don't present themselves to visitors in Canada. It's next to impossible to find a job.

Thank you for your reply @scylla ! Any ideas how I can improve this or just remove it?

 

[scylla]

Thank you for your reply @scylla ! Any ideas how I can improve this or just remove it?

Remove it.

 

[gdp7]

@scylla noted. Will this one work?
"It has always been my dream to travel the world. There are still a lot of countries that I want to explore that’s why I carefully obey immigration policies. My travel history shows how I lawfully practice staying within the visa authorization. Being a keen traveller, I make myself aware of each of the country’s legislations. In this case, I have no plans of using my entry to work or study because it’s a clear violation of your regulations as stated in your official website."

 

[bellaluna]

This is only my opinion, but florid cover letters really aren’t necessary. Your documents speak for themselves. If that’s the content you want to put in your cover letter, what value does it add to the stamps and visas you will submit?

Now if the cover letter for your travel history is a summary table of your trips that indicates the length of the trip, dates taken, destination, and purpose of travel—then that is added value. Also what I did in my application.

 

[gdp7]

This is only my opinion, but florid cover letters really aren’t necessary. Your documents speak for themselves. If that’s the content you want to put in your cover letter, what value does it add to the stamps and visas you will submit?

Now if the cover letter for your travel history is a summary table of your trips that indicates the length of the trip, dates taken, destination, and purpose of travel—then that is added value. Also what I did in my application.

Thank you @bellaluna ! Will make it straightforward. I put the summary of trips table in my travel history is that ok?

 

[bellaluna]

Thank you @bellaluna ! Will make it straightforward. I put the summary of trips table in my travel history is that ok?

Yes. That’s really all you need. Straightforward is best.

 

[gdp7]

Thank you everyone! Also which purpose would serve me best if I am doing a mix of visiting family, sightseeing and attending a conference, family visit or tourism?

 

[Bryanna]

Thank you everyone! Also which purpose would serve me best if I am doing a mix of visiting family, sightseeing and attending a conference, family visit or tourism?

What is the key purpose of your visit? Conference?

 

[gdp7]

What is the key purpose of your visit? Conference?

Hi @Bryanna ! To visit my aunt and sight see. Conference is just 1 day. Im staying for 18 days

 

[Bryanna]

Hi @Bryanna ! To visit my aunt and sight see. Conference is just 1 day. Im staying for 18 days

Family visit

 

[gdp7]

Family visit

Thank you @Bryanna !