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Hi every1......mention below is my profile:

10th- 45% [2005]
12th- 62% [2007]

Graduation (B.com)- 2007-2010 (that too in correspondence)

May2010 to Nov2012 (2.5years)- worked as a Manager in IIPM COLLEGE In councelling n backend profile.
Jan2013 to June2013 (6 mnths)- worked as a supervisor in production department in pvt firm.

1st refusal nov2012-
Reason was - propsed studies .......employment......language ability.....bla bla
Applied with Humber college for Global business Management course 2 years.

2nd refusal aug2013
Reason was- your course doesn't mk sense , don't think you are a genuine student who ll depart from canada after the completion of the course.
Applied to University of lethbridge for graduation as a second degree course 2 years.

Seniors plz advice me wot to do nxt.......I hv offer letter from Niagara college , prog- International business management (PGD)- SHLD I apply for 3rd time wid strong sop??????

Or my graduation is a problem- as I hv done in correspondence?????

Plz guys suggest me wot to do................
 
Graduation is fine.. Ur whole profile looks okay.. Only a few tricky things here n there..
The deal is.. Dat ur a graduate.. So u can only go for a post graduate certificate or a masters degree..
This is to show ur logical progression of studies..

Then.. Try n explain it in ur sop that how ur experiences in the past groomed u in a certain area n how u wanna benefit by higher studies in the same area..

Choosing a course that complements ur background is important here.. Slso, stay away from random courses in random colleges..

Ways ur ielts score?

And cud u plz mention the reasons for rejections in full.. Instead of the blah blah..
Dat wud giv a better idea.
 
Thnx 4 ur reply.....

Yeah the reason was - Your proposed studies are not reasonable in light of one or more of the following : past study, academic scores, language ability.

Ielts score is overoll-6.5
Listening-6.5, reading-6.0, writing-6.5, speaking-6.5




Graduation is fine.. Ur whole profile looks okay.. Only a few tricky things here n there..
The deal is.. Dat ur a graduate.. So u can only go for a post graduate certificate or a masters degree..
This is to show ur logical progression of studies..

Then.. Try n explain it in ur sop that how ur experiences in the past groomed u in a certain area n how u wanna benefit by higher studies in the same area..

Choosing a course that complements ur background is important here.. Slso, stay away from random courses in random colleges..

Ways ur ielts score?

And cud u plz mention the reasons for rejections in full.. Instead of the blah blah..
Dat wud giv a better idea.

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Thnx 4 ur answer....

Yeah the reason was -
 
One more thing.. Not to offend anybody or making ne acquisitions.. But i know a lot of sikh people.. Who get rejected when they apply for humber college.. I dnt get the logical relation here..

But my frens in humber say its full of punjabi folks.. :) :) :)
Cud vo b takin such things into account????

I mite b trying to push an anology here but just saying..
I mean ppl with a nice n neatly stacked profiles.. Rejected.. They were goin for humber..

Seems wierd though as this does not make ne sense..
 
Ok.. Ur sop shud also explain why u scored low.. U need to justify where u scored really low.. Try n be reasonable stating some genuine problems..

Also, show ur future plans in india how ur pg certi is gonna help u back here..

Ur ielts score?
 
Sweetalker said:
Ok.. Ur sop shud also explain why u scored low.. U need to justify where u scored really low.. Try n be reasonable stating some genuine problems..

Also, show ur future plans in india how ur pg certi is gonna help u back here..

Ur ielts score?

Ielts score is-6.5 overoll
Listening-6.5
Reading-6.0
Writing-6.5
Speaking-6.5

Shld I apply sweetalker this time wid Niagara coll???????
Yeah this time I am makng a strong SOP........
 
From your profile what i seen is that, u r graduation is a correspondance program .so ,for international education purpose canada will not condider any correspondance course as a valuable degree certificate.But most funny thing is ,some colleges from canada never consider such issues ,they are just doing business only..they never care about u r time,money and rejection.
So once u submit u r file in embassy they will varify it and finally u got rejected....u have to consult with some prifesional education consultants who can advice u welll
 
Go for a basic commerce based course.. Like a pg certi in business management..
Or better if u can choose a course wich relates to ur past exp.. That wud convince the vo
 
Sweetalker said:
Go for a basic commerce based course.. Like a pg certi in business management..
Or better if u can choose a course wich relates to ur past exp.. That wud convince the vo


Yeah ......I ll do d same. Thnx a lot sweetalker.