Can anyone please help advise me if I have interpreted my GCMS Notes correctly and if I have taken the right actions, that I did not provide the PROOF OF LIVING IN CANADA OF MY SISTER'S (in bold below) and my TWO BACHELOR DEGREES (in bold below) ; and the occupation I based on is not favorable for me with 1 year and 11 months of experience only (in bold below). I have provided the missing documents 1 month ago and waiting for the 2nd GCMS Notes to see if there is any update. I have also explained in the latest Web Form that if it counts until Mar 19, my years of experience in the NOC would be 3 years, if not, at time of initiating my application, I did provide another letter of work confirmation that I have had 4.5 years in Translation job but I just... didn't choose this one by mistake

. Do I miss any critical points in interpreting the Notes or is there anything else I should do asap to have my case move? Is there any hope in my case? By the way, my application has been >1 year already (AOR April 10 2018).
Truly appreciate your help!
Updated Date: 2018/04/25 13:48:48
Having analyzed this application based on the documents submitted by the applicant and the information contained in the file, I make the following recommendation.
________________________________________________________________ DOES NOT PROVIDE
PROOF OF LIVING AS A CITIZEN OR PERMANENT RESIDENT A11.2: REVIEW REQUIRED R75: FSW MINIMUM REQUIREMENTS – Appears Met R76: SELECTION CRITERIA – FSW POINTS/Review Required FSW points total: 58 Ready to Finalize RPRF: Complete
Comprehensive Ranking System (CRS) CRS Score at invitation to apply (ITA) 453 CRS points minimum score for round: 442 CRS score at application (APR): 453 / verified CRS score: 438 I have reviewed the following for CRS points: and SINGLE at APR PA gained points for 3+ year(s) Foreign Work Experience with “xxx company, edoc#211147703” CRS score has fallen below minimum for round: OFFICER PLEASE REVIEW PROOF OF LIVING CANADIAN SIBLING, DOES NOT PROVIDE PROOF OF LIVING IN CANADA AS A CITIZEN OR PERMANENT RESIDENT_________________________________________
INTEGRATED SEARCH (FOSS/GCMS)

A: TRV Valid Until: 2021-09-08) NO ADVERSE INFORMATION _________________________________________________________________________FAMILY COMPOSITION: SINGLE; never married No indication of previous marriages/cl partners No declared children MEDICALS: All valid for 6 months or more PASSPORT: All valid for 6 months or more
___________________________________________________________________________ WORK EXPERIENCE: Lock-in Date: 2018-04-10 Primary Occupation: NOC 1226 Conference and Event Planners EDUCATION CREDENTIAL(S) PROVIDED: Bachelor’s Degree: BUSINESS 2016-03 to 2018-01 – Project Lead (NOC: 1226) – at xxx company – eDoc# 211147703 – Letter dated 2018-04-10 appears to confirm employment in declared occupation throughout the specified period, and provides a job description which is consistent iwth the lead statement and main duties á set out in the declared NOC Category – Letter confirms salary of xxx – Letter confirms full/time employment; FSW Work: 1 year and 11 months – CRS Foreign work: 1 year and 11 months. FWS work: 1 year CRS Foreign work:
1 year(s) 11 months of 3 year(s) – REVIEW REQUIRED______________________________________________________________
SETTLEMENT FUNDS: Review Required Family of 1 requires CAD $12 164 NOTE: EDOC# 211142427
Updated Date: 2018/04/25 13:48:20
REVIEW TYPE: Program Assistant APPLICATION #: E000983221 REGULATION: FSW I have reviewed this application based upon the documents submitted by the applicant and the information contained in the file and note the following. MIN.SCORE 442 CRS SCORE:453 Principal Applicant Application Promoted: Existing UCI Primary Applicant Medical Attached to UCI: Yes Client Fees: Verified---- LANGUAGES----- Principal Applicant 1 – English-IELTS Met Threshold & Verified ----EDUCATION---- Primary Applicant 1-ECA report Verified on issuing agency website; foreign credential confirmed on ECA site ECA Canadian Equivalency Summary reported by issuing agency as TWO BACHELOR’S DEGREES (FOUR YEARS)
Foreign credential not provided ----POLICE CERTIFICATE---- Primary Applicant 1 – Vietnam police certificate: provided-NRT R10 OK Recommendation: Pass Criminality -----AGE---- Applicant’s age reviewed and No Change from ITA to e-PR DOCUMENTS SET FOR REVIEW: Client Information