HELP REGARDING WRITING A FORMAL RE-ASSESSMENT LETTER

[nasir raza]

PLEASE HELP WITH ENGLISH
Kindly made necessary grammatical changes, where require, so that visa officer can understand what I would like to convey...thanks a lot in advance...

Dear Visa Officer,

I, xxx have applied for Canadian permanent residency in 2010. My file No: xxx and my case was reviewed by you on 15th March 2012.

I have received letter from you stating that you have awarded me the following points:

Age = 10
Education = 20
first official Language = 10
Second official language= 00
Experience = 21
Arranged employment = 00
Adaptability = 04 (wife education)
Total => 65

Whereas, no points were awarded for a relative in Canada (my brother is a permanent resident of Canada since 2007) and I sent his permanent resident card & our B-form copy (family registration) with my application.

Therefore, for your kind re-consideration I am sending you again his permanent residency card with other following supporting documents.

1. B- form
2. Most recent Notice of Assessment from the Canada Revenue agency
3. bank statements

I hope you will give your kind consideration to my case for re-assessment.

Thanks in advance.



Yours sincerely,

 

[nasir raza]

please help me

 

[mute_man]

PROOF OF STATUS:
those who are PR:
Record of Landing (IM1000), or
Conformation of PR, or
PR card

those who are citizen:
Photo page of a Canadian Passport, or
Canadian Citizenship Card

PROOF OF RELATIONSHIP:
Birth, Marriage, Adoption Certificate HAVING COMMON PARENT in your certificate

PROOF OF RESIDENCY:
lease agreements
the most recent Notice of Assessment from the Canada Revenue Agency
an employer's letter conforming employment
monthly bills (one page of each bill)
credit card invoices and bank statements
[the evidence should show the relatives full name and address and MUST not more than 6 months old]

or try this one:
http://www.canadavisa.com/canada-immigration-discussion-board/-t82109.0.html

 

[hope_life]

Respected Sir/Madam
High Commission Name
Country name

DOCUMENTS FOR RECONSIDERATION OF FILE NO………………


I, xxx would humbly submit that I had applied for Federal Skilled Worker category under NOC XXXX in Month 2010. My file No is xxx and case was reviewed by you on 15th March 2012.

I have received a letter dated xxxx in which following poings have been awarded to me.

Age = 10
Education = 20
First Official Language = 10
Second official language= 00
Experience = 21
Arranged employment = 00
Adaptability = 04 (Wife Education)
Total => 65

I would to draw your attention towards no points have been awarded to me for my relative in Canada (My brother is a Permanent Resident of Canada since 2007) (If he is a citizen mention that instead of PR). In support of that I had sent following documents.
1. xxx
2. xxx
3. xxx
4. xxx
N xxx

I am hereby sending following updated documents for your kind consideration please.
1.
2.
3.
4.

I look forward to your goodself to kindly consideration my case for re-assessment.

Thanking You.

Yours sincerely,

Name
Dated………………