Hello friend ! Help please if possible

[Johnsnow 007]

10th 67%
12th 79%
B.C.A.(degree) 8 gpa no backlog
IELTS 6.5

So after my 3 year of degree course i am going for Advanced diploma course of 3 year so i have to show my purpose to VO for choosing this course. So i am asking that how can i make my SOP strong to let VO have no doubts on my visa application.

focus on your career plan and future plans, why doing an advance diploma after a degree, and how your prospect course relates to your previous course etc

 

[Ankd]

Have

focus on your career plan and future plans, why doing an advance diploma after a degree, and how your prospect course relates to your previous course etc

I have written a SOP but it is of 3 pages with 1500 words so i am confused that is it good or not. I am going to apply in next week

 

[Johnsnow 007]

Have

I have written a SOP but it is of 3 pages with 1500 words so i am confused that is it good or not. I am going to apply in next week

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