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canadapharmaist

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From: XXXXXXX (xxxxxxx @ yahoo.co.in)
Sub: Application for a placement in your research group.
Dear Dr. XXXXXX
I am an MSc Pharmacology graduate and have work experience in formulation development in XXXX pharmaceuticals Ltd, XXXX, UK. Currently I am working with XXXXX Laboratories, XXXXX, India as a research associate in solid orals formulation area. Consecutively to become the best scientist in formulation and targeted drug delivery system research area, I am considering applying to XoX's MSc in pharmacy program and would be fascinated joining your formulation (nanomaterials) development and targeted drug delivery system research group.
I found your interested research areas in your webpage and determined to do my research work under your guidance. I went through one of your papers, ‘xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx'', on pubmed website (http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/). I was really fascinated by your research and results, especially as I have similar sort of work experience, in the development of microparticles formulation (recombinant human insulin), in XXXX Pharmaceuticals Ltd.

It is marvelous to see how a molecule, inefficacious in conventional formulations, can do wonders when used in a Novel Drug Delivery System like 'micro/nanoparticles'. I feel the need to delve more deeply into my work experience on microparticles and do more research into areas of Micro/nanotechnology, to study in detail the development of micro/nanoparticles as carriers to deliver aniticancer agents, genes, vaccines, etc.

I did two research projects in my UG and PG, one in each, and produced reports. Since I've started my working carrier, I have great exposure for reviewing literature and generating work related protocols and reports. I also have a reason to be confident of my abilities as a teacher. I have taught and conducted practical sessions of pharmaceutics for undergraduates.

I chose XoX because of the exceptional research projects in the field of pharmaceutics. In other hand I am mostly captivated by your research area. If I get a placement in your research group, I would make a significant contribution to my chosen research area.

My previous project works:
• Preparation and evaluation of delayed release pantoprazole tablets (UG project)
• Investigation of nitric oxide (NO) role in cardiac disease treatment by using animal model (PG project).

If you need my resume and summary of my previous project reports please let me know.
I look forward for your reply with great eagerness.
Thanks for your time and cordial consideration


Regards,
 

canadapharmaist

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Sorry guys I am not good at writing a SOP and request letters.

So please check my letter and comment. Let me know if any grammar mistakes and spell mistakes

Point out if I need any changes in it??

Advanced thanks

Please reply soon b/c I need to send it by today evening.
 

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Consecutively to become the best scientist in formulation and targeted drug delivery system research area

What is the meaning of this line? literal meaning?
 

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abhi141989 said:
Consecutively to become the best scientist in formulation and targeted drug delivery system research area

What is the meaning of this line? literal meaning?
i mean in order to become the best scientist in that research area.........consectively is not a right word at..???
 

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Just wait for sometime.. I am reviewing it..
 

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Dear Dr. XXXXXX
I am an MSc Pharmacology graduate and have work experience in formulation development in XXXX pharmaceuticals Ltd, XXXX, UK (Mention the duration). Currently I am working with XXXXX Laboratories, XXXXX, India as a research associate in solid orals formulation area. In order to refine my knowledge and to become the better scientist in the field of formulation and targeted drug delivery system, I am applying to XoX's MSc in pharmacy program and would like to join your formulation (nanomaterials) development and targeted drug delivery system research group.

I found your interested research areas in your webpage and decided to do my research work under your guidance. I went through one of your paper, ‘'active targeting of dendritic cells with mannan-decorated PLGA nanoparticles'', online which is available at pubmed website (http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/). I was really fascinated by your research work and results, especially because as I have similar sort of work experience, in the development of microparticles formulation (recombinant human insulin), in XXXX Pharmaceuticals Ltd.

It is marvelous to see how a molecule, in efficacious in conventional formulations, can do wonders when used in a Novel Drug Delivery System like 'micro/nanoparticles'. I felt that i need to delve more deeply into my work experience on microparticles and do more research into areas of Micro/nanotechnology, for this very reason i have decided to study in detail about development of micro/nanoparticles as carriers to deliver aniticancer agents, genes, vaccines, etc.

I did two research projects in my UG and PG, one in each, and produced reports. Since I've started my working carrier, I have great exposure for reviewing literature and generating work related protocols and reports. I am also very confident of my teaching abilities as I have taught and conducted practical sessions of pharmaceutics for undergraduates students.

I chose XoX because of the exceptional research projects in the field of pharmaceutics. On the other hand I am mostly captivated by your research area. If I get an opportunity to be a part in your research group, It would be a great start for me, and would make a significant contribution to my chosen research area.

My previous project works:
• Preparation and evaluation of delayed release pantoprazole tablets (UG project)
• Investigation of nitric oxide (NO) role in cardiac disease treatment by using animal model (PG project).

If you need my resume and summary of my previous project reports please let me know.
I look forward for your reply with great eagerness.
Thanks for your time and cordial consideration


Regards,
 

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I hope it will be useful for you.
 

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Some grammatical corrections:

1. solid oral formulation
2. become a better scientist
3. on your webpage
4. use either 'because' or 'as' here --> especially as I have similar
5. I think the name of his paper should be written as ‘'Active Targeting of Dendritic Cells with Mannan-Decorated PLGA Nanoparticles'' as it is a title, do check his paper for confirmation.
6. Check the 'I' and capitalize them

Also the line "I found your interested research areas..", shouldn't it be 'interesting'?
 

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abhi141989

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Kashif995 said:
Some grammatical corrections:

Also the line "I found your interested research areas..", shouldn't it be 'interesting'?
No, it will be interested..
 

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He is talking about the professor's research interest.

then he should write, "i found your interested research area"

not "i found your interesting research area"

here interested is used from professor POV not the candidate POV i.e. i found your research area interesting..